11F- Unit 6 -Leisure Time by Elyse J. Martin https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb Advantages and disadvantages en-us 2021-11-24 06:43:40 UTC 2023-05-09 12:38:48 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4b8.png Read the essays attached then refer to the following IELTS Writing band descriptors focusing on Lexical resource and in particular bands 6&7. Do the essay's meet the requirements in this criteria? elyse34 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1891480211 2021-11-15 14:49:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1891480211 Your response will go here. elyse34 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910007839 2021-11-24 07:12:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910007839 Nguyễn Hồng Chương https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910008517 In the leisure time, I like to play football of some sports. Sometimes, I listen to music or Chat with friends.]]> 2021-11-24 07:12:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910008517 "Since I wasn't keen on doing activities, specially SPORT when I have free time I would rather surf the internet or moreover learning than doing physical activities outside my comfortable zone" -Thanh elyse34 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910009871 2021-11-24 07:13:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910009871 Leisure time https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910013355 In my leisure time, I either play video games or watch Youtube due to the current pandemic. But if I were able to do anything else, I would love to occasionally visit the book store.]]> 2021-11-24 07:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910013355 lechithanh01042007 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910020665 When it comes to leisure time there will be 2 kinds of answer given, Extrovert type and Introvert type. Extroverts usually give some outdoor activities like hang out, going to a party or even doing sport. Introverts have opposite idea of chilling inside their comfortable zone, surfing the internet or moreover improving their personal talent like drawing, learning, reading, etc. And there's me a mix, I both like to going out and stay in, I know it's strange but that's my style, it's really hard to say what i would like to do in my free time because it depends on many many things, If i have a good mood or if the weather is sunny, cloudy bla bla bla, you know what i mean]]> 2021-11-24 07:20:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910020665 Room 6: Truong Nhi, Thu Thuy, Minh Nhat, Thanh Thao tnhi2161 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910029644 They join clubs to improve themselves, help improve knowledge and better understand the outside world.  But sometimes some children abuse that beneficial work, turning them into harm.]]> 2021-11-24 07:26:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910029644 Room 1 lechithanh01042007 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910033070 Because like most of the other groups chose to do advantages, Group 1 will go with DrawBack]]> 2021-11-24 07:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910033070 room 2: tranvunganhalhbs6f03 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910036110 Leisure activities contributes to physical and mental fitness, helps to enhance communication skills by exposing hidden talents and encourages people to socialise and to develop new relationships with each other.
On the other hand, they do not spend enough time with their families. Focusing too much on outdoor activities makes them become extroverts; whereas youngsters forget the last time they sharing stories with their families.]]> 2021-11-24 07:30:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910036110 khu vực anh mất em ( room 4 ) https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910036122 its depend on the child personality and their love toward the activities that the club provide. If the child enjoy taking their time of to take part in the activities, working with others and achieve goals which they worked hard on, now thats the positive environment that brings advantage for the child future.]]> 2021-11-24 07:30:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910036122 Room 4 ( Nghi, Hảo, Hoàng, Thương, Ân ) nguyenlegianghi2610 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910036283 Personally, we think there are more positive sides than negative ones. One particular reason for this is taking part in clubs and other planned activities can help children increase their imagination and mind which also make their future more luminous. To our way of thinking, youngsters can also learn how to communicate with others and experience teamworking.]]> 2021-11-24 07:30:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910036283 Since today is Chuong's birthday I want to wish him more happy and more like a clown lechithanh01042007 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910056818 2021-11-24 07:42:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1910056818 lechithanh01042007 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1911605429 Many people believe that it is significant to use spare time for joining the clubs and do activities those are already been organized. The others prefer that it is vital to relax the mind during spare time. In my opinion, I agree that people should use leisure time for activities which improve the mind.]]> 2021-11-25 01:49:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1911605429 elyse34 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1911623299 2021-11-25 01:59:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1911623299 Tran Trung Kien https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1911630005  I agree to the opinion about it is good for children if they join some clubs or other planned activities.Because clubs and planned activities can make children to good at team-working.They can have some new friends.Some people believe clubs and other planned activities are good for children.But they have some disadvantages,the disadvantages are children may lost their independent and can't do what they wanted to do.]]> 2021-11-25 02:03:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1911630005 Trương Ngọc Yến Nhi tnhi2161 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913381107 2021-11-26 00:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913381107 Chương , Tường https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913391294 2021-11-26 00:45:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913391294 Ngoc Khanh https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913392279 These days some parents prefer to encourage their children to attend specifics clubs in their free time. In this way, kids should have planned leisure-time activities. 
Children can benefit some advantages of attending clubs. First, they can improve their skills in some subjects like painting, sports, and music and even be a specialist in these contexts. This can help them make money now and in the future. Second, children will be able to find different friends if they are present in the classes. In this manner, they will be able to develop their social skills and become well-developed people.
Unfortunately, there are also some disadvantages to this. One reason is that registration for the clubs can be expensive. Also, there would be too much activities they have to finish in those clubs. In addition, it can be tiring and boring to do activities for a relatively long time and have no variety of choices to spend free time. The children who have this schedule will not have enough time to follow their favorites and visit their relatives and family.
In conclusion, spending most of the children’s free time according to a preplanned schedule has some advantages like improvement of their 
technical skills and developing their social skills. However, I think they should have enough time to play, watch TV, relax and be with their family and relatives.
]]> 2021-11-26 00:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913392279 lechithanh01042007 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913394138 Nowadays, living in a stressful society, Leisure time is crucial for refreshing the human body. However, people have different opinions about how to effectively utilize leisure time. Some people engage in mind-developing activities while others simply wish to rest. It is still a controversial regarding the best way to use their spare time. People who advocate in using their spare time for brain activities may support their ideas that these activities would help their body healthier and living longer. According to a recent study that has implemented by WHO, reading books and playing puzzles help human stay away from many mental diseases such as madness or Parkinson as well as decrease the probability of doing suicide that caused by stress and work-pressure in their daily lives . Moreover, people could derive a great number of insights that come from books lead to efficient work performances. However, there are exist individuals prefer resting for their spare time. Obviously, the main reason is that everyone have to work diligently and their minds are already heavily occupied during occupation, so they need time after work to recharge their energy. For these people, after working day, Doing any mind-activities just make worst result in work efficiency reduction, so light activities should be the better choices for them, for example, watching TV, going fishing or jogging. In a Nutshell, I strongly recommend people to allocate the leisure time rationally. Mind-improving activities and quiet resting are both useful in their own ways, and people should choose the kinds of activity that can help them relax the most.]]> 2021-11-26 00:48:14 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913394138 ngọc hân ninh https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913398208 2021-11-26 00:51:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913398208 nguyenlegianghi2610 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913398919 Many individuals believe that sending their children in their free time to take part in clubs and planned activities can be advantageous. In this essay, I will debate both sides of the argument.
Personally, I think there are more positive sides than negative ones. One particular reason for this is taking part in clubs and other planned activities can help children increase their imagination and mind which also make their future more luminous. To my way of thinking, youngsters can also learn how to communicate with others and experience teamwork.]]> 2021-11-26 00:52:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913398919 nguyenthithuthuylhbs19 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913399720 Nowadays a few guardians like to urge their kids to go to explicit classes in their extra energy. Thusly, children ought to have arranged recreation time exercises. In this article, I clarify a few benefits and weaknesses of this and offer my own viewpoint. 

Kids can help a few benefits of going to various classes. To start with, they can work on their abilities in certain subjects like artwork, sports, and music and even be an expert in these unique situations. This can assist them with bringing in cash now and later on. Second, kids will actually want to track down various companions on the off chance that they are available in the classes. Thusly, they will actually want to foster their social abilities and become all around evolved individuals. 

Shockingly, there are additionally a few disservices to this. One explanation is that enlistment for the classes can be costly. Furthermore, drive to and from their place can be tedious and this is an issue both for kids and their folks. Additionally, having a specific arrangement with the expectation of complimentary time powers children to run from one movement to another. Thusly, there is no adaptability and I think leisure time loses its idea. Moreover, it tends to be tiring and exhausting to do exercises for quite a while and have no assortment of decisions to invest free energy. The youngsters who have this timetable won't have sufficient opportunity to follow their top picks and visit their family members and family. 

Taking everything into account, burning through the greater part of the childrens extra energy as per preplanned plan enjoys a few benefits like improvement of their specialized abilities and fostering their social abilities. Notwithstanding, I figure they ought to have sufficient opportunity to play, stare at the TV, unwind and be with their family and family members.]]> 2021-11-26 00:52:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913399720 Thảo, Xuân :"))) https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913402368 I agree that joining the club has many advantages. Young people today like to join extracurricular clubs. Because it can help us gain more experience and develop our talents. When we join the club, we will show all our abilities, can confidently communicate with people. In another view, youth must have their free time to be themselves, think and read, also, they need to play without any plan that causes numerous limitations and also makes them aggressive. They need to 
spend their free time like this because their mental health can grow and have an excellent function. In general, young people today should be encouraged to do extracurricular activities rather than stay at home clicking on the phone, playing games. Because it brings a lot of benefits to people from health and physical.
]]> 2021-11-26 00:54:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913402368 Khang phamduygiakhanglhbs https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913403697 2021-11-26 00:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913403697 Thu Hien https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913406418 Today most of the parents think that their children should have many free-time activities, such as classes out of school time, joining sports clubs and many other curricular. Children often feel that they do not have any leisure time activity. In my opinion it has both advantage and disadvantage.
There are many advantages to taking part in extracurricular classes. First of all, when children fill up their time with one of activity, they can understand that neither what they like and what they dislike. Also they find their way for studying their favorite field and suitable job for their future. The second one is that they can learn and experience team working. The third is that they can be sociable in this way because they communicate with their peers and develop their sociable skill and make many friends. And maybe one of the important reason is that they can fill their time with useful activity instead of waste their time and getting into trouble and their parents can be sure that their children are not in danger of bad situation.
On the other hand, it could be dangerous for children to join different classes which they do not like them and join them because of their parent's force.
It can lead to many serious mental and health problems such as depression and their character will remain under develop. In addition, they need free time to play freely and use their imaginations. Also they have stress when they run from activity to other activity.
To sum up, although it has many advantages, it's impossible to ignore disadvantages. It needs to have balance to be useful.

]]> 2021-11-26 00:58:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913406418 Phong, Chí Quân https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913406734 Children should spend quality time in extracurricular activities apart from studying. Some people think that leisure activities must include educational programs while some others including me, think that we do not require mixing up education with leisure activities.


According to some people, if children have to learn faster and efficiently, they should include some educational programs as part of their activities. They think that by keeping them busy in such kinds of activities we can help improve their skills and students become more active in their studies.


In my opinion, we should draw a line between the student's education and his extra activities. Both of them should not be mixed up. Students nowadays have lengthy coursework to study entire year. They hardly manage time for their extra activities and so if we include educational activities as part of their leisure activities then they may feel bored. They also require changes in their life and by providing some new creative tasks in their free time it is possible to make them refreshed and relaxed. I think that it also helps to improve their skills that actually required for their educational programs.

Moreover, letting children participate in activities such as singing, dancing, painting, etc. helps improve children's thinking ability and creativity. By participating in these types of activities, students can know their inner abilities and strength. Also, some of the physical activities like sports and exercise keep them fit and healthy and help them to maintain their physical strength.

In the conclusion, we should not force children to engage in the leisure activities which we want them to do. Let them decide on their own which activities suit them most.]]> 2021-11-26 00:58:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913406734 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913408365 These days some parents usually encourage their children to attend some social clubs/ classes in their free time. In that way, children could have planned leisure-time activities. In this essay, I will explain some advantages and disadvantages of this and give my own opinion.

Children can benefit some advantages of attending different clubs. First, they can improve their skills in some subjects like painting, sports, music and even improve their strongest advantages . This can help them make money now and in the future. Second, children will be able to find new friends at the clubs. In this manner, they will be able to develop their social skills and become well-developed people.

Unfortunately, there are also some disadvantages to this. One reason is that joining the club can be expensive. In addition, commute to and from their place can be time-consuming and this is a problem both for the children and their parents. Also, having a certain plan for free time forces kids to take part in activities that they could hardly enjoy . In this way, I think free time loses its concept. In addition, it can be tiring and boring to do activities for a relatively long time and have no variety of choices to spend free time. The children who have this schedule will not have enough time to follow their favorites and visit their relatives and family.

In conclusion, spending most of the children’s free time to preplanned schedule has some advantages like improvement of their technical skills and developing their social skills. However, I think they should have enough time to play, watch TV, relax and be with their family and relatives.
]]> 2021-11-26 00:59:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913408365 very gud essays, I approved lechithanh01042007 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913408979 2021-11-26 00:59:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913408979 Trần Minh Trọng https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913412974 Nowadays, children tends to spend more time in leisure activities apart from studying. Some people think that leisure activities should include educational programs while some others, including me, think that mixing up education with leisure activities is insignficant.


For some people, if children have to learn faster and efficiently, they should include some educational programs as part of their activities. They think that by keeping them busy in such kinds of activities we can help improve their skills and students become more active in their studies.


In my opinion, we should make a difference between the students' activities and their break time. Both of them should not be considered the same. Students nowadays have lengthy classes to study entire year. They hardly manage time for their extra activities and so if we include educational activities as part of their leisure activities then they may feel even more exhausted. They also require changes and by providing some new creative tasks in their free time it is possible to make them apealing and interesting. I think that it also helps to improve their skills that actually required for their educational programs.

Moreover, letting children participate in activities such as singing, dancing, painting, etc. helps developing children's thinking ability and creativity. By participating in these types of activities, students can know their inner abilities and strength. Also, some of the physical activities like sports and exercise keep them fit and healthy and help them to maintain their physical strength.

In the conclusion, we should not force children to engage in the leisure activities which we want them to do. Let them decide on their own which activities suit them most.]]> 2021-11-26 01:03:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913412974 Quân phamduygiakhanglhbs https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913414812 2021-11-26 01:04:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913414812 Ngan Ha, Bao Hoang tranvunganhalhbs6f03 https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913416197 In modern society, youngsters would rather spend their leisure time in clubs and social activities. They believe it may help them reduce the stress after having hard-working classes. Otherwise, participating in clubs has both benefits and drawbacks.

Nowadays, teenagers mostly become extroverts because of joining planned activities. Clubs have been popular in the students' community for a long time, where students can be completely creative and energetic. In addition, the majority say that they can learn soft skills and experience work they have not done before. Taking part in activities helps pupils enhance their job applications. Therefore, they have more opportunities to be agreed in potential companies and corporations. According to Vnexpress, the percentage of undergraduates who joined clubs easily got a  job is estimated to be 80%. 

On the other hand, there are some demerits in joining clubs. Initially, there is a reduction in spending time with families. Focusing too much on outdoor activities makes them busy. It might be impossible; however, they could not remember the last time eating and shared stories with their families. Furthermore, distracting their study path is an essential cause. Some undergraduates concentrate on their clubs excessively, having a low score on their test which leads to the failure of passing class. 

In conclusion, clubs and planned activities are useful for students in every aspect; in contrast, they need to balance it with their studying career. ]]> 2021-11-26 01:05:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913416197 Trúc Linh https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913428529 These days, kids will in general invest more energy in relaxation exercises separated from examining. Certain individuals feel that relaxation exercises ought to incorporate instructive projects while some others, including me, imagine that stirring up schooling with recreation exercises is insignficant. 

For certain individuals, in case youngsters need to learn quicker and productively, they ought to incorporate some instructive projects as a component of their exercises. They believe that by keeping them occupied in such sorts of exercises we can assist with working on their abilities and understudies become more dynamic in their investigations. 

As I would see it, we should have an effect between the understudies' exercises and their break time. The two of them ought not be viewed as something very similar. Understudies these days have extensive classes to concentrate on whole year. They scarcely oversee time for their additional exercises thus assuming we incorporate instructive exercises as a feature of their recreation exercises then they might feel significantly more depleted. They additionally require changes and by giving some new innovative assignments in their spare energy it is feasible to make them apealing. I feel that it additionally assists with further developing their abilities that really needed for their instructive projects. 

Additionally, allowing kids to take part in exercises like singing, moving, painting, and so on helps developing children's reasoning capacity and inventiveness. By partaking in these kinds of exercises, understudies can know their internal capacities and strength. Likewise, a portion of the proactive tasks like games and exercise keep them fit and solid and assist them with keeping up with their actual strength. 

In the end, we ought not compel youngsters to take part in the relaxation exercises which we need them to do. Allow them to settle on their own which exercises suit them most.]]> 2021-11-26 01:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elyse34/cuw1t35jvlvm4bxb/wish/1913428529