Young people have a stronger need to shop than others => lead to Higher store sales + .brands must be.more creative in products to attract young people => promoting Local economic growth + variety of items

Idea 2: Social Interaction and Community Building:

When doing shopping malls, young people might share their shopping experiences to others => create a bond between them + make friends more easily => greater sense of community

Idea 3: Personal Development and Skills Enhancement:

Through doing shopping, young people can broaden their shopping experience to avoid buying counterfeit goods + financial management skills => which can improve their personal development and skills => it is a good way to grow on the journey to becoming a real adult.

• CHIA THEO ĐỐI TƯỢNG (OBJECTS)

  • Young people

  • shopping malls

  • Sellers

  • Owners

    
    

    CHIA THEO KHÍA CẠNH (ASPECTS)

    + Work and job

    + Education

    + HEALTH (MENTAL HEALTH + PHYSICAL HEALTH)

    + ENVIRONMENT

    + ENTERTAINMENT

    + CULTURE

    + ECONOMY/ FINANCE (MONEY)

    + LAWS/ CRIMES (SECURITY)

    + TECHNOLOGY/ MEDIA

    + SOCIETY (RELATIONSHIPS)

    
    

FIRSTLY ,...........

SECONDLY, ..........

Nguyên nhân: Indeed/ In fact

Kết quả: Therefore/ Hence/ Thus

Kết quả cuối cùng: As a result/ As a consequence (-)

Idea 1: There is a variety of entertainment ........in shopping malls including cinemas, shops as well as restaurants,... → Young People who have to work with computers regularly can go out to meet their friends instead of COLLAPSING IN FRONT OF A SCREEN (E18) → This would lead .......young..MEMBERS OF SOCIETY (E02) to HAVE A FULFILLING SPIRITUAL LIFE → Going shopping malls as a way to REDUCE THE RISK OF MENTAL HEALTH PROBLEMS (E42) + CONTINUE A PRODUCTIVE WORKING LIFE (E30).

THERE ARE SEVERAL ............ FIRSTLY, Reducing the risk of mental health problems is the fantastic benefit that can be gained from going shopping malls for young people. In fact, there are a variety of entertaining forms in shopping malls for young people WHO............ to go out to meet their friends instead of collapsing in front of a screen all day. As a result, young members of society would have a fulfilling spiritual life, which will be likely to help young shopping malls - goers recharge enough powers to continue a productive working life.

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Idea 2: The increasing PRESENCE of shopping malls would cause (help)many young people to HAVE MORE JOB OPPORTUNITIES → LANDING A PART-TIME JOB would help them receive AN ADDITIONAL INCOME (E06), which ENHANCE THEIR QUALITY OF LIFE (E48) IN BETTER ECONOMIC CIRCUMSTANCES (E06) → This will be likely to promote THE ECONOMIC AND EMPLOYMENT SITUATION (E02) + MAKE A POSITIVE CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY (E10).

Idea 3: Shopping malls ACT AS LANDMARKS OR TALKING POINT FOR (E08) members of society REGARDLESS OF THEIR CULTURAL BACKGROUNDS OR AGES (E44) → By meet (meeting) different kinds of people and exchange their skills, many young people would learn IMPORTANT LIFE SKILLS ARE NOT BEING TAUGHT IN (E01) school such as selling skills as well as communication skills → This would help them DRIVE THEIR WORK SUCCESSFULLY in the future.

Idea 2 : shopping becomes a leisure activity or a pleasant outing ( E28 ) ->- Experience entertainment options such watching movies , food courts WHICH attracts many young people-> offers an opportunity to meet new people -> builds meaningful relationships-> boosts of self-confidence and social skills

YOUNG PEOPLE

(CHỌN 1 TRONG 3 LÀM MAIN IDEA)

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CỦNG CỐ

The positive effects of many young people going to shopping malls.

Idea 1:

provide THE COMFORTABLE ENVIRONMENT, THE VARIETY OF GOODS AND ATTRACTIONS (E28) such as café shops or cinemas, WHICH are strongly attractive to young people.. ->......... people can find almost anything in the shopping malls ->Going shopping BECOMEs A LEISURE ACTIVITY OR A PLEASANT OUTING (E28) -> help young people unwind and escape from daily pressures ..

Idea 2:

Young people is LIKELY TO USUALLY/ FREQUENTLY/ TYPICALLY LACK THE PATIENCE TO CAREFULLY CONSIDER OPTIONS BEFORE ( E39) purchase when it comes to shopping online -> because they ARE FACED WITH A WORLD OF unknown-quality goods and prices (E41) from the internet market -> Going to the shopping mall can HELP them have the opportunities to ENGAGE FACE-TO-FACE WITH the shopkeepers ( E03) and choose the products which they assumed high-quality goods -> avoid buying poor quality stocks from the Internet markets

Idea 3: Going to shopping from young people young shopping MALL-goerS can CONTRIBUTE TO THE SOCIETY OR THE ECONOMY AS A WHOLE (E14)

they PAY MONEY TO society THROUGH THE TAX SYSTEM (E29) when buying products at the shopping malls WHERE/ WHICH sells goods , such as food store or souvenirs ,relying on customers coming to the shopping centers, such as food store or souvenirs -> this should -> WOULD RESULT IN A THRIVING ECONOMY (E16)

N-GOER (n)

Library-goers

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Idea 1: THE COMFORTABLE ENVIRONMENT, THE VARIETY OF GOODS AND ATTRACTIONS (E.28)+ provide products of premium quality and at a reasonable price => Young people compare various brands before purchasing items that best suit their needs => act as an efficient time-saver FOR YOUNG PEOPLE WHO ............... .

Idea 2: shopping malls now provide young people WITH a wide array of entertainment options, such as cinemas, arcades, and recreational activities WHICH CAN MEET THE DEMAND/ SUIT THE NEED OF YOUNG GENERATIONS and also offer a safe and comfortable space where young people can meet, dine, and engage in recreational activities, community engagement and cultural exchange. Shopping malls serve young people, they often host events, exhibitions, and performances that celebrate local traditions and showcase diverse cultures. => BECOME A LEISURE ACTIVITY OR A PLEASANT OUTING (E.28) => MENTAL HEALTH

......TSAO SHOPPING MALLS CUNG CẤP VIỆC LÀM.......---> Shopping malls provide numerous job oportunities for young people, such as offering part-time or full-time and entry-level positions to young people -> gain work experience and earn income, financial independence, support themselves and contribute to their households

Idea2: entertainment

Shopping malls offer a wide range of entertainment options, including cinemas, game arcades, food courts, and themed events. Young people can meet friends, participate in group activities, and engage in social events ->PROVIDE GREAT SOURCES OF ENTERTAINMENT [E33] -> help young people relieve stress and improve their mental well-being; provides a break from pressures, allowing them to relax and enjoy themselves ----> CHỌN 1 TRONG 3

EXPECTED TEST DATE:

MOTIVATION/ PURPOSE (optional):

CONCERNS:

Time: 12/2025

Motivation: du học

Concern: reading + idea

Time: 2026

Motivation: du học

Concern:

Expected test date: tháng 3 năm 2025

Purpose: học thạc sĩ

Concern: speaking, writing: idea

Expected test date: Giữa 2026

Motivation/ purpose: chứng chỉ đầu ra, tiềm việc.

Concerns:

• Aim : 7.0

• Tháng 2-3 năm 2025

• Purpose : thi đại học

• Writing : ideas | Reading : từ vựng hạn chế

ESSAY MẪU

BOOST

Thời gian thi: Tháng 1-2025

Mục đích: Chuẩn đầu ra đại học; phục vụ học tập, nghiên cứu, du học

Concern: Phát âm; khó để tự bật ra idea khi đang speaking. Từ vựng hạn chế, chưa tìm ra phương pháp học từ vựng phù hợp, hoặc đôi khi biết từ đấy nhưng không áp dụng được vào speaking hoặc writting.

WH- QUESTION

PAST - PRESENT - FUTURE

DEPENDS. In terms of ..

OVERALL-INTENSIVE (2 months): sĩ số ít

HIGH ACHIEVERS (2.5 months):

INTENSIVE 1-1

INTENSIVE 1-1 TIẾT KIỆM: học hoàn toàn qua Group chat + File PDF

listening + reading + writing