Concise

The message written in the letter must be concise and to the point.

 

 

Clearly and concisely means choosing your words deliberately and precisely, constructing your sentences carefully to eliminate deadwood, and using grammar properly .It also require us to use active verbs rather than passive verbs ,keep your sentence average length low,use simple words rather than complex ones

Manager

Freedom Digital 

Sungai Way Free Trade Industrial Zone, 

47300 Petaling Jaya, 

Selangor.

 

14 July 2021

 

Irman Hakim Bin Kasturi 

Lot 3 Lorong 13 

47300 Petaling Jaya,

Selangor. 

 

Dear Irman Hakim,

 

We are appreciating your hard work that have been contribute to our company especially in your role as sales team.

 

We have just received a letter informing me that there will be a basic pay deduction which is 20%. The reason stated in the letter is because of the sales have been decreased for two consecutive quarters.

 

We would like to highlight that being there is few members of our team are underperforming. We are not satisfied with your performance, especially because that you have the potential to do better. We hope you guys can work together and improve the performance after this.

 

We anticipate that there will be a progress will be show by your team. We encourage for you to retain the entire team however we do hope for your consideration to make an effort for your team to show a progress in terms of your performances in future.

 

Sincerely,

 

NUR ATHILA NORANI 

MANAGER 

FREEDOM DIGITAL

·      Catalogues for The Womanly Yifu apparel.

·      Other clothing ranges manufactured.

·      Range of clothing for older women.

·      Wholesale prices.

Details 
Your name and address
- Nurul Amyrah Saad 
City Lady Apparel, 
12/22, Jalan Equestrian Off Persiaran Sukan, Section 13 40100 Shah Alam, Selangor.  

 Supplier’s name and address   Miss Rainie Yang, 
Marketing Manager, 
The Womanly Yifu, Block 15/12, Eng Shang Road, 105, Songshan District., Taipei City, Taiwan  

1.       Gain my a new skills

2.       Boost my networking abilities

3.       Become an Expert in my Field

Soft skills

1.       Communication i will also likely need to be a good listener

2.       Team work Whether i will be doing a lot of team projects or simply attending a few departmental meetings,

3.   Time management 

1.       Have a large of networking relationship

2.       Gain many of certification and new skill

3.       Improving presentation and communication skill

 

Softskill

1.       Team building

2.       Leadership

3.       Friendly and positive 

1. Improving skills throughout years in computer hardware, software knowledge, networking skills, and teamwork skills. Working in the same role for years to gain experience should be different as skill improvement becomes a major concern.

2. Gain a lot of knowledge from the various industrial sectors that are related to IT field. For example, becoming Software developer, Network Engineer, IT Support Engineer, and Manufacturing Engineer

3. Getting certified by the company. For example, the company sponsored for the workshop training to get extra certification.

My 3 soft skill

1. Fast Learner

2. Organized

3. Willing to learn new things

·        To achieve higher position

·        To take a lot of skills and experience

·        To share some knowledge to the people who need help

3 Soft Skills

·        Hardworking

·        Leadership

·        Teamwork

3 professional goals

·         To improve expertise in financial management, compliance techniques and transportation modes as a logistics specialist 

Soft skills

·         Multitasking

·         Customs documentation (Analytical Skills)

·         Inventory management skills (attention to detail)

2. Self - control personality

3. Positive attitude 

4. Calmness / Patience