https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1 Revising with S.T.A.R Strategy (Class) en-us 2018-04-23 13:10:46 UTC 2021-02-01 02:19:19 UTC hello@padlet.com MrKelvinChan https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254369034 One day, Jack and his parents went to the food court to eat their favourite food. The food are delicious and tasty. Jack was hungry and Jack gobbled down his food with a big mouth. An aunt came and took the cans. Jack scolded her. As she walked away, she was crying sadly. Jack's mother noticed about what Jack did. His mother told his father about what Jack did just now. His parents scolded him and he was grounded for a day.]]> 2018-04-23 13:11:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254369034 MrKelvinChan https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254379834 Jack's parents were angry. Jack started to cry and say that he would not do it again. His father asked him not to do it again in the hawker centre as it was shameful. Jack felt sorry. Jack finally knew his mistake. He learned his lesson. When he was in the hawker centre again, he did not do his mistake again. He learned his lesson in the end.]]> 2018-04-23 13:28:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254379834 MrKelvinChan https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254396601 1. How did this exercise help to improve the piece of writing?

2. What did you find easy about this exercise?

3. What did you find difficult about this exercise?

]]> 2018-04-23 13:55:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254396601 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682754 S1 - dissapointed
S2 - will make sure it will never happen again
S3 - embarrassing]]> 2018-04-24 05:07:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682754 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682791 S1 furious
S2 was in tears
S3 embarrassing 
S4 apologest
S5 would not do it ever again ]]> 2018-04-24 05:08:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682791 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682806 S1- disappointed 
S2- not commit his mistake again 
S3- parents 
S4- was in tears]]> 2018-04-24 05:08:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682806 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682820 S1 :apologised 
S2:said 
S3:told 
S4:and
S5:make hi]]> 2018-04-24 05:08:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682820 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682901 S1 said
S2 told]]> 2018-04-24 05:09:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682901 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682937 Annoyed S1

]]> 2018-04-24 05:09:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682937 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682939 S1 said sadly
S2 embarrassing ]]> 2018-04-24 05:09:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682939 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682957 S1 furious
S2 was in tears
S3 embarrassing 
S4 apologise
S5 would not do it again]]> 2018-04-24 05:09:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254682957 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254683227 Jack parents were furious
His farther asked him not to  doit  agin in the hawker centre as it was embarrassing.]]> 2018-04-24 05:12:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254683227 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684279 It was a bit difficult because we need to find things to change.]]> 2018-04-24 05:22:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684279 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684286 1.we could improve on our spelling and grammar]]> 2018-04-24 05:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684286 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684288 3.)because I cannot identify the passage too much

]]> 2018-04-24 05:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684288 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684299 1. It helps to change the words
2. Easy to change words
3. It’s difficult because it’s not easy to find w]]> 2018-04-24 05:22:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684299 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684316 I think I have done a great job on doing this thing and very proud of here in my group because they worked together.
To mr Chan ]]> 2018-04-24 05:22:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684316 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684333 1) We can change the dead words in to strong words.]]> 2018-04-24 05:22:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684333 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684357 I found that it was ]]> 2018-04-24 05:23:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684357 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684627 2018-04-24 05:25:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254684627 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254690557 2018-04-24 06:10:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254690557 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254710979 2018-04-24 07:47:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/254710979 https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/365495221 I will invade Singapore at 2023.]]> 2019-06-04 07:02:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mrkelvinchan/3RPSSTAR1/wish/365495221