6th Grade Writing padlet by Henry Hernandez https://padlet.com/HenryHernandez/6feedback Please offer me feed back on my pieces. en-us 2017-11-28 18:55:17 UTC 2018-06-19 17:43:54 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png Realistic Fiction Narrative 11/30/17 24eruiz https://padlet.com/HenryHernandez/6feedback/wish/211998404 A strength of Mean People Don't deserve friends is to teach the reader a lesson.That lesson is to teach that when your rude to people your only stuck in one position and that was only to be mean. But in the story that changed. I liked your language about brushing your teeth, and then eating as fast as a cheetah. Overall your story was very good but try not to use as fast as a cheetah too much. I wish for you that your writing will be even better than before.(Not saying your writings bad but could use a bit of improvement.)

]]> 2017-11-30 18:19:06 UTC https://padlet.com/HenryHernandez/6feedback/wish/211998404 Realistic Fiction Narrative:11/28/17 24kromanyshyn https://padlet.com/HenryHernandez/6feedback/wish/212018115 Nice job Henry! I liked how your piece was fun to read! You really clarified his
personality as well! But what I would have done is maybe made the story longer because you were able to tell how he changed, but maybe next time have something bigger make him change. Other wise, it was a really good piece!


]]> 2017-11-30 18:53:10 UTC https://padlet.com/HenryHernandez/6feedback/wish/212018115 Ethen Ruiz https://padlet.com/HenryHernandez/6feedback/wish/267834166 Yo! The story about your dog was pretty good. My star is that you added some detail about how you took your dog out for walks and how you said she's scared of cats. My 2nd star is the description was okay.My wish is to add inner thoughts and maybe a bit stronger description.]]> 2018-06-19 17:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/HenryHernandez/6feedback/wish/267834166