Week 9 BS Assessment Workshop by Study Group Pre-Arrival Learning https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8 Read each of the following paragraphs, and provide feedback for them to see if the paragraphs are good or needs improving. If they needs improving, please make a suggestion on how to make them better. en-us 2021-11-24 13:55:10 UTC 2021-11-24 14:44:41 UTC hello@padlet.com Sustainability is part of the corporate social responsibility which emphasize the potential development and its growth of an organization through various business practices in the areas of environment, society, and economics. Corporate social responsibility refers to the commitments of the company to bring positive impacts to the society. It relates to the corporate social responsibilitySustainability is a vital practice for the long-term development of the organization, hence helping to promote a positive image in society. The goal of corporate responsibility is to contribute positively to all stakeholders as well as add value for the organisation itself in a sustainable way. Therefore, sustainability is intimately bound up with social responsibility concerning the environment, people and economy. pre_arrival_learning https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910664069 2021-11-24 13:57:06 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910664069 For the environmental domain, it is generally believed that it would be beneficial for the company to implement some policies to minimize their environmental impacts and alleviate the carbon emission towards the society. Examples include reducing packaging waste, recycling materials, and using sustainable energy sources (Joshi & Li, 2016). For instance, according to Walmart (2009), they launched three programs with environmental sustainability such as powering machines with renewable energy, creating zero waste and selling sustainable products. Also, they set the objectivity by powering around 36% with renewable energy and targeting to achieve 100% by 2035. Therefore, the company could be able to meet the requirements of the global agreements and the protection law on the environmental aspect and it would uphold the reputation of the company by these actions (Flammer, 2013). pre_arrival_learning https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910664832 2021-11-24 13:57:29 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910664832 By the concerns on the social aspect, the company must take considerations on diverse groups of stakeholders when making decisions. A report from Patagonia 2020 stated that 87% of their production lines are Fair Trade Certified. Additionally, over 64000 workers are benefited from the Fair Trade program. It is reflected that the company is not only focusing on the mitigation of the negative impacts but also creating positive well-being for the society in regards to sustainable development. pre_arrival_learning https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910665542 2021-11-24 13:57:46 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910665542 Regarding the economics perspective, Companies could save the financial cost when adapting an effective sustainability strategy. As consumer expectations rise, the existing products and services of the companies need to be upgraded to meet their needs. With the considerations of the environmental issues are growing increasingly severe, people are more inclined to purchase green items. A report from Tesla showed that their upcoming factories aim at a more sustainable design and set up from the ground up. Hence, a stricter standard of energy level and water usage per vehicle will be implemented. For the sake of maintaining sustainability, the company could strategize and contribute to the new production methods, the innovations of new products and services are also encouraged. Additionally, sustainability is the long-term development for the company. pre_arrival_learning https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910666195 2021-11-24 13:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910666195 The concept of sustainability is closely linked to the business. The sustainability approaches of the organization have favourable influences on both the business and society. It improves the social duties of businesses and ensures their contribution to society. Not only can sustainability development improve the reputation of a company, but it can also increase profits. Ultimately, all these elements are considered to be indispensable factors for the long-term development of the business. pre_arrival_learning https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910666671 2021-11-24 13:58:18 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910666671 Saim, Amine, Hammad https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910736590 The introduction paragraph does not has a good flow to the first body paragraph. However, it has good definitions to the key words. ]]> 2021-11-24 14:30:28 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910736590 Sulim, Neris, Krystal https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910743230 Definitions are well made. And easy to understand.

]]> 2021-11-24 14:33:28 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910743230 Sulim, Neris, Krystal https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910743443 Using appropriate and reliable examples and words.]]> 2021-11-24 14:33:34 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910743443 Lia Toby Vivian https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910745104 There are sufficient evidences to support the point and the PEEE structured is followed.However, more evaluations can be written to make the essay more comprehensive.]]> 2021-11-24 14:34:22 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910745104 Sulim, Neris, Krystal https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910746573 The information given is good but there should be an in-text citation at the part where Tesla is mentioned. ]]> 2021-11-24 14:35:02 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910746573 Lia Toby Vivian https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910748096 This paragraph is well organized in regard to main point. But it needs more evidence using citation and reference]]> 2021-11-24 14:35:45 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910748096 AMINE, SAIM, HAMMAD https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910749581 The PEEE structure is respected.  there are good examples and explanation. Well done]]> 2021-11-24 14:36:24 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910749581 Sulim, Neris, Krystal https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910751874 All of the contents and key points were summarized well.]]> 2021-11-24 14:37:32 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910751874 AMINE, SAIM, HAMMAD https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910753356 There is a good organisation of the ideas but you have to add citations or examples]]> 2021-11-24 14:38:09 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910753356 Lik, Chris, Ziyad https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910753553 — Too many definitions on introduction
— Reducing detail information in the introduction
— Should give a clear flow with the essay]]> 2021-11-24 14:38:16 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910753553 Lia, Vivian, Toby https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910755632 The introduction of the definition is clear and described the sustainability in CSR. However, the whole introduction needs to be more detailed and have a good cohesion with the next main paragraph. ]]> 2021-11-24 14:39:14 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910755632 Lia Toby Vivian https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910757690 This conclusion paragraph is well written to link the main points in the body paragraph but it could be better to provide more evidence and explanation using citation]]> 2021-11-24 14:40:12 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910757690 HAMMAD,AMINE,SAIM https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910758694 This is a good conclusion, they have mentioned all the points.]]> 2021-11-24 14:40:42 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910758694 Lia, Toby, Vivian https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910762166 It introduced the main point and had some explanations. However, it needs to use 'in-text' citation in the evidence.]]> 2021-11-24 14:42:21 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910762166 Sulim, Krystal, Neris https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910764148 They used the evidence to prove their point, if they add more what they think will be better.]]> 2021-11-24 14:43:19 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910764148 Lik, Chris, Ziyad https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910765066 -- PEEE structure is well-organised 
-- Evidence and example parts are very detail and data is relevant as well. 
-- Should add more explanation ]]> 2021-11-24 14:43:44 UTC https://padlet.com/pre_arrival_learning/con1h3og48kumcd8/wish/1910765066