https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d Made with a wink and a smile en-us 2021-10-21 11:43:24 UTC 2025-11-11 03:24:47 UTC hello@padlet.com usictech https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833203537 2 positive aspect of my work:
 I used 8 sources and developed a good logical structure
2 areas that I need improvements: 
Lots of spelling errors/ did not answer the question clearly. ]]> 2021-10-21 11:49:31 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833203537 kcao42 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833218341 Positive aspects of my work:
The essay has clear ideas. I used four sources. Besides, I made a perfect summary.
2 areas that I need improvements:
I did not use PEE (Point, evidence, explanation) logic to sort out the article. There are too few related words between sentences.]]> 2021-10-21 11:57:32 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833218341 ljiang26 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833219451 strength:
Clear essay structure 
Appropriate words count 
Weakness 
Did not use 8 academic sources 
Did not use many in-text citation]]> 2021-10-21 11:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833219451 jwang338 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833219638 I did a clear structure on essay.
I mentioned what is supposed to appear in the text.
I didn't use any sources to show the results.
It wasn't linked to classical sociological theories much.]]> 2021-10-21 11:58:17 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833219638 CaoYuting https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833220877 Positive:
I used formal language and had complete article structure.
Improvements :
not enough 8 sources( not APA )/ did not answer the question clearly and completely.]]> 2021-10-21 11:58:52 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833220877 syang901 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833221287 2 positive aspect of my work:
I wrote a lot of informations in my essay and put a bibliography list at the end of the article.(and I really tried my best).

2 areas that I need improvements:
the essay structure is little bit messy, some grammatical errors and the content of the article is not very comprehensive]]> 2021-10-21 11:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833221287 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833225856 2 positive aspect of my work:
To use in-text referencing appropriately/a clear structure
2 areas that I need improvements: 
Not enough references/not respond all question

]]> 2021-10-21 12:01:21 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833225856 jgeng6 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833228928 positive:
I have a complete essay structures, including introduction and conclusion and so on.
Most sentences are grammatically correct.
improvement: 
I just use 2 kinds of references.
The coverage of the article is not very extensive.]]> 2021-10-21 12:02:59 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833228928 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833233124 positive:
 1.I did a clear structure.  2. Most of the sentences using the correctly grammar.
 improvements: 1.did not put the bibliography into the article.
2.use some connected words to improve the sentences.

]]> 2021-10-21 12:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833233124 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833233644 Positive:
I have included an introduction, a body and a conclusion.
My observations range from 500 to 750 words, not including the bibliography.
Not enough:
I just use 6 kinds of reference.
My sentences may not be clear enough.]]> 2021-10-21 12:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833233644 hstang2 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833234233 2 positive 
1. the essay is clear.
2. The essay is organised. 

2negative
1.The references can be improved.
2.Citation can be searched more than 8 to put them correctly.]]> 2021-10-21 12:05:35 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833234233 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833237220 2 positive aspect of my work: 
The essay has a clear structure 
Academic use of words
2 areas that I need to improvements:
Not enough references 
Need to develop clear paragraphs]]> 2021-10-21 12:07:05 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833237220 xpeng22 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833238200 2 positive and 2 negative and reasons for the rise, aspects of my work:
 I used 6 sources and developed a good logical structure
4 areas that I need improvement: 
Less reference
The formats need to be strengthened above
Can't use to ensure sentences are grammatically correct and sufficiently clear.
No scholar cited]]> 2021-10-21 12:07:34 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833238200 yhuang162 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833238257 2 positive aspect of my work:
the structure is clear
Word count of 500 to 750 excluding bibliography

2 areas that I need improvements:
add more connectives
not enough references]]> 2021-10-21 12:07:36 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833238257 yyang218 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833244477 Positive:
1 Includes introduction, body text , and conclusion.
2 Text word count met.
Improvement 
1 insuffcient academic sources
2 unclear logic]]> 2021-10-21 12:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833244477 https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833244826 positive:
Most of the grammar is correct
The argument is supported by evidence
improvements:
Did not answer all the questions
Insufficient in-text references and bibliography ]]> 2021-10-21 12:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/cof9z603jv1zjw4d/wish/1833244826