AP argumentative essay by Aura https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50 EdPuzzle video reflection (confusions? Questions? Concerns? Aha moment?) en-us 2017-03-16 18:33:01 UTC 2025-10-23 15:13:18 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Dartstarget.png I like that the "evidence" comes from what I personally already know, but it's worrisome that I may not know enough about multifarious topics. auramoongreig https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160633883 2017-03-16 18:36:35 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160633883 gracjoh https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160863440 I feel like this essay is much more creative and gives you more room to write freely. I really like this aspect of the Argumentative essay and look forward to writing one. ]]> 2017-03-17 17:52:00 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160863440 I didn't know you could use personal experiences as evidence for writing the essay, but I feel like this type of evidence wouldn't be as strong. jordanmia521 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160865242 2017-03-17 17:58:40 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160865242 kathrynkendrick https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160866683 I like how there are no sources that you have to conform your essay to, which give you the creativity to take the stance that you like and is not necessarily the easiest or the one that satisfies the sources ]]> 2017-03-17 18:03:31 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160866683 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160879408 This video oversimplified things in an obnoxiously verbose manner. It's not up to luck whether or not you can write about something; a good writer can write about anything. Additionally, qualification is always the best option. It may be more difficult to come up with an initial thesis, but it is much easier to a develop complex argument.]]> 2017-03-17 18:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160879408 I didn't like how the narrator in the video kept repeating that luck is such a huge factor in scoring well. I did like that it seemed as if "evidence" could come from anywhere and not have to be 100 percent true, as long as it made sense. mtmnumber1 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160881644 2017-03-17 19:13:06 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160881644 taliatmbrt https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160892558 I like the fact that this essay is a lot more personal than the others and gives the writer a chance to show what they really know about a subject instead of just following a formula for writing. ]]> 2017-03-17 20:44:28 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160892558 jvallecillo22 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160904189 I like that we can finally use "I" statements and give our own personal insight instead of having to follow the arguments given by documents.

]]> 2017-03-18 00:10:27 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160904189 I find it interesting that depending on the subject we have to rely on our personal experience and observation. I also imagine it being challenging to come up with a logical idea when you don't know the topic very well and you are under pressure. https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160967183 2017-03-19 05:21:38 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/160967183 cynthiaestrada805 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307022 I like how we can use personal evidence and "I" statements but I am worried about whether I have enough evidence about the prompt. ]]> 2017-03-20 19:13:06 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307022 jaredfitton https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307160 The argumentative essay is essentially a synthesis essay, but the sources are from your own knowledge and experiences.]]> 2017-03-20 19:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307160 luisp5339 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307193 I like how we can use our own personal evidence and how we can finally use "I" statements ]]> 2017-03-20 19:13:41 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307193 carolinesjerven https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307253 I like that we can now capitalize on any random knowledge that we've atained over the years if applicable to the subject. It also gives us a chance to be a bit more free form.]]> 2017-03-20 19:13:54 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307253 Luck hogan_avery49 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307262 I didn't like how he stressed that having previous knowledge will allow one to do better. It makes the essay seem unfairly based on a luck of the draw situation, where some will have a significant unfair advantage]]> 2017-03-20 19:13:56 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307262 paulharteck https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307297 I like how you can make the essay more personal]]> 2017-03-20 19:14:03 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307297 salazarmariaolivia https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307421 Inserting your personal connections to the topic, in my opinion makes the essay fun to read and little more personal]]> 2017-03-20 19:14:33 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307421 I like using I statements so much that I am using an I statement right now. I'm glad we can use them jonathanwhuther https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307440 2017-03-20 19:14:40 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307440 Argumentative essay video alexpoirier805 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307709 I like how the video has visuals and letters and other things that created a fully completed video]]> 2017-03-20 19:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307709 thealphabet101 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307768 I thoroughlenjoy how much freedom you get to write this. You can draw evidence from so many sources.  ]]> 2017-03-20 19:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307768 peusmorgan https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307770 I like how he clarified the four steps to begin an argumentative essay; I will put them to use!]]> 2017-03-20 19:15:40 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307770 robtweisz https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307962 I like how the essay is pretty subjective.]]> 2017-03-20 19:16:28 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161307962 ortizangelina1 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161308133 The way he explains and clarifies the four steps to writing an argumentive essay is super helpful]]> 2017-03-20 19:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161308133 I like how we can be more creative in our writing with this essay. His video clarified well with examples. gavinvictor9 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161308526

]]> 2017-03-20 19:19:00 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161308526 valentingarcia706 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161330387 Comment for a tbh]]> 2017-03-20 20:50:30 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161330387 I like it. bencudahy https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161330449 2017-03-20 20:50:48 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161330449 It really shows how much knowledge someone has. Please Ms. Greig's don't give us another essay tomorrow. marie_lassaigne1110 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161330498 2017-03-20 20:51:00 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161330498 JohnnyCyMoore https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161331283 I appreciate the ability to be more creative with our writing and beliefs on the subject. ]]> 2017-03-20 20:54:31 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161331283 kennyhong214 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161331419 I like this essay because you can BS ]]> 2017-03-20 20:55:15 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161331419 👍🏾 paulisromero99 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161331537 2017-03-20 20:55:55 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161331537 The video scottfeldmansb https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161595895 The video was mediocre at best]]> 2017-03-21 17:26:52 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161595895 The video was Ho amanbekatakeev https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596479 2017-03-21 17:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596479 jensensteady https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596498 I like how the argumentative essay allows you to draw on personal experience instead of premade sources.]]> 2017-03-21 17:28:30 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596498 menehunematt https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596500 The video was great and was very helpful]]> 2017-03-21 17:28:30 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596500 jg4055 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596569 I enjoy standing within my position]]> 2017-03-21 17:28:42 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596569 elibaur365 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596623 This video was alright, I enjoyed the examples and the style of the essay in general]]> 2017-03-21 17:28:51 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596623 viktoriaginger https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596679 The video was good ]]> 2017-03-21 17:29:02 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596679 Can people see this post amanbekatakeev https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596789 2017-03-21 17:29:12 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161596789 harrisonjfoy https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161597047 This ]]> 2017-03-21 17:29:56 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161597047 Super Nice Vid! gibson_fieldelliot https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161597635 This AP wizard had great tipz! ]]> 2017-03-21 17:31:33 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161597635 Really G https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161597937 2017-03-21 17:32:21 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161597937 scottfeldmansb https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161597992 2017-03-21 17:32:32 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161597992 jg4055 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598061 2017-03-21 17:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598061 Chunky slabs https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598066 2017-03-21 17:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598066 HAIL LORD AVOCADO harrisonjfoy https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598154 2017-03-21 17:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598154 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598232 2017-03-21 17:33:11 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598232 menehunematt https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598240 2017-03-21 17:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598240 This is Jacob credit me https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598247 2017-03-21 17:33:13 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598247 britney20 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598809 I like how they gave us enough information to understand the main idea of the essay]]> 2017-03-21 17:34:43 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598809 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598811 2017-03-21 17:34:43 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161598811 Oy jezza harrisonjfoy https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161599116 2017-03-21 17:35:30 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161599116 I appreciated this drakomalfoy43 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161599326 2017-03-21 17:36:02 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161599326 Pvapodaca https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161599585 The video was very informative and a good refresher on how to write a argumentative essay]]> 2017-03-21 17:36:35 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161599585 On my way back to Plato's cave jg4055 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161599635 2017-03-21 17:36:41 UTC https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161599635 A video jazz jneely0 https://padlet.com/auramoongreig/cl2zuepdqb50/wish/161601492

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