https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4 en-us 2022-08-29 15:16:32 UTC 2022-10-30 20:31:43 UTC hello@padlet.com erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274904300 I resist any thing better than my own diversity]]> 2022-08-29 15:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274904300 erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274906779 Into a daybreak that’s wondrously clear I rise]]> 2022-08-29 15:21:27 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274906779 erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274913661 Trees of ashes wave good-bye to good-bye]]> 2022-08-29 15:26:41 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274913661 erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274914723 Leaving behind nights of terror and fear]]> 2022-08-29 15:27:33 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274914723 erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274915327 And am not stuck up, and am in my place]]> 2022-08-29 15:28:04 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274915327 erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274915607 Breathe the air but leave plenty after me]]> 2022-08-29 15:28:17 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274915607 erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274916451 2022-08-29 15:29:00 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274916451 erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274917571 Of one of many circles]]> 2022-08-29 15:29:55 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274917571 erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274922331 2022-08-29 15:33:19 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274922331 erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274924493 Yet the journey we make together is perfect on this earth]]> 2022-08-29 15:34:36 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274924493 erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274938799 2022-08-29 15:43:50 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274938799 erd6556ebay https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274940977 2022-08-29 15:45:22 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2274940977 whyrhetoric https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2276397729 Max, this is really cool. I really like the way the next to the last line works and how "flying in a green light" really puts us in a different space right from the beginning. ]]> 2022-08-30 15:10:19 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2276397729 nguyenremmi2004 https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2277088763 This poem seems to be told from the point of view of a bird, which draws my attention. This is because most poems that I read are told from a human point of view. This new point of view gives me a different insight into life. Your poem beautifies life in a way.]]> 2022-08-31 02:11:49 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2277088763 https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2277824574 I liked how you put this poem together. How you put together "fresh courage glimmers from planets" with "and the map appears to disappear". It shows me that from other planets we are a mere speck in this universe. We may be small but we make due with what we have and enjoy life here. ]]> 2022-08-31 14:33:34 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2277824574 tayrevels https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2278170262 Hi Max,
As I read your poem, I made the connection that you personified the bird and relate the creature to your own self. Lines such as "trees of ashes wave good-bye to good-bye" and "yet the journey we make together is perfect on this earth" relates to both you and the bird perfectly. This is because as organisms, we experience a lot of the same environments and even experiences but all go through this journey called life.]]> 2022-08-31 18:34:18 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2278170262 olivialambert14 https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2278398541 I like how you structured your poem and definitely could see the bird's viewpoint of flying high and leaving the world behind in the lines you chose. I could see the bird taking off with the first line that ended "I rise" and then feel the bird's feeling that flying is awesome with the ending "perfect on this earth." I really like the effect. ]]> 2022-08-31 23:12:58 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2278398541 cbjordan03 https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2280101902 I really like this poem. You went a different way and not only separated every line but also brought a unique viewpoint from a bird. I love the ending and it gave me a very peaceful vibe. It was very entertaining to read and I overall enjoyed this piece. ]]> 2022-09-02 01:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2280101902 mallorylea101 https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2281239461 I enjoy trying to compare my thoughts to yours while reading this. Breaking down each part of the poems you used makes sense to your title of the spliced version.]]> 2022-09-03 00:09:15 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2281239461 alexok678 https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2281241532 I really like the spacing in this poem, I think it emphasizes a journey and the slight repetition and rhyming also keep my attention. I used the line "my own diversity" in my poem too, Walt Whitman's lines are very powerful. Your ending evokes pathos, and makes me feel like the journey has ended. You did a good job tying your poem to the world around us too, it holds similar themes as the originals poems did.]]> 2022-09-03 00:15:59 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2281241532 mharr354 https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2281570962 Great poem Max! I love how you formatted it on the padlet to start off with. I think your title matches the meaning of how you put these poems together. I truly love the connection between all of these. Great job!]]> 2022-09-03 16:43:23 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2281570962 laineydevlin https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2281958782 Hi Max, 
I really enjoyed reading your spliced poem, the format was very interesting as well as seeing how you could turn these poems into being from the blackbird's perspective. Your poem is different from the other ones I've read because of this change in perspective. I especially liked how you separated each line and staggered them, but they still flowed together really lovely. ]]> 2022-09-04 13:33:40 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2281958782 zackrwallace01 https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2282302476 This was a really cool poem. I liked how the point of view was not directly stated but it is interpreted as coming from a bird's. It's really creative and the imagery in the poem is top notch. A really good job done.]]> 2022-09-05 00:42:52 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2282302476 imoneke https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2282386449 “Trees of ashes wave good-bye to good-bye, breathe the air but leave plenty after me” This is a juxtaposition used perfectly to describe the terrible consequences of industrialization of man which the writer laments.]]> 2022-09-05 02:00:33 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2282386449 ckitch25 https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2282421975 Max, 
You did an excellent job fitting together these lines. There are no lines that don't work together. I also really like the name and theme its pretty cool to think of a poem from a birds perspective. ]]> 2022-09-05 02:30:14 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2282421975 mgipso10 https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2362328687 Love how you put this poem together. yes our journey is perfect on this earth. I would only add to that through Christ it is made perfect.]]> 2022-10-30 20:31:43 UTC https://padlet.com/erd6556ebay/ckyawwg40hnqpbw4/wish/2362328687