LO: To uplevel sentences to describe setting - Waves by Robert David Stevenson

Bilbo was cold by the underground lake.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:55:15 UTC

The path was slippery under Bilbo’s feet

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:55:57 UTC

The stones were sharp underfoot.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:56:33 UTC

The breeze in the stone corridor was cold.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:56:58 UTC

The darkness in the tunnel was dark.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:57:15 UTC

The goblins sang cruel hunting songs.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:57:34 UTC

The lights from the torches cast shadows.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:57:50 UTC

The light at the end of the tunnel glowed.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:58:09 UTC

The wind on the mountain side felt nice.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:58:25 UTC

The sun felt good on Bilbo’s face.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:58:45 UTC

CHALLENGE: Write a sentence to describe the bones underfoot.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:59:06 UTC

CHALLENGE: Write a sentence to describe the rotting flesh in the cave.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:59:25 UTC

CHALLENGE: Write a sentence to describe the stench

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 18:59:43 UTC

CHALLENGE: Write a sentence to describe the eldritch aquatic horrors that swam in Gollum’s lake.

robertdavidstevenson — 2024-04-30 19:00:03 UTC

2024-05-15 05:02:05 UTC

Bilbo was benumbed and cold by the underground lake, which was infested with monterous rotten fish and more eldritch entities.

-Ibrohim

He swam in bloody lake,where was dark obsidian

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Gollum's Selfie 2024.

Bilbo was freezing from the breeze of the cave

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Bilbo felt bleak by the underground lake

Bilbo felt frigid by the underground lake.

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Bilbo was disgusted from the bloody, sticky rotten flesh of the goblins' corpses scattered around him.

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The bones were scratching Bilbo's legs, they where smelly like a month-old corpse.

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The path, which was full of goblin bones, was slippery under Bilbo's hairy feet

-Ibrohim

Bilbo was bitter by the lake underground as he cowered in the misty dark to regather his estranged thoughts and regain his composure.

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The floor of the cave was coated in blood, rotting goblin corpses were on the floor, a sulphur-like smell with bile mixed in hung on the air -lucas

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The breeze in the obsidian and stone corridor was ice cold.

The stones were edged underfoot, they lacerated the poor hobbit's feet.

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The sun felt wonderful on Bilbo‘s face

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-Aisha

The lights from the goblin hunting-parties' sulphur torches cast demoninc shadows on the cobalt-stone walls of the stone-corridor.

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Nikita = Gollum 2024

The air on the breeze in the stone corridor was murky, putrid and vile.

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He was freezing in the icy frigid cave.

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The darkness in the tunnel was dull, dim, dingy and drab, it choked Bilbo's very soul!

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The breeze in the boulder-filled subterranean corridor chilled Bilbo's very soul.

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Bilbo was freezing by the underground lake, which was full of was odious, polluted and vile fluids.

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The path was very slppery under Bilbo's feet.

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-shayanne

The sun felt like flower's on Bilbo's face.

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-Shayanne

2024-05-15 06:17:24 UTC

In the cave rock walls was wet and below Zero

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Cave was full of bones of the rats , mice’s, humsters and other small animals.Also cave was all in strange slime and the feeling when you touch it is indescribable .It is impossible to be there for long time . Everything is stinky smelly and darkly .

I don’t know how Gollum could live there .The quantity of the bones there is sundry! When you touch the bones you starting thinking of all details how the owner lost his skin,organs,muscles,eyes,heart and brain.

- Salim

The stones were very sharp that cut through his leg through his flesh when he was running

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-shayanne

The mukness in the passageway was drab

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-shayanne

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The gust on the mountain touched charming wind.

-shayanne

The Stupid goblins sang a horror cruel songs together

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- shayanne

The sun light at the end of the scary tunnel glowed with anger

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- shayanne

Bilbo sawm in the bloody , goblins' corpses, but Bilbo was scared cause it was dark

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- shayanne

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Part 2:

Sometimes I feel bad for Gollum.He can’t go to Hell because he is already there.Isolated for people and talking’s could literally make you psycho.No food and the feeling of loneliness could make you cannibal.With this all I understand why he wanted to kill Bilbo. He have nothing to lose he is already lose everything.

- Salim