Memoir Elements - Class C by CHELSEA SMITH https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7 en-us 2021-11-30 17:25:31 UTC 2021-11-30 18:08:03 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921031715 "We made the mistake of stopping at a red light and were concerned immediately by two boys, sixteen or so, dressed in starched jeans and jackets and sporting zip guns." This is a memory because it was explaining all of the things that happened that night]]> 2021-11-30 17:45:11 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921031715 "I was asked " No one stops at that light!" I felt guilty as I myself were the perpetrator. The author chose this to show that the character felt guilty and dumb at that time. https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921031971 2021-11-30 17:45:18 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921031971 "My memory was that fell to the floor, pushed the gas pedal down with one hand, and with the other put the gear into drive, till Rosalind took over and drove us out of there." 2660584 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921032622 2021-11-30 17:45:30 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921032622 "We were someplace in downtown Newark and it was 1986 or 1987" https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921033585 2021-11-30 17:45:57 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921033585 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921034197 "All the time I was screaming at her not to lose control, that she had to save our lives. It was Friday night and we were someplace in downtown Newark, and it was 1986 or 1987."
This time is flashing back to the year this accident happened.]]> 2021-11-30 17:46:11 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921034197 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921037717 In page 1, the author wrote a full memory of how he got a bullet in his neck. He said the bullet, "hit my chin, then buried itself in the left side of my neck, less than a half inch from the carotid artery." He remembers how he got shot and even explains how it got there. He remembers.]]> 2021-11-30 17:47:50 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921037717 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921038319 " My memory was that I fell to the floor, pushed the gas-pedal down with one hand, and with the other put the gear into drive till Roseland took over and drove us out of there" The author included this memory because, it shows what exactly was going on and what was the author doing. ]]> 2021-11-30 17:48:08 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921038319 26901030_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921039400 " If anything, I am grateful, and I love and kiss everyone and everything involved. I regret Rosalind had to go through this. I'm sorry for suffering. But I don't hate the boys and I' not angry with them and I don't hold it against Newark" 

It shows that after what happened they are grateful and don't hold it against Newark. ]]> 2021-11-30 17:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921039400 "It was more than guilt, her pain; her agony." This is an exmaple of how he felt about the situation. He feels bad that since he got shot, he worried Rosalind Pace and got her rushed and anxious. https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921045625 2021-11-30 17:51:18 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921045625 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921045661 Allegorical tales to calm her in the moments she feels defeated ]]> 2021-11-30 17:51:19 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921045661 26901030_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921045940 "The confusion causes a lump in my throat, a lilt in my voice"  

It shows that they are nervous and confused. ]]> 2021-11-30 17:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921045940 "Um... I'm at my mom's house." The confusion caused a lump in my throat, a lilt in my voice." _______ They felt confused about the phone call and why they were asking about his mother. 2660991_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921048069 2021-11-30 17:52:33 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921048069 "Um... I'm at my mom's house." The confusion causes a lump in my throat, a lit in my voice." The author could have chose this to show confusion, excitement, or worried. https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921051049 2021-11-30 17:53:56 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921051049 "allegorical tales to calm her in the moments she feels defeated" it shows how she is able to calm her down when she feels frustrated or defeated. 2665685_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921051226 2021-11-30 17:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921051226 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921052895 "I hadn't heard of you work or anything, but my daughter, GiGi, came home going on and on about your book, Ghost. And so, I wanted to first and foremost thank you for that."

]]> 2021-11-30 17:54:48 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921052895 ¨She´s good, She´s good,¨ i say , trying my best to force my timbre back down to it´s normal voice 26701052_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921054675 It shows hes nervous and surprised hearing Kobes voice]]> 2021-11-30 17:55:40 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921054675 26901030_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921065467 "But I was buried underground from my waist  down and had been stuck, with my seatbelt on, for 13 hours. ( I still have the seat belt marks on my legs.)" 


]]> 2021-11-30 18:00:30 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921065467 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921066588 "I didn't know it at the time, but I was buried underground from my waist down and had been stuck, with my seatbelt on, for 13 hours".
Its describing what she felt and saw when the time took place.]]> 2021-11-30 18:01:01 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921066588 "After takeoff, I was fighting with my brother, because I wanted the window seat - I was so excited about looking out. My brother got mad and went to sit on the other side of the aisle with my cousin." She sees her brother change aisle and sit with her cousin. https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921068141 2021-11-30 18:01:36 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921068141 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921068595 "When I woke up, I was really thirsty. I was screaming for help in Spanish and my dad was trying to get me out of the wreckage, but I was in a lot of pain and couldn't move."]]> 2021-11-30 18:01:47 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921068595 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921069381 "When I woke up, I was really thirsty. I was screaming for help in Spanish and my dad was trying to get me out of the wreckage, but I was in a lot of pain and couldn't move. "]]> 2021-11-30 18:02:08 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921069381 ¨When i woke up, I was really thirsty. I was screaming for help in Spanish and my dad was trying to get me out the wreckage,¨ 26701052_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921070983 2021-11-30 18:02:52 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921070983 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921071906 "When I woke up, I was really thirsty. I was screaming for help in Spanish and my dad was trying to get me out of the wreckage, but I was in a lot of pain and couldn't move"]]> 2021-11-30 18:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921071906 "When I woke up, I was really thirsty. I was screaming for help in Spanish and my dad was trying to get me out of the wreckage, but I was in a lot of pain and couldn't move." The author is describing how she felt pain and how she felt after she woke up. 2660584 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921072155 2021-11-30 18:03:23 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921072155 "When I woke up, I was really thirsty. I was screaming for help in Spanish and my dad was trying to get me out of the wreckage, but I was in a lot of pain and couldn't move." ----- She includes this quote to show what she remembered and how she felt after she woke up after the plane crashed into the side of the mountain. 2660991_1_1 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921072419

]]> 2021-11-30 18:03:31 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921072419 https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921082283 She felt the pain of getting her nerves back. "She felt pain", is the key part to the sensory detail.

"I was really thirsty." Another sensory detail. Thirst.]]> 2021-11-30 18:08:03 UTC https://padlet.com/csmith1380/cib80oziqvt2trk7/wish/1921082283