https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78 Made with big dreams en-us 2018-04-25 15:09:02 UTC 2026-02-05 08:55:50 UTC hello@padlet.com frenckai000 https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/255282721 base camp: there are 2 main claiming routs to Mount Everest most popular one is by southwest in Nepal. Tibet in the north. Most climbers fly to the foot of the mountain then hike to the camp.]]> 2018-04-25 15:20:38 UTC https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/255282721 frenckai000 https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/256037114 we could????? ]]> 2018-04-27 14:45:09 UTC https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/256037114 frenckai000 https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/256049244 it takes for a succesful 2 months to months to actually climb everest. surronded by moutians. it is dangeryestly icey, and very windy it can blow you off the edge. ]]> 2018-04-27 15:14:47 UTC https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/256049244 frenckai000 https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/258555150 Storage is a problem with climbing with not enough oxygen or not enough food you are basically climbing for 2 months we need more storage to fit in the backpack]]> 2018-05-07 14:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/258555150 frenckai000 https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/258563813 This backpack can hold many things that are big and SMALL. These things are used for feeling like you are on top of the world because you literally are on top of the world! This backpack can be used in high and low temperatures! The coldness of the -0
degrees up on the mountain! It has a back warmer, oxygen holder,food supplyer and more!! But wait there's more if you buy this you'll get a second free and get a container that holds more things in it! The problem is more storage and less weight distribstrabution. People climing mount everest have code words or just worlds in general . These words that they use are most of the ways they use when they gragually get higher. Cwm: (pronounced coom) A valley on the side of a hill or mountain.Crevasse: A deep, open crack in a glacier. ]]> 2018-05-07 15:02:32 UTC https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/258563813 mstrock https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/262361172 Revise your paragraph in the following ways:

Come and talk to me. This isn't really explaining what problem you're fixing. Focus on one problem not every feature. 

Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab--not so repetative)
 
 Clearer explanation on how your design improves or solves a specific problem.
 
More transitions, overall flow, and clarity ]]> 2018-05-21 13:50:20 UTC https://padlet.com/frenckai000/chs23rtiqy78/wish/262361172