6-8-Write your opinion의 복제물 by JUAN KIM

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juankimiiettp2022 — 2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
I think in-person classes are better than online classes.
First, we learn how to make friends at school. School is not just a place for learning knowledge.

Student can socialize with peers of their own age at school.

Second, students can learn things more actively through in-person classes.
It is more helpful to understand when you learn first-hand.

Playing games and doing physical activities can help you to stay healthy physically and mentally.
For those reasons, I strongly believe that in-person classes have more benefits than online classes.
Remember we cannot live alone.

The more connected we are, the less we are connecting.

22번 이기현(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.

I think In-person classes are better than online classes.

Because we can't do physical activity in online classes.
>>체육 활동에 대한 예시(피구 등)를 들고 많은 학생들이 그것을 하지 못했을 때 어떤 감정, 기분인지 추가하기.
And staring a computer (>>for a long time) can damage your eyes.
>>시력이 나빠지는 연구결과나 시력이 나빠진 예시/경험 등을 추가하기.
Some of the students can watch other programs while pretending to be in class.

In-person classes are better than online classes.

25번

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think the online classes is better than the in person classes because in online classes you can get up worse later and you can finish your studing more clander

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juankimiiettp2022 — 2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so.
Watching TV is bad.
Watching TV makes you move less.
Your eyesight is getting worse.
You waste a lot of time because of watching TV.
And There are some bad programs for students.

20번 윤설범(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so, too!
I think watching TV is good.

First, we can get useful information from TV.
For example, I am interested in science. I usually find some science-related story through the TV. That was really helpful for me.

Second, TV tells some important news.
It delivers what we need to know.........
>>TV가 자연에 대해서만 이야기하는 것은 아니라서, 자연과 같이 '중요한 소식'을 전달한다는 것으로 바꿨음. 이야기하려는 것이 무엇인지?
~~what we must protect or why we must protect nature.~~

Third, if you advertise on TV, many people can easily understand (it spreads quickly), and you can find what you want through advertisements.
For example, whesulbumn there is no game I can play, I can play the game after watching a game advertisement.
>>텔레비전을 보는 사람 입장에서 좋은지, 안 좋은지를 쓰는 것이기 때문에 광고주들에게 효과적이라는 근거는 연관성이 부족함.. 차라리 텔레비전을 봄으로써 좋은 제품이나 인기있는 게임에 대해 알 수 있게 된다고 하는 것이 더 자연스러움.

I think watching TV is good

22번 이기현(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so.

First, watching too much TV could be an addiction. If you are addicted, your sleep time will be reduced because of the TV and it will be difficult to study.

Second, watching too much TV can cause conflicts with your parents.

Lastly, if you watch a lot of TV, you will be tired and can't focus on what you have to do. It damages your brain, body, and life.

For these reasons, watching TV is bad.

13번 임지유

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so too!!
You can learn many things by watching TV
For example, I can learn animals🐤, plants🌵, countries🇰🇷, history, etc
And you can relieve your boredom🥱->😀
And these days, you can listen to music🎵 on TV
Whenever I am bored🥱, I listen to music🎵 on TV

26번 조건우(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so.
There are three reasons that watching TV is bad.

First, TV makes your eyes bad.
Watching TV for a long time makes your eyes in one spot and reduces the number of blinks, getting your eyes dry or tired.
If the TV screen is too bright and it is blinding.
On the contrary, if it is too dark, you will be tired because you need to put energy to focus on the screen.

Next, once you start to watch TV, you can't concentrate on your own work later. It's hard to stop watching in the middle.
>>당신은 드라마나 영화를 15분만 볼 수 있는가? 라는 내용을 넣으면 어떨까. 사람들은 자기 자신을 통제하기 쉽지 않다는 이야기를 하면서 결국 TV를 보기 시작하면 자기가 해야 할 일을 하지 못하는 결과를 불러온다고 정리하면 좋을 듯.

Finally, there are some bad things in TV.
When you watch TV, there are people who say bad words or swear words. Also there are videos that children shouldn't watch. That's not educational for students.

So I think watching TV is bad.
What do you think?

23번 이선규(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I agree.
I think it's good to watch TV.

You can watch TV and see how the world works.

You can quickly find out the latest breaking news in other countries by watching TV.

I saw on TV that Germany lost to Japan in a soccer game.

Young children can watch TV educationally.

Therefore, it is good to watch TV.

15번 홍윤서

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so.
I think reading cartoons is good.
First, reading cartoons can help you develop your creativity.
Second, when you read a romance cartoon, you can revive a dead love cell. Like
Third, When you are depressed, you will feel good when you read a funny cartoons. I can recommend , , , .

7번 박소연

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so.
I think reading cartoons is good.
Whenever you read a learning comics, you can get useful information and have fun.
And cartoons have many interesting stories.
They have pretty illustrations, too.
It upgrades your painting skill and power of imagination.
Then, I think reading cartoons is good.

16번 김민찬

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so.
Reading cartoons is good.
Cartoons give you fun.
Because there are many pictures in comic books.
Some cartoon books help students study.
For example, math thief, WHY? series and so on.
You can easilyunderstand
If you read novel, however here are not pictures.
So you may not easily understand.
But cartoons have pictures, so you may be easy to understand.
Cartoon is good

21번 윤우성

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

No, I don't think so.

Because reading comic books can relieve your stress.
Among the cartoons I have seen, the black rubber shoes were the most interesting
Also it is fun. If you go to a comic book store, you can even eat food. With your friend, it is more fun.
I went to a comic book store for the first time and read a book called Black Rubber Shoes, which was the most interesting book, so I kept reading this book.

1번 고가빈

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

The first life can be happy And I can be a genius through the book

19번 손예준

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think I can read cartoon book the reason is that it is better to read cartoon book than to look at the phone. It is a kind of book so it is okay to read~🤗😶‍🌫️ (bye)

9번 오노마오 (new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so. ❌️🙅‍♀️

First, When I watch 👀 cartoons I can develop creativity and imagination. 💭

Second, Most people feel cartoons are fun and interesting. 😄👍 Then, you can relieve your stress and spend your own time. 🤳

Third, like a cartoons It's not fun to draw enough to make you feel like it's not funny.🎨 😄❌️

Then , I think is reading cartoons good! 👍🥰

17번 김지웅

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so

Because
#1 Cartoons can give children joy and help them in life.
#2 Cartoons are both educational and enjoyable.
#3Cartoons are because everyone watched cartoons at least once when they were young and enjoyed it.

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juankimiiettp2022 — 2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
The internet real-name system should be used on the internet.
I think the real-name system is a very effective(효과적인) way to prevent(막다) online terror.
A lot of people rudely(무례하게) reply to articles(글, 기사) and spread(퍼뜨리다) rumors just for fun.
If people's real names are known, it is very likely(- 할것 같은) that most people will be more careful when they write something on the Internet.

8번 서윤지

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
If there are not real name system in online, people cursed each other because people don't know about them. And they can kill people in online. For exmple, sulli(설리) killed herself because of bad comments.
So I think real name system should be used on internet.

Thankyou🥰

6번 박소민

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
I think It is good.

First, It will prevent bad comment.
Not using real-name system, people will keep writing bad comments.
These bad comments caused some people killed oneself.

Second, It will reduce threatens.
Not using real-name system, people will threaten Without any guilt, like before.
People who was threatened by other people will remember it until the person die.

Therefore I think using real-name system is good!

10번 윤제은

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
I think it's need to do real name system.

First, it will nicer to saw when we a comments. Cause it will know who do this comment. Than we can get closer with who ever have a nice comments. In example I have a real name ID so I always have a nice comments.

Second, the people won't get any bad comments. If people get bad comments, than they will get stressed. In the example the the youtuber one who get lot of bad comments the youtuber's name is jamy. She get lot of stressed qnd she died.

Lastly, they will be more honest. Cause they have there real name so they will more honest. So they can't do be liar.

These reasons are why we need to do real name system.

24번 이준서

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so. The reason why so many crimes occur on the Internet is that people cannot be arrested because their names are unknown, and they incite(선동하다) people with a little manipulation(조작). As a result, the victim suffers psychological(정신적) damage and can even commit suicide(자살) in severe cases. And the reason why a lot of swearing comes out on the Internet is because you don't have to worry about what happens later because you don't give out your name. That's why I agre(e)with the Internet real-name system.

6번 박소민

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.I think It is good.

First, It will prevent bad comment.Not using real-name system, people will keep writing bad comments.These bad comments caused some people killed oneself.

Second, It will reduce threatens.Not using real-name system, people will threaten Without any guilt, like before.People who was threatened by other people will remember it until the person die.

Therefore I think using real-name system is good!

18번 서형욱

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
Because anonymous people can leave comments relatively more freely than when using their real names, they can say things they can't say in person without hesitation, and there are many people who make extreme choices due to malicious comments That's why I think we should use the real-name system.

10번 윤제은(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.

First, Animals are suffering in the zoo.
For example, polar bears are suffering from heating and they can not run on the snow so they get stressed. They even attack their babies.

Second, we need to spend a lot of money to feed them. In the zoo, it usually costs 2,500 million won just for feeding.
With inflation, it is more difficult to pay their food.

Third, Animals can't breed well in the zoo. Because of it's terrible condition, they get stressed and can't breed. This has a great loss for nature. Furthermore, some animals are in danger of extinction right now.

These reasons are why I think the zoo should be banned.
Thank you!

2번 김소연

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don’t think so.
I think zoos should exist.

First, without zoos, animals would try to harm humans.
There is a case in which a wild boar attacked and injured people. It is too dangerous for people.

Second, animals can only be seen if they go to their habitat.
If an animal lives in Indonesia, it has to go to Indonesia, and if it lives in the Arctic, it can only be seen in the Arctic.

Finally, endangered species will eventually become extinct.
Weak animals will continue to be eaten by strong animals, and they will eventually become extinct.

So I think zoos should exist.

14번 전혜안(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.

First, we need to release animals even if we like animals.
>>동물을 좋아하지만 가둬두면 안 된다 이런 의미 맞죠? 두번째 근거에 적은 내용이 첫 번째 근거랑 연결되는 것 같은데.. 동물들도 생명체이고 권리가 있다는 거..
They need to be free too. In the zoo, they don't have any freedom.

Second, animals originally live in the wild. They used to live in a different way. (used to ~했었다)
>>동물들은 사람들이 주는 먹이가 아니라 직접 사냥을 해서 먹었다. 그리고 스스로 살아남는 법을 배워야했다. 그것이 원래 동물들의 삶이다. 이런 내용으로 뒷받침하는 건 어떤지?

Third, they lost their family in the zoo.
>>좋은 근거라고 생각함. 큰 동물의 경우 가족들이 다 같이 살기보다는 흩어지는 경우가 있겠지요? 그리고 태어난 지 얼마 안 된 새끼동물들의 입장을 추가해서 쓰는 것도 좋겠음.

so I think zoo should be banned.

6번 박소민

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
I think zoo should be banned.

First, animals in the zoo are very uncomfortable.
Because, people see them often every day.

Second, they live in cage.
Therefore, They must be frustrated.

Third, we were let them be locked up in cage.
Animals have rights, too.

Therefore, zoo should be banned.

8번 서윤지(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so.

If zoos are closed, there will be many hungry and unhealthy animals. People can protect them from hunger and disease.

And there are some animals in the mountain or street. They can come to the town and harm or kill people. Some of them bumped into a car, making accidents. Animals can steal foods or crash down our life. People can protect ourselves with having zoos.

So I think banning zoos are not good idea.
Thank you🫡❕️

3번 김주은(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so too. I think zoos have to be banned for three reasons.

First, they can get injured. As they are taken away from their homes, they are not adapted to the new environment. So, they can do dangerous things.

Second, they can get homesick. As they are living at a new environment, they can miss their homes. For example, imagine that you're traveling far away. Wouldn't you feel homesick? Like this, animals can get it too.

Finally, they can be sick. They can get lots of stress from people as people watch them all the time. Also, as they are trapped in a small amount of space, they can be depressed.

In conclusion, I think zoos have to be banned for these reasons.
>>몇 개 표현만 수정했고, 나머지 잘 했음!

5번 김해인(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so too.
Zoos should be banned.
This is because animals that live in zoos are under tremendous stress and finally die inn sever cases.
For example, whales living in zoos die under stress or have flipper.
>>고래가 스트레스로 죽고 지느러미가 있다? 무슨 뜻인지?
Polar bears change their fur color because it is too hot.
>>북극곰이 동물원에 사나요?.. 동물원은 덥나요?

5번 김해인

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

So zoos should be banned.

11번 이서윤

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
Zoos do not play a role in protecting animals.
Do you know the puma who was shot dead on September 18, 2018 ?
The puma escaped from the zoo and was anesthetized, but was shot dead just because he fled again.
We must not contnue to allow wildife to be captured without permission in the name of protectio and become a spectacle for people.
This is torture , not anlmal protection.

19번 손예준

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think is to run a zoo because of global warminggg these day, the environment is not good for animal to live in, but it is easier to live in a zoo but, it is not good either Desert foxs,penguin,polar bear etc. need their environment to fit their bodies,but the zookeeper can't take care of them properly.

4번 김하린

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so, too.

First, zoos' environments are not good for animals.
A large zoo might be good, but when it's small, it is hard to live in. Korea's zoos are too small.

Second, animals can be hard to adjust zoos' environment.
Climate, environment are different from the environment which they lived before.

Last, I think animals rights are destroyed by zoo.
Watching and training them violates their rights.

So I think zoo should be banned, especially in Korea.

12번 인수정(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.

I think zoo shoud be banned.

First, displaying(전시) animals is a big STRESS for animals. We shoud also change our position(입장을 바꿔서 생각하자)..
>>누가 당신을 항상 구경하면 얼마나 스트레스를 받을지 생각해봐라. 이런 문장이 하나 더 있으면 좋을 듯.
Seconde, we don't know when the animals will escape and ATTACK us. There maybe a lot of death..
>>실제 동물원에서 ~~가 탈출해서 사람을 공격했더라 등등의 실제 이야기를 찾아서 추가하면 좋음.
Third, animals shoud not be used as recreational(오락용) and educational(교육용). Because that means we are BULLYIN animals.

So I think zoo shoud be banned.

27번 조민규(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.

Zoo should be banned. Why should we do that?

1. Animals will be stressed.

2. It violates the freedom and rights of animals.

3. No matter how much you try to go out of a small space, it will be uncomfortable because you can't go out.

So, I think zoo should be banned.
Thank you

20번 윤설범(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so.

First,school uniform is uncomfortable to wear.
Many people said uniforms were uncomfortable, and most of our classmates also said they were uncomfortable.

Second,you can't freely wear the clothes you want.
If we should wear school uniform,we can't wear our favorite clothes, and clothes that go well with us when go to school.

Last,we'll get bored if we keep wearing the same clothes

I don't agree with wearing a school uniform.

16번 김민찬(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so.
1. Wearing a school uniform makes me uncomfortable and stuffy.
Because school uniforms are not everyday clothes.
2. Prevent students from being free.
This is because school uniforms are fixed, so students cannot wear them as they want.
3. If you don't have a school uniform, you don't have clothes to wear
So, I'm against wearing school uniforms.

28번 조현민(new)>>수정함

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so.
I think wearing school uniform is bad.

First, students can't show their own colors and unique fashion style. Everyday they will wear same clothes, so they can't show their own unique fashion style. If they want to be eye-catched, they can wear red or pink colored clothes.
>>옷은 자신을 드러내는 수단. 패션으로 자신의 개성을 드러내는 연예인이나 혹은 자신의 옷에 대한 경험이나 사례 추가하기.

Second, students can be bored of wearing things. They will wear the same cloth everyday so they can't get fun of wearing clothes. Students will study everyday so they can't get fun of things. The only way to be happy is wearing clothes for them. But, if they wear the same school uniform, they will be not happy.
>>옷을 통한 즐거움, 만족감? (아무튼 1번과 겹치지 않는 근거로 수정하기)

Lastly, school uniforms are very uncomfortable.
They are mostly made of inflexible material. Student can get hard of wearing school uniform. If they wear flexible cloth they want, they can do PE comfortably.
>>편한 옷을 입으면 더 좋은 게 당연한(?) 것이지만 그래도 구체적으로 체육 시간 등 예시를 들어서 설명하면 좋겠음. 불편한 옷을 입었을 때의 단점도 그렇고.

In conclusion, wearing school uniform is bad.

2번 김소연(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
I think it is good to wear a school uniform.

First, it is easy to distinguish from other schools.
Among many schools, it is often difficult to recognize friends from the same school, but it is easy to distinguish them every time.

Second, you don't have to think about what to wear in the morning. It takes me a lot of time to think about what to wear in the morning.
Because there are so many things to do on a busy morning. However, there is no need to worry about this anymore.

Finally, you can feel unification.
I once performed with my friends in group clothes because I felt like I was on this team.

So I think it is good to wear a school uniform.

3번 김주은

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so too. I think school uniforms are good for two important reasons.

First, all students can be equal. Some students can have lots of money. So, they can wear pretty and expensive clothes. On the other hand, students who don't have enough money can't wear those clothes. So, they can be depressed. However, if they wear school uniforms, students can all be equal. As there are school uniforms, no one would be depressed.

Second, you can save lots of time. For example, when I get ready for school, I waste a lot of time choosing clothes. However, if there are school uniforms, we don't have to waste time in the morning. Like this, if there are school uniforms, we can save a lot of time.

In conclusion, all students can be equal and we can save a lot of time by wearing a school uniform. I think it is good for these reasons.

4번 김하린

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so too.

Firstly, students are equal if they wear a uniform.
People judge by their appearance, like clothes' brand.
So wearing uniform doesn't occur this discrimination.

Secondly, you can feel a sense of belonging.
So you will proud you're school.

Thirdly, you will be more easy to choose clothes.
Some people will have long time to choose clothes. But there is uniform, you don't have to choose clothes long time.

So I think uniform is good for students.

13번 임지유

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so too.😊
You can chat📱with your friends any time.
For example, there is Kakao Talk, message, Instagram, Dm
You can take pictures🎨 any time.
Most people take pictures to leave a memory📷
You can use the internet too
You can read books📖 or cartoons easily.
You can watch comfortably in bed🛏
You can do your homework with your smartphone
I always do my English homework on my smartphone
You can buy things📦 easily.
You can have fun😄 using a smartphone.
Using a smartphone is good 👍

7번 박소연

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
You know if you are using a smartphone, it's very useful.
You can use internet for searching what you don't know before like hard math problems.
And you can chat with your friends.
You can play the fun games, too.
Then, I think using smartphone is good.

20번 윤설범(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so, too!

First, you can find information using Internet.
>>나의 경우 스마트폰으로 ~를 검색한 적이 있다 내용 추가하기
Second, you can play games with your friends.
>>스마트폰 게임의 예시를 들어, 친구와 관계를 돈독히 할 수 있다는 내용 추가하기
Third, you can communicate with someone even at a distance by phone or message.
>>사용하는 스마트폰 앱들을 예로 들어 설명 보충하기
Finally, you can track the cell phone location to catch criminals or find out where they are.
>>범죄 예방에 도움이 된다는 내용이 신선함. 실제 스마트폰 위치 추적 기능을 활용해서 도움이 되었던 사례를 찾아보기.

I think using a smartphone is good, so I'll use my cell phone.

17번 김지웅

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so. 👍

Because
1#People can chat with friends who live far away.
Smartphones allow you to conveniently send and receive messages anytime, anywhere

2#People can take pictures and use the Internet with a smartphone.
People take pictures of food, scenery, themselves, etc., so it is convenient to have a smartphone

3#Smartphones are very fun.
Most people use a video app called YouTube a lot. Smartphones are fun video apps, and you can watch videos anywhere you have a smartphone.

I think using a smartphone is very good👍.

1번 고가빈(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so. Because we can easily check information with a smartphone.
And we talk to other person with a smartphone.

18번 서형욱

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
Because smartphones can talk on the phone with people who are far away For example, there are Kakao Talk, messages, and you can find the necessary information on the Internet. Other than that, I think it is good to use a smartphone because of listening to music or SNS (YouTube, Instagram, etc.).

27번 조민규(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I don't think so.
Some people don't talk too much with smartphones.
For me, I spend less time talking to my family. I don't need a smartphone much.
If you are addicted to smartphones, you will only use them all day long.
Finally, the relationship between friends and family can become distant.

For this reason, I think Using a smartphone is bad.

26번 조건우(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
There are three reasons that why using a smartphone is good.
First, you can communicate with others.
You can talk with others without meeting.
That's very comfortable.
>>You can save money, time and energy. 이 문장 중간에 추가하는건 어떤지?

Next, you can use smartphone anywhere, anytime.
Smartphone is small so you can go(carry it) anywhere.
And, you can use smartphone anytime.
But you should have (enough) data.

Finally, you can use internet.
When you don't know something, you can search it with a smartphone.
>>많은 사람들이 구글, 00,000을 검색을 하기 위해 이용한다. 예시 추가하기.
And you can use various apps such as youtube, games, and many others.
There are many useful apps in smartphone.

>>'그래서' I think using a smartphone is good.
What do you think?

12번 인수정

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so. I think using a smartphone is good 👍
I'll give three reasons why.

First. U can chat with your family or friend any time.
Is good for find your family and frind if you lost .
When you bored. You can chat with your bf!
Is really good for you

Second. U can play with your smartphone. When you bored. Like watching youtube ,playing Roblox .is good for you.

Third. You can use internet and translator. If you going other country you can translate that country language. Then it'll be
convenient. When you was doing the group project,you can find the data on the internet. It's gonna help your group
project.

So I think using a smartphone is good.
What do u think?

25번 이지우

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think using a smartphone is good.
Because playing game and Watching youtube channels are so fun.
>>어떤 게임을 하는지? 유튜브 채널 중 어떤 것을 즐겨 보는지 나의 이야기 추가하기.
Also People can send a message very easily

25번 이지우

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

추가해할 내용 smartphone is 👍 play game 🎮 roblox is good so listen music 🎶 so camara very very good(^_^)(^_^)(^_^) YouTube watching hot sauce❤️‍🔥is very good

21번 윤우성

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so, too. The good thing about using a cell phone is that you can talk much more comfortably than going there and talking in person, see Internet articles, call, and play fun games. Thank you.

7번 박소연(new)

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
After school is good for students.

You can get good experiences from there.

You can do some fun activities that you wanted, like P.E, art etc.

And you can make many friends in after school, too!

for these reasons, I think after school is good.

15번 홍윤서

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so.
After school is good.
First, you can do hobby activities after school, so you can relieve stress with hobby activities.
Second, you can review what you didn't understand in school class after school.
Third, You can learn what you want to learn after school.
After school is good.

28번 조현민

2022-11-25 03:01:58 UTC

I think so, too.
I think after school is good.

First, students will do many activities. If they stay at home, they will be unhealthy. They need to move to be healthy.

Second, they can develop their cooperation with their friends. They will do many activities, so they would need to cooperate with their friends. Then they can be good friends, too.

In conclusion, after school is good.

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