Rise Up Creating Poetry by Huu Thang Duong

s04028_1 — 2024-12-16 03:29:52 UTC

Words/Phrases that Describe Me

s04028_1 — 2024-12-16 03:56:35 UTC

Passionate
Cheerful
Excitable
Amusing
Energetic
Athletic

Self Portrait Poem

s04028_1 — 2024-12-19 04:40:40 UTC

My passion's loud and proud, no doubt,
It’s what I’m all about.

I’m excitable, making hearts race,
Bringing smiles to every face.

I’m athletic and full of energy,
But I can still be poetic with a stomach full of celery.

Racism

s04028_1 — 2025-01-08 03:45:33 UTC

Racism is the belief that some races are better or worse than others. It leads to unfair treatment of people based on their race or background.

Key Points

Prejudice: Racism involves negative feelings or beliefs about people because of their race.
Discrimination: It can result in unfair actions, like not excluding someone because of their race.
Types of Racism

Individual Racism: Personal beliefs and actions that show bias against others.
Institutional Racism: When organizations or systems (like schools or businesses) have policies that disadvantage groups.
Why It Matters

Racism affects people's lives in many ways, including access to jobs, education, and healthcare. Understanding racism helps us work towards a fairer society for everyone.

Gender Inequality

s04028_1 — 2025-01-08 03:53:26 UTC

Gender inequality is the belief that one gender is superior to another, leading to unfair treatment based on gender.

Key Points

Prejudice: Gender inequality involves negative beliefs about people because of their gender.
Discrimination: It can result in unfair actions, such as denying someone a job or opportunity based on their gender.
Government Issues: Gender inequality is not just about personal attitudes, but it is in laws, creating societal inequalities.

Types of Gender Inequality

Economic Inequality: Disparities in pay and job opportunities between genders.
Educational inequality: Differences in access to education based on gender, often disadvantaging girls.
Political Representation: Underrepresentation of women in leadership and decision-making roles.

Why It Matters

Gender inequality affects access to jobs, education, healthcare, and safety. Understanding gender inequality helps for a more fair society for everyone.

Place

s04028_1 — 2025-01-09 07:48:19 UTC

I want to write my poem about racism in South Africa because it’s a place where people are often judged not just by their actions but by the color of their skin. I want to explore how these experiences shape lives and communities and highlight the resilience of those who face discrimination. It’s important to reflect on these issues and share stories of hope and change.

Time

s04028_1 — 2025-01-09 07:48:29 UTC

I want to write my poem about racism in South Africa in the early 2000s. This was a time of change and reflection as the country sought to address its past. I want to explore the everyday experiences of people dealing with lingering prejudices and the complexities of identity. Focusing on this specific time allows me to highlight both the struggles and the hopes for a more inclusive future.

Racism

s04028_1 — 2025-01-09 07:49:13 UTC

Racism Article # 1

s04028_1 — 2025-01-16 04:08:20 UTC

Racism refers to the discriminatory treatment of individuals based on their skin color, culture, language, or religious beliefs. It manifests in various forms and affects numerous groups, including Jewish and Muslim communities, as evidenced by anti-Semitism and Islamophobia. In the UK, racism is not only socially damaging but is also classified as a hate crime, with significant legal implications for perpetrators. Understanding the roots of racism involves recognizing societal influences, historical contexts, and privilege.

Racism Article # 2

s04028_1 — 2025-01-16 04:09:38 UTC

Structure

s04028_1 — 2025-01-16 04:11:15 UTC

I will do the rhyming structure (AABB)

Why This Structure?

Memorable: Easy to remember.
Clear Ideas: Each stanza can focus on a different aspect.
Engaging: Rhymes create a rhythm that draws in the reader.

How This Structure Fits the Issue of Racism:

Emphasizes Points: Highlights important messages.
Tells a Story: Connects personal experiences and broader themes.

My First Draft

s04028_1 — 2025-01-21 06:32:58 UTC

In a land where colors mix,

People are judged by their skin and not tricks.

In the 2000s, the change was close to near,

But the past still causes a little bit of fear.

Each day, they stand strong and bold,
Dreaming of a future, not like the old.

Through the dark, the light will shine,

if we work together, we can make it fine.

Persona

s04028_1 — 2025-01-21 06:40:21 UTC

My poem is told from a third-person perspective. I, the narrator, observe the issues faced by the people in South Africa, providing information about their struggles and hopes. While I am not directly experiencing the problems, I convey the emotions and experiences of those affected, creating a connection with the audience.

Reflection

s04028_1 — 2025-01-22 03:27:03 UTC

How are you finding the writing process so far?

This writing process has been very enjoyable as I like to rhyme and make my poems catchy.
What has helped inspire you?

Recently, a lot of music has been released and it inspired me to do the same. Even though I can't rap, I can at least try to rhyme.

What part of the process has been the most enjoyable? the least enjoyable?

The most enjoyable part of this is the finished product because it's really fun to read; however, when writing it, you have to put a lot of thought into the poem.

How is your first draft going so far?

I finished my first draft, and I think it is pretty good, but it could be better, so I am waiting for some feedback from Mr Reyes.

Reflection #1

s04028_1 — 2025-01-23 07:40:13 UTC

What poem will you write about?

The poem I will write about is Racism

Why did you choose this issue?

I chose this issue because it's still common to this day and because I can empathize with them.

How will others respond to your presented issue?

I think others will respond with empathy and some might respond with sympathy because some of them can relate.

How do you think your research will help convey the information to others?

I think the research that I have done will help me convey information by giving me key points about racism which will then convey to my poem.

Peer Feedback Video

s04028_1 — 2025-02-10 04:01:38 UTC

Peer Feedback Sheet

s04028_1 — 2025-02-10 04:04:52 UTC

Peer Feedback 2

s04028_1 — 2025-02-10 04:05:28 UTC

Teacher Feedback Video

s04028_1 — 2025-02-13 04:37:20 UTC

Teacher Feedback Video

s04028_1 — 2025-02-13 04:41:54 UTC

Serious Luv

s04028_1 — 2025-02-18 06:51:03 UTC

I think all the stanzas had a little bit of unseriousness in it. For example, they used words like dat (that), de (the), luv (love), and shews (chews). In order for this to be more serious, it should include more formal word choices.

Additionally, it was talking about school love, so it would give immature vibes. So, to change this, I would make workplace love vibes by changing the setting.

Show Dont Tell Word Wall

s04028_1 — 2025-02-19 03:43:15 UTC

Final reflection

s04028_1 — 2025-02-20 07:21:41 UTC

In a land where colors mix,
People are judged by their skin and not tricks.
In the 2000s, the change was close to near,
But the past still causes a little bit of fear.
Will we ever leave this fear behind?

Each day, they stand strong and bold,
Dreaming of a future, not like the old.
They fight for justice and refuse to hide,
Hoping for their pride to be untied.
How long must they fight to be seen as equal?

Through the dark, the light will shine,
If we work together, we can make it fine.
With open hearts and hands held tight,
We can rebuild a world that’s fair and right.
Isn’t unity the key to change?

Let kindness lead, let hate subside,
Stand together, side by side.
Raise your voice, and refuse to wait
Will you choose freedom before it’s too late?
Or will history repeat once more?