English Padlet challenge by

Are there any words that rhyme in the poem? What you do notice about the pattern of the rhyming words?

GeorgiaDuncan_ — 2023-05-25 08:59:26 UTC

If you could uplevel anything about poem 2 what would it be and why?

GeorgiaDuncan_ — 2023-05-25 09:01:56 UTC

*Don't forget it still needs to fit the success criteria.

What is your favourite stanza in poem 4? Why do you think it's the most impactful stanza?

GeorgiaDuncan_ — 2023-05-25 09:07:21 UTC

You have the chance to ask the poet, J.S, a question about his poem. Write a question that you would like to ask him:

GeorgiaDuncan_ — 2023-05-25 09:08:22 UTC

2023-06-05 10:51:24 UTC

It was the most impactful because it didn’t have any rules and it was creative.

2023-06-05 10:53:13 UTC

I give it 2 stars because I like poems that have a message

Põem 2 challenge 1

ka7486 — 2023-06-05 10:53:51 UTC

Yes there are rhymes in the poem some lines have

Star

2023-06-05 10:53:53 UTC

There were a lot of words that rhyme like far and the 1,2 and 5 rhyme.

2023-06-05 10:53:56 UTC

Onomatopoeia

2023-06-05 10:53:57 UTC

The last stanza becuase it was really impactful and I like onamatapea -mikael

2023-06-05 10:54:38 UTC

Star and far

Mohamad

2023-06-05 10:54:42 UTC

There was words that rhymed like she knew she would never go far

Lulia

2023-06-05 10:54:46 UTC

A longer poem

Lulia

2023-06-05 10:55:13 UTC

A longer poem

Mohamad

2023-06-05 10:56:59 UTC

I would change the ending because I don’t want the star to give up

Stanza 3 because it’s funny it says he doesn’t like alliteration but he using it

2023-06-05 10:57:26 UTC

My FSIN 3 becuz IISE

2023-06-05 10:58:11 UTC

How did you think of writing this poem

2023-06-05 10:58:42 UTC

I notice the words star,far,down and clown

2023-06-05 10:58:54 UTC

I notice the words star and far rhyme I also notice down and clown

2023-06-05 10:59:03 UTC

2023-06-05 10:59:05 UTC

My FSIN 3 Because IISE

My favorite part of the poem is that it is long

2023-06-05 10:59:08 UTC

Talia

Poem 4

aliadoesnotlikefatrats — 2023-06-05 10:59:26 UTC

My favorite part of the poem is that you can just go free style so it’s fun

Zaki 4Wpo

2023-06-05 10:59:48 UTC

It sounds the same

David

2023-06-05 10:59:55 UTC

I noticed that poem 2 first second and fifth rhymed with the words star and far

Star,far and down,clown rhyme

2023-06-05 11:00:02 UTC

Star and far and down and clown

Saif

2023-06-05 11:00:08 UTC

I dont like repetition because it is really funny and the spotlight is on it

2023-06-05 11:00:33 UTC

My FSIN 3 Becuz IISE

English

2023-06-05 11:01:08 UTC

I liked Poem 2 because the word “Star”

They could uplevel the word far

2023-06-05 11:01:26 UTC

2023-06-05 11:01:30 UTC

I liked Poem 2 because of the word “star”

2023-06-05 11:01:31 UTC

HGH BT great DD d co tgbhy be BC u de za za cr by bh

2023-06-05 11:01:39 UTC

Ytdgrdgrd GGG rdgdrgxfgzdfszf

2023-06-05 11:01:51 UTC

Grdfzd Trd Fed sada sad a fkkk of KKK DCCC sds;\<.~!|~

2023-06-05 11:02:02 UTC

F to ergfdgdrgtdhbhh

2023-06-05 11:02:05 UTC

I like it because it says messy
Yousef

My FSI

2023-06-05 11:02:06 UTC

2023-06-05 11:02:12 UTC

Grdgrsgsrhtehthhhjjj u fd to setse

Saif

2023-06-05 11:03:28 UTC

Put more adjectives

Zaki 4Wpo

2023-06-05 11:04:07 UTC

“Far” is repeated at the end of the second and fifth sentence and

Zaki wpo

2023-06-05 11:05:15 UTC

Ironic

2023-06-05 11:09:08 UTC

Onomatopoeia

Omar

2023-06-08 10:46:58 UTC

A BOOM and a POW

Olamide

2023-06-08 10:47:34 UTC

I noticed that the words at the end of 3 and 4 rhyme and the words at the end of 2 and 5 rhyme.

2023-06-08 10:48:06 UTC

How long did it take you to publish this poem

Anya

2023-06-08 10:48:41 UTC

Yes. I notice that the 1st 2nd and 5th line rhyme

Olamide

2023-06-08 10:48:49 UTC

I would uplevel the vocabulary because poem 2 has very simple vocabulary

Omar

2023-06-08 10:48:52 UTC

What is your gramer score

2023-06-08 10:49:00 UTC

My favourite stanza is number 2

Myra

2023-06-08 10:49:14 UTC

The last one because it is a good exit stanza

2023-06-08 10:50:08 UTC

Yes they do rhyme,I noticed the word far and star rhyme

Anya

2023-06-08 10:50:24 UTC

II like the repition one because it is really funny

2023-06-08 10:50:50 UTC

Star and far

Down and clown

Anya

2023-06-08 10:50:55 UTC

Why did you write it

Poem 2

2023-06-08 10:51:10 UTC

It’s always

I Liked it because it is funny

2023-06-08 10:51:35 UTC

Jude

2023-06-08 10:51:56 UTC

Far
Star

2023-06-08 10:52:32 UTC

To make it more mature.

2023-06-08 10:53:09 UTC

How do you get the idea of all your Poems

2023-06-08 10:53:14 UTC

I give ‘Star’ 3 stars because it was short and was not very interesting
Layla

2023-06-08 10:53:57 UTC

Stanza 2 .I like it more because I like the adjectives

Jude

2023-06-08 10:54:13 UTC

Ilove Spaggeti

Star and far

2023-06-08 10:54:44 UTC

Julia

2023-06-08 10:55:47 UTC

Star far down clown

Olamide

2023-06-08 10:56:00 UTC

Shrimp gobbler

Olamide

2023-06-08 10:56:32 UTC

What was the inspiration for this poem

arya

2023-06-08 10:56:33 UTC

Why did you write it

Myra

2023-06-08 10:57:02 UTC

Star-Far-Far
Down-Clown

2023-06-08 10:57:12 UTC

What was the inspiration for this poem and why is it called ocean creation

Julia

2023-06-08 10:57:16 UTC

More adjectives

More rhymes

2023-06-08 10:57:38 UTC

2023-06-08 10:57:42 UTC

Star far
Down clown

Julia

2023-06-08 10:58:35 UTC

First paragraph because it’s funny and it says my fingers feel like sweaty sausages

I would add more adjectives

2023-06-08 10:59:32 UTC

Myra

2023-06-08 11:00:00 UTC

I would make the last line have a different word at the end that also rhymes

Ugh

2023-06-08 11:00:25 UTC

Julia

2023-06-08 11:00:29 UTC

Why do you not like repetition

2023-06-08 11:00:40 UTC

Star and far
Clown and down

Far and star and down and clown

2023-06-08 11:01:15 UTC

I like the exclamations like CRASH, ZAP and BANG!

2023-06-08 11:01:31 UTC

ka12924 — 2023-06-08 11:01:48 UTC

I like the second stanza because it has interesting adjectives

Yes

2023-06-08 11:01:50 UTC

Yes

Yes the first one is star and far the second one is clown and Down

2023-06-08 11:01:51 UTC

Arya

2023-06-08 11:01:54 UTC

I wish i could blow it up with a ZAP

2023-06-08 11:01:56 UTC

Yes there first one is str and far the second one is
Clown and down

2023-06-08 11:02:31 UTC

Make it about something else

Aysel

2023-06-08 11:05:24 UTC

1)star-far
2)down-clown
I would remove the and on the 4th line to make it sound better

2023-06-08 11:05:34 UTC

My favorite is ocean creation

2023-06-08 11:06:16 UTC

My favorite poem was I don’t like poetry because it was like a book and I love books

Hannah
I would rate this:
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

2023-06-08 11:55:39 UTC

My favourit poem was the 1 one

2023-06-08 14:32:48 UTC

All of them at the end of the