9th Grade Review Peer Feedback by Arantxa Figueroa https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q en-us 2023-10-02 21:48:03 UTC 2024-04-05 17:58:27 UTC hello@padlet.com Writing Goal & Feedback Question & Link afigueroa148_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2729306852 The first post under your name should have the follow information:
1. Your Writing Goal
My writing goal is to....
2. Your Feedback Question
When you read my work, I would like your feedback on
3. A link to your WoW  shared with your group members and teacher ONLY!  ]]> 2023-10-02 21:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2729306852 Read your Review aloud to your group. afigueroa148_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2729306853 If you will be absent, leave a voice recording of you reading your WoW (click the three dots next to camera icon).]]> 2023-10-02 21:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2729306853 Give feedback to your group members in their post. afigueroa148_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2729306854
Listen to all your group members, then leave a voice, video, or text response of positive and critical feedback in the comment section.

Use the placemat: Guidelines for Giving Kind, Specific, and Helpful Feedback
]]> 2023-10-02 21:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2729306854 afigueroa148_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2729306855 Writing Goal - My writing goal is to use various author moves.
Feedback Question - When you read my work, I would like your feedback on the clarity of my ideas.

Link - https://docs.google.com/document/d/14pbs-Jf9W8E_wfHLZ-jkptvxm9ToLt73p11VTXeug1s/edit?usp=sharing ]]> 2023-10-02 21:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2729306855 Mia, Evelyn, Nelly, Mariah, Josh, Melika afigueroa148_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2732398003 Black]]> 2023-10-04 16:25:05 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2732398003 Khoi, Thanh, Cao, Huy, Ismael, Regino afigueroa148_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2732398699 Orange]]> 2023-10-04 16:25:30 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2732398699 Jasmine, Sofia, Andrew, Adara, Danna, Jovani afigueroa148_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2732399233 Yellow]]> 2023-10-04 16:25:48 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2732399233 Kritika, Marissa, Jewel, Jackie, Dylan, Diego T afigueroa148_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2732399751 White]]> 2023-10-04 16:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2732399751 Davin, Brianna, Hikaru, Diego G., Jomari, Emmanuel afigueroa148_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2732400654 Pink]]> 2023-10-04 16:26:39 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2732400654 Khoi https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734300153 Writing Goal- My writing goal is to remove unnecessary words in my piece of writing.
Feedback Question-When you read my work, I would like your feedback on how to smoothly transition a new paragraph.
Link:https://docs.google.com/document/d/17Ezl7_sL75wHKw2eXjMcBDg2iMy43pQt3TemIkKvUzg/edit?usp=sharing

]]> 2023-10-05 16:58:34 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734300153 cao s210093_21_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734301653 writing goal - my writing goal is to use the author's moves, styles and devices to build connections between me and other things 
feedback question - when you read my work, i would like your feedback on my use of devices and what i can improve in my writing of my reflection 

link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N-ZZULf-1dAPKgGubiNYwo5iK4SfYyferAsd5ylsIgE/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2023-10-05 16:59:32 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734301653 s166975_1_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734301703 My writing goal is to write more descriptively. Feedback Question - When you read my work, is it descriptive? Is there unnecessary words?]]> 2023-10-05 16:59:34 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734301703 s188027 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734302299 Writing Goal - My Writing Goal is to have a clear and fluent essay.
Feedback Question - When you read my work, I would like your feedback on the clarity of my text.

Link - 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LnBjQo3GKckwx_ePQH7-qxaZC9KKfy3fVcHfochZS1o/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2023-10-05 16:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734302299 Writing goal s212758_4_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734302620 My writing goal is to write better figurative language. Feedback question-When you read my work does it have enough detail.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/119RAHRRuwqQ3Fof8Q-R6__0pgfIVg_RhUcuuISRR1H4/edit]]> 2023-10-05 17:00:06 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734302620 Brianna s168198_1_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734303370 Writing Goal - My writing goal is to use different author moves. 
Feedback Question - when you read my work I want you to see if I used the author moves correctly or how I can add more to my writing.]]> 2023-10-05 17:00:35 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734303370 sofi https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734303604 My writing goal is to add more details and work on my transitions. I would like your feedback on the way my essay sounds
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wgKcPFZ5alcufRAG99HSBNEQntvcJRcgtT56DCx6VwU/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2023-10-05 17:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734303604 Marissa https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734303857 Writing goal- My writing goal is to make sure my writing makes sense 
Feedback question- what can i do to make sure my writing makes sense ]]> 2023-10-05 17:00:56 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734303857 Nelly https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734303924 writing goal-My writing goal is to stop run on sentences.
Feedback question-How can I use better wording in my sentences?

Link-
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cO_eAOZQVFX9AOzbYNUm6oFTHnfEYu52K4Tjd_KkQlE/edit]]> 2023-10-05 17:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734303924 Jewel https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734303926 Writing Goal: My writing goal is to use a better vocabulary.
Feedback: I would like your feedback on how I can use a more advanced vocabulary and to remove unnecessary sentences 

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Sy9PxuJmZlaeyIl0zjR2WW0E5Niwfs5nyecr_eW_ebE/edit?usp=sharing


]]> 2023-10-05 17:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734303926 Jackie https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734304110 Writing Goal: My writing goal is to add one more author move.
Feedback Question: When you read my work what is another author move that I can add?


]]> 2023-10-05 17:01:06 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734304110 jomari https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734304161 My writing goal is to effectively use writing goals and author moves and use less repititions of words in my phrases and sentences- when you read my work i would like feedback on transitions to paragraphs

Link thingy-

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BHYvq8TwyBNJr40vr3KPCsOD7BOuccpATek0rjUn8vk/edit

]]> 2023-10-05 17:01:08 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734304161 Diego https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734304431 My goal is to add more details to my writing to make it more descriptive and in depth for the people that read it so they can understand it.How can I improve my grammar?]]> 2023-10-05 17:01:20 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734304431 Davin https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734304849 writing goal - my writing goal is to write in a way that makes more sense - when you read my work i would like your feedback on how understandable the text was


 ]]> 2023-10-05 17:01:37 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734304849 Ismael s213119_3_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734305215 MY writing goal is to get rid of unnecessary sentences


https://docs.google.com/document/d/196a-iCOBtqe23niij8xFZ-q9o02Sw2Q0oWppfwEHsFs/edit]]> 2023-10-05 17:01:53 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734305215 regino https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734305295 my writing goal is to try to simplify my work , but mainly use a diverse of author moves 
how can i improve on my author moves?
when you read my work , i would like your feedback on the clarity of my ideas 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tUHpfIokiAg6TRt-8xf6BG0Azn4Q0zSWQpBLi3ClDAQ/edit

]]> 2023-10-05 17:01:57 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734305295 witerally s168668_1_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734306450 My writing goal is to use more figurative language

Feedback question - does mine have enough yapping?

]]> 2023-10-05 17:02:46 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734306450 Jasmine R s169723_1_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734307012 Writing goal- My writing goal is to remove unnecessary words and sentences in my essay
Feedback question- When you read my work, I would like your feedback on better wording in my sentences and my fluency]]> 2023-10-05 17:03:08 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734307012 something s166131_1_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734307048 My writing goal is making my work more entertaining, please give me feedback on how I should use the author moves to make my essays better.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lh05Addx4UxUNG-RzFxy8AxU3D2YWz4dSKNKk6j21bo/edit]]> 2023-10-05 17:03:10 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734307048 Thanh - Writing Goal & Feedback Question & Link https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734307143 My writing goal is to use variety and correct author moves and literacy devices.
Feedback Question- When You read my work, please give me feedback on how can I improve, Am I providing at least four of them? What kinds of author moves that best fit and can improve my writing?
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12oXgdJM6hXWOtCdEUTwmNl4M15Au-8sROfE_iVGW9_8/edit


]]> 2023-10-05 17:03:14 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734307143 Diego T's writing Goal/ Feedback Question s213019_6_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734307200 Writing goal: My writing goal is to write more because I suck at writing and maybe make less grammar mistakes

Feedback Question: How can I write longer and have less grammar 
mistakes


]]> 2023-10-05 17:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734307200 Josh s192043_ https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734307225 Writing Goal - My writing goal is to write enough to get a good grade.
Feedback Question - when you read my work, I would like you to know that I really didn't do anything. it.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gqqHGnEiQjmxhNKux-BUVtakceDrxisAYOFNKY3EvMo/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2023-10-05 17:03:17 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734307225 Kritika https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734309207 Learning goal - is to check if i have all the required things to get a (4) in the assessment.
Feedback Questions-
1)if the paragraphs are good,or if want to me to add more
2)errors
Link-https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bWOibxdY2-OAUPEOcffiyi3hJ081D9hG8J8JIcL9bng/edit

]]> 2023-10-05 17:04:45 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734309207 s187795_1_1 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734310213 Writing goal - My writing goal is to be able to write strongly and have good points in my writing. 
Feedback question - When you read my work I would like your feedback on what I should either add or take away.

Link- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Yw6tWM7HNqx_Gzgg4e2l3BvuJp7Fj3XJ9TrBJANV_S0/edit?usp=sharing




]]> 2023-10-05 17:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734310213 Huy https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734311300 Writing goal - My goal is to use the author's move to make connections with the readers
Feedback Question - When you read my work, I would like you to give me feedback on how I can improve better in my piece of writing.
Link-https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wvapEWs54CPhWzsJSHcOSPvVgrM_N8Iq_irsm-bDG2s/edit]]> 2023-10-05 17:06:12 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734311300 Adara https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734323224 Writing Goal - My writing goal is to make sure im using Author moves correctly in my writing.
Feedback Question - When you read my work, I would like your feedback on how to make sure i make smooth transitions in my writing.]]> 2023-10-05 17:14:33 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2734323224 s167353 https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2740273858 Writing Goal -  my writing goal is to keep my readers engaged
Feedback Question - how can i make my writing simple and interesting ]]> 2023-10-10 16:19:50 UTC https://padlet.com/afigueroa148_1/cfgd0wgdxwwhme3q/wish/2740273858