https://padlet.com/23tgain/cf7qwx422ouz Thanks for reading my writing. en-us 2018-02-01 15:01:26 UTC 2025-10-07 04:16:30 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Manbag.png 23scohen https://padlet.com/23tgain/cf7qwx422ouz/wish/236950676 Hello again readers, I am here to talk about “Contrasting Climate Change” by Thomas G. I personally thought it was pretty good in most parts, but some were eh. So let me stop my jibber jabbering and get to the review. The first part in particular that I liked was when he used his data. I feel he picked strong data and was very crucial to the piece. Also it is really great word choice that I personally probably wouldn’t think of. The next part that I liked was how he had a great hook. it grabbed my attention. Now for the part that I didn’t like. Me personally, much like the other review, I did NOT like the ending.i think that a quote ins't a good way to finish a story/essay. anyway that concludes the review of “Contrasting Climate Change” by Thomas G. see you next time on the next review by Sam’s Stupendous Story Reviews.]]> 2018-03-01 15:11:41 UTC https://padlet.com/23tgain/cf7qwx422ouz/wish/236950676 23mwhitney https://padlet.com/23tgain/cf7qwx422ouz/wish/237530324 STAR: I really liked how you described the table, it allowed me to get deeper into the story because I could understand what you wanted so badly. I could picture the table in my head because you described it so well. 
STAR: I really like how you included your feelings when you were carrying the table home. It added a lot to the moral story, and I could tell exactly how you felt.
WISH: Next time, I would try to substitute some more words in your piece for better word choice, because it would add more to your story, making it even better. Overall, great job!]]> 2018-03-02 18:05:26 UTC https://padlet.com/23tgain/cf7qwx422ouz/wish/237530324 23hali https://padlet.com/23tgain/cf7qwx422ouz/wish/246909338 Hey Thomas!! Your article was simply... sublime. Your word choice was so good I had to look up what half the words mean, not to mention the organization of your piece, which flowed beautifully. One thing to consider next time would be to reread and make sure everything makes sense. Overall, your writing is lighting the world with the knowledge of a military base hiding in Canada.]]> 2018-03-28 14:11:16 UTC https://padlet.com/23tgain/cf7qwx422ouz/wish/246909338 https://padlet.com/23tgain/cf7qwx422ouz/wish/246995836 2018-03-28 17:06:36 UTC https://padlet.com/23tgain/cf7qwx422ouz/wish/246995836 https://padlet.com/23tgain/cf7qwx422ouz/wish/246995926 Your article was very good. I could very clearly sense the tone of voice in the article. I could tell that you enjoyed writing/creating this article. The one thing I wish was different, make your name bigger. Which sounds dumb but you know. Great Job!
-Riley V]]> 2018-03-28 17:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/23tgain/cf7qwx422ouz/wish/246995926