Cellar Descriptions by https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u Write your name and Cellar Descriptions and wait for feedback from your peers and the teacher. Each of you must provide feedback to at least 3 people. en-us 2017-10-20 03:00:34 UTC 2023-05-14 10:53:35 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Simplehouse.png Miss Catlin My dry eyes have adjusted to peer through the darkness and dust filled air. A small body sat slumped against the far wall, hair dripped in curls from his head like a honey volcano. The moonlight shone through a crack in the moulding chipped roof, illuminating the seven pale faces before me. I wasn't alone... rachel_catlin1 https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198926524 2017-10-20 03:08:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198926524 Tom landed headfirst into the dust and grime of his new home. The ceiling crumbles like a biscuit. The walls are as crumbly as a biscuit. The boys starve until suddenly they are just bones no meat only bones. when they wake up you can hear the footsteps trying to see daylight. zane_cassie https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928135 2017-10-20 03:23:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928135 The clothes were as thick and raggy as a sack layer hugo_hawkins https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928294 2017-10-20 03:23:16 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928294 Late that night Jensen creped down the stairs and smelt this mouldy food and an annoying sound. The squealing pierces his ears and he imagines an abandoned baby stuck in the blackness. But it was only the creeping door. The cold wind was attacking pale flesh consistently and with no mercy. Jensen stairs motionless into the dark haze of the room. When will this nightmare end? nicholas_barrasso https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928303 2017-10-20 03:23:21 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928303 I am walking down the old, dusty stairs. Now I am on the last step before I get to the old cellar. I am in the cellar now every one is looking at me. They not even welcome me. The room smells musty. There are no beds just bags with something in them and some old wood and boxes. addison_volante https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928321
At last everyone leaves, its just me now. Why did my mum and dad leave me here? They may of been to sick to take care of me or did they get sick of me? I wish I was back home. I looks at the bags.

Someone came in to the room to get something. I asked there name they said "my name is Tom and I am 8 years old. What is your name?" I told tom "my name is Jack" "oh hello Jack" tom said. I said " what are in those bags." Tom said "there is soot in those bags" "oh" I said.

At last it was time to go to bed, I sat down on the hard dusty bags of soot. They are harder then I thought, it is so hard to get to sleep. At last I got to sleep every one is already sleeping too.

The sun was coming up so I just got up because I did not want to sleep on the hard bags of soot anymore. Everyone was gone. Where did they all go?, I wonder.

]]> 2017-10-20 03:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928321 The crickets murmured in the dark and dirty cellar. Zac walked down the cold stone stairs, brushing his hand across the dirty wooden rail. The cellar was as small as a tiny stone box, Its as dusty as a desert,and as rusty as an old car and Its so worn down like an old broken toy. jonathan_tsiamis https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928346

]]> 2017-10-20 03:23:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928346 https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928385 Late one night master jack stepped through a familiar door. An awquad smell flew past the cellar stairs. The darkness of the cellar awakens. No light to be seen. All tom could hear were the big footsteps of master jack. He wonders why he’s coming down to see them. The door opens. Master jack marches through the dark. “Ye going to sleep”. Then a fluffy headed shadow appears from pitch black. he dived into a blanket of boys. they were a sheet over tom, luckly. Because him and his heart were colder than ever.   
Alexa 


]]> 2017-10-20 03:24:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928385 With a sharp tug I tumble through the doorway. All over every wall were cracks, some deeper than others. 'Where are those brats?' a voice muttered above me. I looked all over the room wondering where all the other boys were. they were probably hidden behind something or obscured from my view. I suddenly have a feeling of dread. Maybe the boys aren't hidden, but they're hiding. I'm shoved from behind. 'Get in 'ere'. 'yes sir' I almost whisper. 'It's Master Jack to you'. Master Jack slams the door behind me and I hear a click. I look around. All the boys appear out of their hiding spots. They all stare at me blankly. I stare out at this one boy. All of them are covered in black. Later that day, Master Jack comes back and throws me some rough piece of cloth. 'Put this on now!' He almost shouts. He storms off clicking the lock behind him. 'Hi' I say tentatively. 'Hi' mutters a boy. 'I'm Tom' says the boy. ' I'm James'. We are silent for a while. I suddenly feel tired and so does every body else. 'So where do we sleep?' I ask. 'anywhere', Tom says henriette_miller https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928478
 
By Henri]]> 2017-10-20 03:25:13 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928478 Late that night Josh creeped down the stairs, at home there was carpet here there is dirt, at home there is light here there is darkness, at home there is warmth, here it's freezing, here is a lot different to home. tom_cameron https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928608 Josh finally woke up  and because he was soused to home, that this morning he tried to put on his slippers. But when he looked down, he realised they weren't slippers, they were rats. He was screaming, and when Master jack found out he wasn't to happy, so he could him up and cave him 5 lashings. It didn't heart to much, compered to what he has already had.

]]> 2017-10-20 03:26:20 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928608 David slowly and carefully tiptoed down the rickety, old, stairs. Tom was awaken by the cellar door creaking open from the outside. and soon after there was darkness. a mouldy smell was wreaking havoc in David's lungs while the mist, running around him. hugo_hawkins https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928776 2017-10-20 03:27:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198928776 Anthony got pushed down the crumbled cellar stairs by master Jack. Anthony smelled the air and coughed, then master Jack said "you'll get used to it". Everyone in the cellar started whispering to each other when Anthony walked in. "This will be your new home for a long time" Master Jack said. A boy came up to Anthony and said "hello my name is Tom what's yours?" "I a-am Anthony " he said. Tom looked dirty and he smelled really bad. Then Tom said, "I am eight years old how old are you?" I am seven years old. What is this place? Anthony asked this is where kids are forced to clean chimneys. Tom said. Jack_Lowry https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198929120


]]> 2017-10-20 03:30:06 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198929120 It feels like I am in a oven so hot I am burnt to a crisp. My arm getting tired so much soot the bricks are digging into my red burnt back. I went up and up almost smelling fresh air. An echo came up a new voice I here I wonder who it is... by Bella https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198929162 2017-10-20 03:30:38 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198929162 Cellar Description It gets cramped as all the boys roll, move and push each other but its worth the warmth while we sleep. It’s so dirty my shoes imprint on the floor boards as if it were mud. The cellar is as dark as the night sky, rotting away like a prisoner in a cracked jail. When rain falls the boys shiver. Large drops of heavenly rain sweats through splits in the roof and paints the staving bodies. The boys try to sleep while lights flicker in the cracks. It gets nosier and nosier as the boys chough because of the soot. In the dark I search for family but no family was to be found. https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198929240 -Emily]]> 2017-10-20 03:31:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198929240 I walk down the ancient dusty stairs. The clothes that cover my body are well worn and begin to bite into my neck. I tug on the rusty door knob to find two boys were looking at me. My eyes blur as I watch them shake from their knees. What where they so afraid of? I slowly stumble past them into the dimly lit corridor. At the end I find a room, cruel, cramped and hiding from the world. The boys tug my shirt and I spin around "Hi", I said, "I am Jack" , "Hi I'm Tom and this is Will" pointing at the other boy. They look scared, their eyes big there body still shaking. cate_willment https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198929643
The next day I am in a room with two boys a room that smells like sweat and rat poop what am I doing here BUT I remember my mum, dad, brother and sister dead.

]]> 2017-10-20 03:33:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198929643 celler lucas_armstrong3 https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198929976 i'm walking in, its dark, dusty and i dont think it's going to be happy. Master Jack is hitting me with a whip hes getting blood and mucus all over me he's very grumpy and looks like he had a bad day I keep on tripping over all these dirty rocks, I like it better at home with my cosy bed and my cuddly toys I miss that stuff I wonder why I'm even here and now I've just been thrown inside a cold and dirty room it makes my bones shake and makes me dizzy. Master Jack comes and screams "Finn get over here RIGHT NOW!" I slowly walk to where master jack is. why would they treat a 7 year old child like this? master jack gives me a sweep. well it couldn't get any worse could it (could it!). I start climbing up the chimney, itz bumpy I cant breath but I keep going...]]> 2017-10-20 03:36:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198929976 I walked down the stairs a cold breeze sent a shiver down my spine. the prison small, cold and is crumbling and cracking by the hour. my eyes are watering me for a taste of food. all corners are filled with spiders and bugs that I hate joe_cassidy1 https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198930162


my mouth is screaming for some sort of food substance or h20my mind would never think of something like this but me and gem are planing an escape! hot potatos,pie and MONEY! and a nice life no more cellars for me.
the bed was cold and thin so we had to huddle up to keep warm
         joe                              but me and gem will escape]]> 2017-10-20 03:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198930162 no where to sleep. and a lot of furniture that no one uses. sleeping in the dark alone. the floor is as crickily as a bolder. stuck in a small room that no body uses carter_johnston https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198930381 2017-10-20 03:41:21 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198930381 After I went to the small pot known as the toilet it was rusty so as the seller. Master Jack forcing the kids inside the seller. And a child had been grabed with sacred hair as his eyes watered away from the darkness. I'm scared. I tried to run into a corner but its pitch black. I shiver just waiting to be picked on. It was like this night after night. Tom says we're not going down any time we're getting out of here even though the seller is rubbish for gathering materials to escape this entire place we need to do this together. '' I agree with you Tom'', the cellar is old, cramped, dusty, dirty a lot of e sounding and rotten tristan_bridge https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198930721 2017-10-20 03:44:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/198930721 my throat was screaming for some edible substance hugo_hawkins https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200246777 2017-10-25 01:29:52 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200246777 the cold cracked cellar was crumbling by the day hugo_hawkins https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200247011 2017-10-25 01:31:06 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200247011 children disappearing by the second, dust crawling up your legs and body, shivering all cramped together starving as they get weaker and weaker, walls closing in, crumbling away, kids getting scratch from chimney's bones showing throat,filed with soot https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200248152 2017-10-25 01:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200248152 SLAM!!! Someone shoved me into a tiny dark space. There's a noise that is ear piecing like a child screaming in horror, but it's just the old door. I run my hand along something hard, it's cracked and has flaky stuff pealing off. I realise I'm in a room. This place is the opposite of luxurious. I look up to find two people staring at me like I'm an alien. They are looking like pigs that just rolled in mud. The beds are as solid as rock. They said that people come and go getting weaker by the minute. Their clothes are thin and crusty. They only get a piece of bread and a drink all day, this makes them skinny as a stick. Sleep is impossible to get. The cold, cracked, cramped room hides you from the world. The cruel abandoned place makes your throat scream with pain, no water is sight only dust to choke on. Those poor people being forced to do hard jobs and live in pain. The smell of dirt and sweat is unbearable. They realise they're not alone!!! https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200248216
By Lucy]]> 2017-10-25 01:37:28 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200248216 I have just finished my last sweep I’m worn out and I miss pa but at least I have a place to call home. As I walk down the cellar stairs I here master jack talking to someone I can’t quite make out what there saying, finally I get to the cellar. I lie down on the floor sacks slowly falling asleep when the door creeps open for a second there was light and then it dark again. a young boy walks in maybe it’s the replacement for gem was here. I lie there silently trying to speak finally my sentence comes out ”I say what’s your name” Luke the boy replies why am I here what do you want, have your parents recently died I say yes a week ago says Luke congratulations your now a chimney sweep is it fun says Luke no I say it’s scary you don’t get food and your lungs get full of soot. Welcome to your home now go to sleep work starts early tomorrow . https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200248380 charlotte ]]> 2017-10-25 01:38:21 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200248380 When we walk down the stairs fearfully I get scared because there made out of bricks that are crumbling with every step. It was getting darker by the second. The brush skimmed the chimney my arms are lazy now they felt like the bones came out of my arms. When I first came (and I still do to this day)WHERE DO I SLEEP? Every morning is the same bad breakfast go straight to my chimney sweeping except for this morning I here master jack talking to this young boy. I think of a plan I get one. As soon as master jack leaves I run to the little boy and say we are going to get out of here I could see by the boys face he was exited. Straight away master jack sends him to work. I say to him the chimneys are dark gloomy ad exotic mathijs_taanman https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200248623 2017-10-25 01:39:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200248623 Izzy's isabella_wheatley1 https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200248904 I'm walking down a hallway into a place where darkness is everywhere, it's damp and scary. I'm loosing  breath from all this dust.
I can remember my parents saying, "don't do that" "no!" But then, nothing...
I see two boys, they seem upset, or maybe sick. I feel my heart beating as if it were a racing car.  I don't know if I will be treated kindly.
Again I here my parents, "please" then "keep safe Taylor". They were taken away and never returned.
'Ok' I thought to myself. 'time to make some friends'
"Hi" said one of the boys, who looked like he could be sick, "my name is Tom" "And I'm Will" said the other. "Uh hi? I'm Taylor. What are you meant to do, here" I gulped. "We sweep chimneys" said Will "that sounds dangerous and scary" I said. "wait until you meet Master Jack" Tom said, with a shiver.
I felt a nervous feeling in my stomach, my clothes were pinching me and worst of all I don't know where my parents are.]]> 2017-10-25 01:41:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200248904 Maddy's https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200249080 When the night ends and the sun rises , I know that a scary day was coming my way. The sell walls crumble with rocks pounding on my head. Suddenly the door screams open. I run with fear to the other end of the sell and hide behind the rusted ripped hard couch. I poke my head out of the couch and see a boy. I ask what his name is Jackson replied the boy.
I wonder if Jackson wants to help me escape. Wait is he a chimney sweep like me working for master Jack. I look at him curiously and see a red patch on his leg, it was blood. I freeze with wonder. I carefully  grab Jacksons arm and walk down the cellar stairs with  Jackson slowly walking  behind me. I see master Jack, and with a nervous voice ask if he had replaced Jem. He replies ''yes''. I then walk slowly with Jackson back up the stairs.  



]]> 2017-10-25 01:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200249080 Early that morning Sterling could see the remains of dirty flies that died from the smell of the cellar. All he could breath in is dust. Max lay slumped next to him frightened as Sterling began scream in horror. but he couldn't he had dust stuck in his lungs hudson_switzerhewson https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200250346
I walk up to him and whisper in his ear he said sterling I put on my shoes and sterling looks at me he sees spiders and rats crawling on my body I scream and look back at him but he disappeared. I try to look for him I found him in his room talking to him self he looked scared.




]]> 2017-10-25 01:51:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200250346 the floor space is as crickily as a boulder from the top carter_johnston https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200250589 2017-10-25 01:53:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200250589 A door cracked open at midnight I saw a flash of shadow something was pulling my sheets. I saw a boy a small one with orange curly hair. It must be the the new boy I thought. Because Jem was climbing up the chimney then smash, Jem was lying still. The boy mumbled something at me but I didn't quite here him. The next morning some people were sweeping but I wasn't. I looked for Master Jack but I couldn't find him. Turning the last corner before I gave I suddenly stumbled upon a mess of glass and rum; Master Jack's bottle lay at my feet in ruins. A meter on a bundle of black and rags covered in splashes of red, lay motionless on the kitchen floor. Master Jacks eyes remained wide open and still. I woke up it was just a dream. We had to do our morning rough teen I stumbled to a chimney. Then I saw something hard. It felt smooth. I remember when I used to throw it and it would bounce on the water. So I threw it. With in seconds I wish I didn't. Master jack looked back. The new person was next to me. Master jack screamed WHO WAS THAT. I was going to say something. But the new boy said he did it. He got lashed with this thing with nine ropes with balls on it. After that I spoke to the new boy I said why did you do that. Wile we were talking there was a bully behind us he looked mean. THEN!!! SLADE https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200250796 2017-10-25 01:54:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200250796 I walk down the stairs slowly... I touch the ground. It crumbles under my feet. The walls are smashed and rusty. I shiver in the silence. I walk through the hallway, the lights flickering and swaying side to side. I see kids sitting down, all alone, as the cold breeze touches my skin softly. jake_connor4 https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200251046
The kids are silent, their eyes glaze at me, as I turn around... from the other side of the cellar, I can only here "come ere, ya boys!" as Master Jack yells I shake. I hear footsteps louder, louder, and louder. I try hide behind a barrel the others just run, as they run the dust behind them stuns me. I'm starting to cough, I hold it in as the guard grabs the others and runs away all I can see is the remaining dust cloud "Where did he go?" I have no idea! I sigh in relief. As time goes by we had nothing to do, We hear "Yes sir" The boy turns in the room breathing heavily, he did not stop running he ran, and ran, and ran! until he had to stop. Master Jack comes storming into the room "BEDTIME YE SCUMS"
Master Jack grabs my shirt and pushes me forward I tumble off my feet. "Why am I so weak?" I walk slowly to the beds... The beds are rock hard like a stale piece of bread! No warmth no nothing its like an animal cage. My eyes open slowly, I look right, to left no one to been seen. I walk in the hallway, they're sitting down, eating a rotten piece of food.]]> 2017-10-25 01:57:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200251046 the door creaked in the cold night it was as cold as a blizzard. https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200251216
by charlie]]> 2017-10-25 01:58:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200251216 it looks lonely and empty. like its been their for years. cold and tight no where to sleep. a lot of furniture that know one uses. sleeping in the dust alone stuck in a small pipe that know uses nothing fun and no chanes of getting out and he has to duck cos the roof is to small. The polls are secret weapon to hit he people who comes in no toilet so you do it in the corner it has a bad smell. some times you all asleep on the wall and you fall and hit your head on the ground carter_johnston https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200251552 2017-10-25 02:00:31 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200251552 I take a step, the floor crumble's under me. will_vallino https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200251616 2017-10-25 02:01:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200251616 the cellar collapses if you touch it it is like a peace of string. https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200254843 by Charlie





]]> 2017-10-25 02:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/200254843 the last thing I see is my mother and father being pined on the wall struggling for air I get shoved into a bag and a vehicle starting bellow I start trembling as the vehicle takes of speeding down the rickety floor I feel the brakes hauling to a stop a crunch as rocks disappear into the wiled lantana a door opens a crash as the door closes shattering the glass the clash of the pebbles closing on the dust I feel the pain of the rocks on my back a wound being created blood being drained out of my body very slowly I see a very old cottage and a squeaking sound witch I guessed was a door the last thing I remember was falling. https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/203700092 2017-11-05 23:33:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/203700092 children disappearing by the second dust crawling up your legs and body, kids huddling tougher just to stay alive starving as they get weaker, walls closing in, crumbling away, kids getting thinner, bones showing, throats filled with soot, kids teeth black as the night sky rotting away in the dark...by ANGALINA PROCTER https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/203701032 `]]> 2017-11-05 23:44:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_catlin1/cesvbpf2p22u/wish/203701032