Play video games --> skills

people/ individuals/ us

will --> would -> can/ could

One of the most important/ efficient/ effective way to enhance culinary skills is playing cooking games.

Through + N phr /Via/ by + Ving

--> Through persistent practice and dedication, video games can improve players' hand-eye coordination, and fine motor skills, leading to increased precision and control

From + adj + perspective

--> From an educational perspective, playing video games can help players improve linguistic abilities and problem-solving skills

It would be adj + for sb to do sth

There is a need for sb to do sth

The youth SHOULD BE encouraged BY GOVERNMENT to have a job/ GAIN JOB EXPERIENCE when they are young.

The job market is EXPERIENCING A downward TREND, making A GREAT NUMBER OF/ NUMEROU/ SEVERAL/ VARIOUS people who does not have QUALIFICATION STRUGGLE TO FIND a job.

CERTIFICATE/ DEGREE/ QUALIFICATION

It would be a CHALLENGING downside for people WITHOUT FORMAL QUALIFICATIONS TO who does not have certificates look for/ FIND/ SECURE STABLE jobs when the labor market is INCREASINGLY COMPETITIVE

decreased the need.

CAREER OPPORTUNITIES - EMPLOYMENT

SECURE STABLE FULFILLING EMPLOYMENT

THE CURRENT ECONOMIC CLIMATE

THE LACK OF FORMAL QUALIFICATIONS CAN BE A SIGNIFICANT BARRIER TO ENTRY IN JOB MARKET

• TĂNG CƯỜNG SỨC KHỎE

• PHÁT TRIỂN CÁC KỸ NĂNG XÃ HỘI

CÓ MỘT VÀI LỢI ÍCH (A) CỦA VIỆC CHƠI THỂ THAO (B)

THỨ NHẤT VIỆC CHƠI THỂ THAO (B1) GIÚP TĂNG CƯỜNG SỨC KHỎE (A1). ĐIỀU NÀY LÀ BỞI VÌ CÁC MÔN NHƯ BƠI LÔI (B11) CÓ THỂ GIÚP XÂY DỰNG CƠ BẮP (A11) VÀ HẠN CHẾ CÁC BỆNH VỀ TIM MẠCH (A12)

B --> B1 --> B11

A --> A1 --> A11, A12

WHY --> IMPACTS

THERE ARE SEVERAL BENEFITS OF LIVING IN A BIG CITY

Topic sentence (general - N phrase - simple sentence) --> supporting sentences (why - impact/ complex sentence) example (compound/ complex)

ACCESSIBILITY TO PUBLIC SERVICES -> easy to access hospital, SCHOOL, RECREATIONAL FACILITIES -> quickly to have health check at big hospital, ensure the best LIVING condition

ACCESS (V)

ACCESS TO (N)

nominalization --> abundance job opportunities

2. BETTER JOB OPPORTUNITIES --> JOB MARKET --> MORE OPTIONS --> SECURE SATISFIED AND FULFILLING EMPLOYMENT

   Faster to have support from government -> children who live with violation parent can get the support from charity -> having better life

90-110 TỪ

LINKING WORDS/ PHRASES

• REASONS: THIS CAN BE ATTRIBUTED TO THE FACT THAT....

  THIS ..... STEMS FROM

  • IMPACTS: THEREFORE, THEREBY, AS A RESULT, CONSEQUENTLY.

    One of the most significant advantages of living in the big cities is the abundance job opportunities. It means that/ This can be attributed to the fact that bustling people are in a busy job market in metropolis offers a wide range of which provide a great amount of career opportunities, increasing the likelihood to for everyone. This can be attributed to the fact that employee could secure satisfied and fulfilling employment. This not only benefit individuals by providing them financial stability and personal growth but also contributes to the overall well-being of which also encouraged the society as a whole. As a result, it also improve the well-being of people. For example, studies have shown the correlation between fulfilling employment and improved mental health, suggesting that thriving job market can positively impact the well-being of city residents

  • that who has a fulfilling jobs would not have mental problems

The benefits of video games

2. Viết đoạn văn (max 110 từ) về 1 main idea dã đưa ra trong phần dàn ý

1. Video games (B) is a form of entertainment (A).

   -> It (B1) helps players relaxing (A1) and reducing stress (A2)

   -> Video games take players to different worlds (B11) which make people feels escape from reality (A11 & A22)

   -> By relaxing their mind(A11) when playing game, people can avoid some mental health issue (A22).

2. Playing video games (B) enhance people's soft skill (A).

   -> When people wants to level up in the game (B), they needs completing challenges which improve logical thinking (A1) & problem-solving skills (A2) of players.

   -> Because of some game such as The Sims (B) require people should understand the situation (A11) and have problem-solving skills to upgrade their characters (A22).

There are a great number of BENEFITS ASSOCIATED WITH playing video games. One of the most crucial advantageS is THAT GAME CAN HELP enhancE people's soft skills. When PLAYERS users or gamers wants to level up in game, they need to completEing challenges with complicated INSTRUCTIONS suggestion. It would be a great opportunity for gamers TO could improve theirs logical thinking and problem-solving skill. For instance, The Sims is a game TAHT which requires PLAYERS to understand the situationS and USE good problem-solving skills to upgrade their characters and build good relationship with OTHER characters. THESE skills are important FOR with people not only in games but also in reality life.

CÒN SAI NHIỀU LỖI NGỮ PHÁP CƠ BẢN, CẦN CHECK LẠI TRƯỚC KHI NỘP (MỘT SỐ LỖI CƠ BẢN MÌNH ĐÃ HIGHLIGHT, EM CHECK VÀ CỐ GẮNG TỰ SỬA ĐỂ TRÁNH MẮC LẠI - NẾU CÓ CÂU NÀO CHƯA SỬA ĐƯỢC THÌ EM ĐẶT CÂU HỎI NHÉ)

CÒN THIẾU NHIỀU LIÊN TỪ, BỔ SUNG LIÊN TỪ ĐỂ CÂU MẠCH LẠC, RÕ RÀNG HƠN