The Shadow in the Deep Blue Sea by HOP https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual Write one thing you liked and one thing didn't like about your partner's story. en-us 2017-02-22 02:33:24 UTC 2017-05-28 02:49:19 UTC hello@padlet.com Lol https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155347978 Good: blue big shark
Bad too perfect 

]]> 2017-02-22 02:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155347978 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348048 I think my partner's story story]]> 2017-02-22 02:43:13 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348048 I like my partner's story because it is funny. hopgood_adam_s https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348067 I don't like my partner's story because it is not realistic.

]]> 2017-02-22 02:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348067 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348114 your story was alright. but if u add more to it, it will make it much better 

]]> 2017-02-22 02:43:46 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348114 I don't like my partner's story https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348135 a big long shadow 
flash the bowl
a big scream "ahhh! dolphin]]> 2017-02-22 02:43:59 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348135 I like his story BC he's sougly so the shark didn't eat https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348151 Thing I dont like is that ]]> 2017-02-22 02:44:09 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348151 I don't like my partner work kinda a little bit but it a bit childish is not that scary https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348176 and it too long 

]]> 2017-02-22 02:44:24 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348176 I like my partner's story because it's a adventure and https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348195 One thing she can improve it that try to make the story longer.]]> 2017-02-22 02:44:33 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348195 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348198 I like my partner's story because it is rich of imagination. 
But the story needs to be written in past.]]> 2017-02-22 02:44:34 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348198 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348239 I think my partner's story is full of imagination, she shows us a magic mermaid world.

But I think her story is a little bit long and it is difficult to find]]> 2017-02-22 02:44:55 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348239 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348244 good]]> 2017-02-22 02:44:58 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348244 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348251 2017-02-22 02:45:00 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348251 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348259 2017-02-22 02:45:04 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348259 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348277 My partner has a good story setting and alot details.

]]> 2017-02-22 02:45:20 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348277 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348279 Good]]> 2017-02-22 02:45:21 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348279 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348282 Good ]]> 2017-02-22 02:45:22 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348282 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348341 Good ]]> 2017-02-22 02:45:58 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348341 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348351 2017-02-22 02:46:04 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348351 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348357 Good won]]> 2017-02-22 02:46:09 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348357 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348396 Good wonde]]> 2017-02-22 02:46:13 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348396 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348400 Good wonderful 

]]> 2017-02-22 02:46:14 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348400 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348404 Good wonderful 
Bad ]]> 2017-02-22 02:46:16 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348404 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348413 Good wonderful 
Bad too sho]]> 2017-02-22 02:46:22 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348413 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348417 Good wonderful 
Bad too short ]]> 2017-02-22 02:46:25 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348417 Everything is wonderful https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348476 Too short]]> 2017-02-22 02:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348476 Good:the setting and weird scenario https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348484 Bad: the character Is so ugly so the shark didn't eat him ]]> 2017-02-22 02:47:06 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348484 My partners story was good. But he needs to improve on writing long sto https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348616 2017-02-22 02:48:50 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348616 i like my partner's story because https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348620 it is good.

]]> 2017-02-22 02:48:54 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348620 https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348681 its good G
to short too ]]> 2017-02-22 02:49:39 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348681 like my partner story because is scary. i don't like it because it to short https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348967 2017-02-22 02:52:34 UTC https://padlet.com/hopgood_adam_s/ccty0b7rwual/wish/155348967