7th Grade Writing Feedback by Maxwell Fountain https://padlet.com/23mfountain1/cckpo1h1wklx Hello! Welcome to my padlet and thank you for reading my writing pieces. I look forward to your feedback. Please comment positively :) en-us 2018-02-01 15:01:41 UTC 2018-03-28 14:18:22 UTC hello@padlet.com Research Simulation 23asmith1 https://padlet.com/23mfountain1/cckpo1h1wklx/wish/236955572 Andy Smith

First off, in your body paragraphs I feel that you did produce a really good argument. I as a reader, was very influenced by the word choice you used. I really think you did prove a good point as you went in depth into the articles and took great points that the authors had provided, and I feel that the way you approached how the articles were the same, because in the end it made your work all the better. ]]> 2018-03-01 15:17:42 UTC https://padlet.com/23mfountain1/cckpo1h1wklx/wish/236955572 Research Simulation 23rfigueroa https://padlet.com/23mfountain1/cckpo1h1wklx/wish/237408295 I really liked your piece! You had a really good argument the whole way through as well! You really convinced me that this problem needs to be dealt with. Good job!]]> 2018-03-02 14:35:34 UTC https://padlet.com/23mfountain1/cckpo1h1wklx/wish/237408295 Screen play 23mgrill https://padlet.com/23mfountain1/cckpo1h1wklx/wish/237529583 Hey max, I liked how you made the story continue with a lot of detail. Also, I like how you used a lot of detail to make it seem like em purer palpatine wasnt the bad guy. For the future, I think that you should read over your piece to make sure it is clear to other people when they read it
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