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      <title>Beta son 23 thurs by Lau Ling</title>
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      <pubDate>2025-07-10 11:43:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jerreth corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can’t wait to share with you that I helped  my parents to spring-clean the house during the weekend.I did the laundry,made the bed and set the tables.After cleaning the house,the house became sparkling <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://clean.My">clean.My</a> parents felt relieved as I helped them do the spring-clean the house.I felt exhausted but I was proud of myself.Wriet back soon.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Jerreth</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can’t wait to share with you that I helped my parents to <strong>spring-clean</strong> the house during the weekend.I did the laundry, made the bed and <strong>set the table</strong>.<br>After cleaning the house, it became sparkling clean.<br>My parents felt relieved as I helped them <strong>spring-clean the house</strong>.I felt exhausted but I was proud of myself.<br><strong>Write</strong> back soon.</p><p>Regards,<br>Jerreth</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:14:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Thum ruo yee corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>   I cant wait to share with you the chores i did during the weekend.</p><p>    I sweep the floor, wipe the windows and rake the leaves. After cleaning the house, the house became spick and span. My parents felt overjoyed.</p><p>   I felt exhausted, but after all those hardworks, i became happy, because i can live in a tidy house.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Ruo yee</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can’t wait to share with you the chores <strong>I</strong> did during the weekend.I <strong>swept</strong> the floor, <strong>wiped </strong>the windows, and <strong>raked</strong> the leaves. After cleaning the house, it became spick and span. My parents felt overjoyed.</p><p>I felt exhausted, but after all that hard work, I <strong>was as happy as a lark </strong>because I could live in a tidy house.</p><p>Regards,<br>Ruo Yee</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:14:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Wee Hou corrected</title>
         <author>severenge</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma, </p><p><br/></p><p>I can’t wait to share with you what I had done today. I folded the clothes, swept the floor and mopped the floor. After cleaning the house, the house became sparkling clean. My parents felt delighted after I cleaned the house. I felt tired but I was proud of myself.</p><p>Write back soon. </p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Wee Hou</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can’t wait to share with you what I <strong>did</strong> today.I folded the clothes, swept and mopped the floor.After cleaning, the house became sparkling clean.<br>My parents felt delighted after I cleaned the house.<br>I felt tired,<strong>but  I was also beaming with pride knowing that I had helped to make our home look so tidy and fresh.</strong></p><p>Write back soon.</p><p>Regards,<br>Wee Hou</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:14:48 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Qlowin corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can’t wait to share with you about the chores I did during the <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://weekend.In">weekend.In</a> the morning,I watered the plants and took out the <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://rubbish.In">rubbish.In</a> the afternoon,I did the laundry and cleaned my desk.Three hours later,my house became spick and <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://span.My">span.My</a> parents were very proud of me and though I was exhausted,I am delighted to help out with the chores.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can’t wait to share with you the chores I did during the weekend.In the morning, I watered the plants and took out the rubbish.In the afternoon, I did the laundry and cleaned my desk.Three hours later, my house became spick and span!My parents were very proud of me, and though I was exhausted, I <strong>wa</strong>s delighted to help out with the chores.</p><p>Write back soon!</p><p><strong>Warm regards,<br>Qlowin</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:15:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lim Zen Hao ( out of topic, please redo) </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma</p><p>I hope you are in pink.With the arrival of spring, it’s the perfect moment to give our space a little refresh. A good spring-clean isn’t just about tidying up,it’s about resetting our environment, clearing out the clutter, and creating room to breathe, focus, and feel renewed.</p><p>Let’s set aside some time this week to go through our things, dust off forgotten corners, and maybe rediscover a few treasures. Whether it's your desk, a drawer that’s been neglected, or the shared common area, every little bit makes a difference.</p><p>If you're up for it, we could even make it fun: turn on some music, bring out the snacks, and share before-and-after photos for a bit of motivation!</p><p>Let me know if you're in,and feel free to suggest a time that work together.</p><p> Love</p><p>Zen Hao</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Goh You Wei corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can' t wait to share with you that I helped my parents to spring-clean the house during the weekend. I had washed the dishes, mopped the floor and folded the clothes. My parents felt on cloud nine. I felt exhausted but I was proud of myself. Hope to hear from you soon.</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards, </p><p>You Wei</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can’t wait to share with you that I helped my parents spring-clean the house during the weekend.<br>I <strong>washed</strong> the dishes, mopped the floor, and folded the clothes.<strong>By the end of the day, our home was spick and span!</strong>My parents were on cloud nine. I was worn out, but I felt proud <strong>to lend a hand.</strong>Hope to hear from you soon!</p><p>Warm regards,<br>You We</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:15:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lee Sin Han corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>  I can't wait to share with you the house Hould chores I do in the weekends. I did the laundry, mopped the floor and washed the dishes. After cleaning the house, the house became sparking clean. My parents eld gratified. I felt tired but I was proud of myself. Write back soon.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Sin Han</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can't wait to share with you the household chores I did during the weekend.I did the laundry, mopped the floor, and washed the dishes.After cleaning the house, it became sparkling clean.My parents felt satisfied  I was tired, but I was proud of myself <strong>to be able to lend a helping hands to  my parents.</strong>Write back soon!</p><p>Regards,<br>Sin Han</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:16:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jae Hong corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma, </p><p>I can't wait to share with about I help my parents did household chores such as washed the dishes and swept the floor. After finished, I and my parent felt very exhausted but our house be spick and span. What about you. Write back soon. </p><p>Best friend, </p><p>Jae Hong.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can’t wait to share with you that I helped my parents do some household chores such as washing the dishes and sweeping the floor.<strong>After we finished, </strong>my parents and I felt very exhausted, <strong>but we were on cloud nine seeing how neat and fresh every nook and cranny of the house.</strong></p><p><strong>What about you?Did you help with any chores at home too?</strong><br>Write back soon.</p><p><strong>Your best friend,</strong><br>Jae Hong</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:17:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sze Jane corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>     I can't wait to share with you about I helped my parents to spring-clean the house during the weekend. On that day, I folded the clothes, swept the floor and make the bed all by myself. After cleaning the house, the house became spick and span. Although I felt exhausted, but I was proud because I helped my parents to do the house chores. That's all for now. Bye.                                                                                  </p><p>Regards,</p><p>  Sze Jane</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can't wait to share with you that I helped my parents spring-clean the house during the weekend.<br>On that day, I folded the clothes, swept the floor, and made the bed all by myself.<br>After cleaning, the house became spick and span.<br>Although I felt exhausted, I was proud because I helped my parents do the household chores.<strong>It felt amazing to see how much of a difference a little effort could make!</strong>That's all for now. Bye!</p><p>Regards,<br>Sze Jane</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:17:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kong Jun San corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can't wait to share with you that I help my parents to spring-clean the house during the weekend. I help my mother to wash the dishes, made the bed and set the tables. After cleaning the house, the house became sparkling clean. My parents felt over the moon. I felt exhausted, but I was proud of myself. Await your reply. Looking forward to your thought.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Kong Jun San</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can’t wait to share with you that I helped my parents spring-clean the house during the weekend.I <strong>helped</strong> my mother wash the dishes, made the bed, and set the table.<br>After cleaning, the house became sparkling clean! My parents were over the moon. I felt exhausted, but I was proud of myself <strong>for helping out.</strong></p><p><strong>I look forward to your reply and hearing your thoughts!</strong></p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br>Kong Jun San</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Saw Kah Hou corrected</title>
         <author>wongpekting</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can't wait to share with you that I helped my parents to spring-clean the house during the weekend! I washed the dishes,set the table and mopped the floor. After cleaning the house,the house became spic and <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://span.My">span. My</a> parents felt overjoyed because the house wasn't dirty anymore. I felt exhausted but I'm proud of Looking forward to your reply!</p><p><br></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Kah Hou</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can't wait to share with you that I helped my parents spring-clean the house during the weekend!<br>I washed the dishes, set the table, and mopped the floor.<br>After all the cleaning, the house became <strong>spick and span</strong>.</p><p>My parents felt overjoyed because the house wasn’t dirty anymore.I felt exhausted, but I’m proud <strong>of what I accomplished. What about you? Do you help with chores at home? Looking forward to your reply!</strong></p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br>Kah Hou</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:18:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jia Xin corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p> I can’t wait to share with you about that I helped my parents tiedied the house this weekend! I swept the floor, and even mop the <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://floor.my">floor. My parents were satisfied and proud of me. I felt tired. It’s nice seeing the house so spick and span! </a></p><p>How was your weekend </p><p>Best Regards,</p><p>Ng Jiaxin</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can’t wait to share with you that I helped my parents <strong>tidy up</strong> the house this weekend!I swept the floor and even <strong>mopped</strong> it.My parents were very satisfied and proud of me.<br>I felt tired, <strong>but it was worth it </strong> as the house looked so <strong>spick and span</strong>!<strong>How was your weekend?I’d love to hear all about it.</strong></p><p><strong>Best regards,</strong><br>Ng Jiaxin</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:20:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alyssa  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>       I can't wait to share with you the chores I do during the weekend. I will do three chores on Saturday and Sunday first I will made my bed. Second, I will wash the dishes after eating three meals. Lastly, I will sweep the floor. After cleaning the house, the house became spring and clean. My parents felt in seventh heaven. I felt tired but I was pround of myself</p><p>Your friend,</p><p>Alyssa  </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can't wait to share with you the chores I did during the weekend.I did three chores on both Saturday and Sunday.</p><p>First, I made my bed.Second, I washed the dishes after every meal.Lastly, I swept the floor.</p><p>After cleaning the house, it became <strong>sparkling clean</strong>.My parents were <strong>in seventh heaven</strong>!I felt tired, but I was proud of myself.<strong>How was your weekend?I’d love to hear all about it.</strong></p><p><strong>Your friend,</strong><br>Alyssa</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>   </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:20:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>elson corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,                                                                                        </p><p>I can't wait to share with you about the chores I did at home during the last weekend. I did the laundry, washed the dishes, swept and mopped the floor. After cleaning the house, the house became spick and span. My parents felt proud and happy. I felt tired but I was proud of myself. Please write back soon. Bye for now.</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Elson</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can't wait to share with you the chores I did at home last weekend.I did the laundry, washed the dishes, and swept and mopped the floor.After all the cleaning, the house was <strong>spick and span</strong>!</p><p>My parents felt proud and happy. I was tired, but I felt proud of myself <strong>for helping out and making a difference at home.Please write back soon. Bye for now!</strong></p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br>Elson</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:21:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lim Zen Xi  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma, </p><p>  I can't wait to share with how I helped my parents to spring - clean the house during the weekends. I washed my dishes, folded the clothes and washed the clothes. After cleaning the house, it became spick and span.  My parents felt on seventh heaven. I felt exhausted but I felt proud of myself that I helped my parents to do the household chores. Write back soon. </p><p><br/></p><p>Regards, </p><p>Zen Xi</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can't wait to share with you how I helped my parents spring-clean the house during the weekend.<br>I washed the dishes, folded the clothes, and did the laundry.<br>After cleaning, the house became <strong>spick and span</strong>!</p><p>My parents <strong>were in seventh heaven</strong>.<br>I felt exhausted, but I was proud of mysel<strong>f for helping with the household chores. What about you? What chores do you help out at home.Write back soon!</strong></p><p><strong>Regards,</strong><br>Zen Xi</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:21:52 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alicia Hee corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>        I hope you're in the pink of health. You won't believe that I helped my parents to spring-clean the house during the weekend. After cleaning the house, the house became sparkling clean. I helped to mopped the floor and did the laundry. I also made the bed and wiped the windows. I felt exhousted but I was proud of myself. </p><p><br/></p><p>Write back soon!</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Alicia</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I hope you're in the pink of health!You won’t believe it — I helped my parents spring-clean the house during the weekend.<strong>After all the cleaning, </strong>the house became <strong>sparkling clean</strong>.<br>I mopped the floor, did the laundry, made the bed, and wiped the windows.I felt <strong>exhausted</strong>, but I was really proud of myself.<strong>It felt amazing to lend a hand and make a difference at home.</strong></p><p><strong>Write back soon!</strong></p><p><strong>Regards,</strong><br>Alicia</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:22:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>I healped my parents to spring-clean the house during the weekend.</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Paris Koh Zi Sum</p><p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can't wait to share with you. I sweep the floor,raked the leaves and made the bed.After clening the house,the house became sparkling <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://clean.My">clean.My </a>parents felt on cloud nine.I felt tired but I was proud myself.That's all of now.Bye!</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Paris Koh</p><p>_____________________________________________________________</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:24:10 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ooi Zun Khai corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can’t wait to share with you that I helped my parents to spring-clean the house during the weekend. I swept the floor, made the bed and wiped the windows. After cleaning the house, the house became sparkling clean. My parents felt happy. I felt exhausted but I was proud of myself. What about you? Please reply soon. Bye for now</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Zun Khai</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can’t wait to share with you that I helped my parents spring-clean the house during the weekend!<br>I swept the floor, made the bed, and wiped the windows.<br>After all the cleaning, the house became <strong>sparkling clean</strong>!</p><p>My parents were very<strong> delighted</strong>.Although I felt exhausted, I was proud of myself<strong> for helping out.</strong></p><p><strong>What about you?</strong>Please reply soon. <strong>Bye for now!</strong></p><p><strong>Regards,</strong><br>Zun Khai</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:27:11 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>          I can't wait to share with you about I helped my parents to spring-clean the house during the weekend. I  washed the dishes, sweep the floor and mopped the floor. After cleaning the house, became spick and span. My parents felt proud me. I felt exhausted but I was proud of myself. Write back soon!</p><p>Your friend,</p><p>Cheau Qian</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can’t wait to share with you that I helped my parents spring-clean the house during the weekend.I washed the dishes, swept the floor, and mopped it too.</p><p>After cleaning, the house became <strong>spick and span</strong>!<br><strong>My parents were on cloud nine, and I was exhausted ,but also beaming with pride.It felt amazing to do my part and make a difference at home.</strong></p><p><strong>Write back soon!</strong></p><p><strong>Your friend,</strong><br>Cheau Qian</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma, </p><p>I can't wait to share with you that i had helped my parents to spring- clean the house during the weekend. After cleaning the house , the house became spick and span. My parent was happy to see the house. I felt tired but i was proud of my self . </p><p>Write back soon. </p><p>Your parents,</p><p>Sze Ying</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can't wait to share with you that I helped my parents spring-clean the house during the weekend.<br>After all the cleaning, the house became <strong>spick and span</strong>!<br>My parents<strong> were happy to see how clean everything was.</strong><br>I felt tired, but I was proud of myself.</p><p><strong>Write back soon!I’d love to hear how your weekend went!</strong></p><p><strong>Your friend,</strong><br>Sze Ying</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:31:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>I can’t wait to share with you about to spring-clean the house.I washing-up,sweep the floor and mopped the floor.After cleaning the house,the house became sparkling <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://clean.My">clean.My</a> parents felt very happy but the house is very clean.I felt very tored.I was proud of myself.Write back soon.</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Varick</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can’t wait to share with you that I helped spring-clean the house!I did the washing-up, <strong>swept </strong>the floor, and mopped it too.After cleaning, the house became <strong>sparkling clean</strong>!</p><p>My parents were very happy<strong> to see how neat everything looked.</strong>Although I felt very <strong>tired</strong>, I was proud of myself <strong>for helping out.</strong></p><p><strong>Write back soon!</strong></p><p><strong>Regards,</strong><br>Varick</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-07-10 13:32:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zi Xuan corrected ( missing points )</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>    I can't wait to share with you about chores that I did the weekend, family and after finishing cleanig the house,the house it became sparkling clean.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Zixuan</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can’t wait to share with you the chores I did over the weekend with my family!<strong>We worked together to spring-clean the house. I helped to wash the dishes, sweep the floor, and wipe the windows.</strong>After hours of cleaning, the house became <strong>sparkling clean</strong> and <strong>spick and span</strong>!<br>My parents were <strong>over the moon</strong>, and although I felt tired, I was <strong>really proud of myself</strong> for helping out.</p><p><strong>How was your weekend?I’d love to hear all about it!</strong></p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br>Zixuan</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,</p><p>          I can't wait to share with  you about  how I just helped my parents to clean the house during the weekend.I have done sweeping the fioor,make the bed,set the table and more.After cleaning the house,the house became sparkling <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://clean.My">clean.My</a> parents felt overjoy.I felt exhausted but I was proud of myself.I promise my parents to help them with the chores over the weekend.</p><p>                                                                       Kind Regards</p><p>                                                                        jcelyn        </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>   <strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can't wait to share with you how I helped my parents clean the house during the weekend!<br>I swept the floor, made the bed, set the table, and did even more.After cleaning, the house became <strong>sparkling clean</strong>.<br>My parents were <strong>overjoyed</strong>.I felt exhausted, but I was proud of myself.I even <strong>promised my parents that I would continue helping with the chores on weekends.</strong></p><p><strong>Kind regards,</strong><br>Jcelyn                                     </p>]]></description>
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         <title>Lee Ann corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Emma,                                                                                               I can't wait to share with you that I helped my parents to spring-clean the house during the weekends. I helped my mum to do the laundry and fold the clothes to lighten my mother's burden. After that, I made my bed and tidied up my room. After cleaning the house, the house became as neat as a pin. My parents felt grateful to have such an obedient daughter. I was exhausted, but I felt over the moon. I was proud of myself. Write back soon.                    Regards,                                                                                           Lee Ann</p><p>Corrected</p><p><strong>Dear Emma,</strong></p><p>I can't wait to share with you that I helped my parents spring-clean the house over the weekend.<br>I helped my mum do the laundry and fold the clothes to lighten her burden.<br>After that, I made my bed and tidied up my room.</p><p>By the time we finished, the house was <strong>as neat as a pin</strong>!<br>My parents felt grateful to have such an <strong>obedient and helpful</strong> daughter.Although I was exhausted, I felt <strong>over the moon</strong> and truly proud of myself <strong>for helping out. </strong></p><p><strong>How was your weekend?Write back soon — I’d love to hear all about it!</strong></p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br>Lee Ann</p>]]></description>
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