https://padlet.com/27mkarp/c9t1ry6r8u4zcrkd Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 21:00:18 UTC 2025-12-12 17:33:56 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 27kchen https://padlet.com/27mkarp/c9t1ry6r8u4zcrkd/wish/1074660744 I really liked how you added many pictures of a deer at the end of your piece so I can see the deer. Also I like how you bolded and italicize your thoughts to show that you are thinking. Something that you could improve on is adding more metaphors into your piece. ]]> 2021-01-11 15:56:40 UTC https://padlet.com/27mkarp/c9t1ry6r8u4zcrkd/wish/1074660744