SCR-Writing Bank by Quina

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 16?

2023-11-07 17:03:00 UTC

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9?

2023-11-07 17:06:26 UTC

Sentence 32 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

2023-11-07 17:06:31 UTC

Luka wants to revise sentence 12 in his essay. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 12 in a clear and effective way. E1.9C

2023-11-07 17:07:15 UTC

Spring 2023 STAAR EOC, English 2 - #48 Revising Passage (TEKS 9.Dv)

djyost — 2023-11-07 17:07:31 UTC

Sentence 16 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

POSSIBLE EXEMPLAR ANSWERS:

The ad said that you are looking for a responsible individual who has pet care experience, excellent communication, and great compassion for animals.

The ad said you are looking for a responsible individual with pet care experience, excellent communication skills, and great compassion for animals.

Sentence 2 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 2 in a clear and effective way.

mpinelalexus — 2023-11-07 17:08:30 UTC

Suggested Correct Answer: Regardless of the reason, musical instruments are a meaningful addition to a person's skill set.

Sentence 12 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

2023-11-07 17:14:24 UTC

English 1--Sentence 12 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

Readiness Standard 9C. Reporting Category 5

Answer:

Lincoln utilized his knowledge of the writings of prominent figures as well as his developed storytelling skills to help shape his platform for president.

Rationale: Rearranging the wording this way creates a clearer and more concise sentence and places the preposition “as well as” in the correct place.

What is the most effective way to revise sentence 32?

acaldero — 2023-11-07 20:47:16 UTC

In the late spring, the sides of the cliffs echo with the music of tiny tree frogs.

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 14?

msalcido11 — 2023-11-07 20:47:32 UTC

7th grade Writing 20-21

Answer: F

Sentence 15 needs to be revised. In the box provided, re-write sentence 15 in a clear and effective way.

2023-11-07 20:48:06 UTC

Spring 2021 7th Grade. What's the most effective way to revise sentence 15?

2023-11-07 20:50:22 UTC

What is the best way to revise sentence 36?

acaldero — 2023-11-07 20:51:54 UTC

I saved it, I look after it, and I love it.

What is the most effective way to combine sentence 12 and 13 in a clear and effective way?

2023-11-07 20:52:14 UTC

Answer:

Huge flames shot out of the burner, heating the air inside the balloon.

Sentence 8 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

2023-11-07 20:52:43 UTC

A shrill scream from the car behind me snaps me out of my daydream and returns my focus to the world around me.

Sentence 3 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite this sentence in a clear and effective way.

2023-11-07 20:54:01 UTC

Answer B: They write essays, take tests, do homework, and attend sports practices.

The meaning of sentence 16 is unclear. In the box below re-write the sentence in a clear and effective way.

2023-11-07 20:54:30 UTC

Spring 2021 7th Grade. The meaning of sentence 20 is unclear. What change should Ben make to improve the clarity of this sentence?

2023-11-07 20:56:55 UTC

Sentence 9 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 9 in a clear and effective way.

2023-11-07 21:04:18 UTC

All I can hear is the whoosh of the wind, the thunder of the car's metallic wheels, and the piercing shrieks of my fellow passengers.