https://padlet.com/26kdieujuste/c8zk5uoz481t Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:53:08 UTC 2021-04-04 06:23:26 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f371.png 26tcoffey https://padlet.com/26kdieujuste/c8zk5uoz481t/wish/420826821 “Friends” is a really intriguing piece. I loved how Rein became much more comfortable around Petra as the story went on. In the beginning of the story Rein was very anti-social and didn’t care much about other people. I liked how your character did take a little while to finally realize the difference between right and wrong in relationships. Another part of the piece I really liked was your hook. It had a ton of details and was very vivid. I could imagine all the leaves swirling around and it made me really feel Rein in that moment. One wish I have for your piece is that the theme was a little shallow. I would’ve liked the theme to be less focused on using technology and more focused on friendships.]]> 2019-12-06 16:01:58 UTC https://padlet.com/26kdieujuste/c8zk5uoz481t/wish/420826821 https://padlet.com/26kdieujuste/c8zk5uoz481t/wish/422271105 2019-12-10 16:49:09 UTC https://padlet.com/26kdieujuste/c8zk5uoz481t/wish/422271105