I hope this email finds you well. As a passionate photographer from Penang, specializing in lifestyle and portraits on animals, I've long admired Catonomy's unique vibe. Your cats makes it a local standout.

Recently, I discovered your cat café on social media and was instantly hooked by the rustic, welcoming atmosphere, as well as the adorable cats which are perfect for a photoshoot. I'd love to collaborate on a complimentary 2 - 3 hour session to capture your essence: cats and delicious food for my portfolio. In exchange, you'll receive high resolution, edited images for your marketing, social media, or website.

In my opinion, this is a win-win situation, showcasing your cats while boosting your café’s popularity at no cost. I'm flexible on timing, so how about 11.00a.m. in the morning on the weekends?

Thank you for considering this creative opportunity. Eager to hear from you!

Warm regards,

NG JHEE HOW

 Photographer

 579njh@gmail.com

https://www.instagram.com/404not_foundz/

Georgetown, Penang

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You propose a time, but it might sound rigid. Suggesting flexibility first, then offering an example time, may be more persuasive.

Phrases like In my opinion can be cut. Stronger: This is a win-win situation…

Greetings! My name is Adriana, and I recently visited your business which immediately caught my interest. I was struck by the cozy atmosphere and aesthetic of your cafe.I really like the vintage decor you've curated and the nostalgic feeling it all comes together to form, your murals and vinyl collection especially caught my eye.  

Therefore, I would really be interested in a collaborative photoshoot at your cafe. I’d like to highlight the charm of your little hidden cafe and its unique and cozy decor that stands out from the other cafes in the area. In return, you would also receive a variety of professional images that will be useful for your own marketing or social media. I’ll also post your business on social media to ensure you get the maximum exposure from all of this.

I would be happy to discuss the details further at a time that is convenient for you. I hope you consider this proposal, and I anticipate your response. Feel free to contact me on any of my social media if that’s your preferred form of communication.

Warm regards,

Adriana Lee
adriana1@gmail.com

x.com/adrianashoots 

Suggestions:

Be more specific — how long the photoshoot will take, how many images they can expect, and that it’s free.

Call-to-action: Right now it’s passive (“I hope you consider…”). Stronger would be: “Would you be open to a quick chat this week?”