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D irect adress

A literation

F acts

O pinion

R hetorical question

E motive language

S tatistics

T hree

P urpose

A udience

F orm

T one

_{What do you think?}

_{Is marriage a prison?}

_{well, it depends, at first you think especially in the world we live in an image is created about how marriage is love and two people unite and are filled with happiness, but is that necessarily true? Well maybe in some cases but not in all. It can depend on several factors for example culture, age and maybe gender. In some cases men have rights that women do not have, men are allowed and women are not, in some, there are forced planned unwanted marriages and some are abusive relationships, some might be all of that but covered up with a white veil of lies...}

I know I must,

Not let the musty, moldy dust get a hold of me,

To turn me into dust,

I shall not rest and let my bones rust,

I won't shatter like a vase,

Or live in a, crummy, cloudy cave,

 Nor let my body rest in a dull grave,

I can't give up now,

I can't be like a broken, useless cup,

Now i have to start a new page,

In a different, better phase,

Not locked up in a copper cage,

I think it's time,

To finally thrive, like a beautiful butterfly,

Why not go and have an adventure each day?

Why not explore the world and its beautiful, amazing wonders?

So now at last I can put the past behind my back,

So my new and improved, yes improved, journey can start…

First the alarm didn't go of which was weird because usually it wouldn't stop ringing after 6:45 so i woke up 30mins late then i realized i have a test first period so I hurried up and changed then i was getting in my car which I then realized I didn't have gas in so I had no option except using my little sisters bike because both my parents had already went to work half way there i went over a rock and the tires got deflated so I had to leave it there then take it later then as i was walking my t-shirt got stuck to a tree branch and ripped it, yay i finally got to school but the teacher didn't let me take it because I was so late but it didn't matter anyways because I would've only had 15 mins. I got past the remaining 2 lessons and it was time for lunch, but I realized my best friend wasn't here, great, I had to sit alone, then orange juice spilled all over me, amazing, what used to be a white nice shirt turned to a ripped orange shirt. When school was finally over, I went home, then I remembered I forgot my sister's bike, so I had to go back and wheel it all the way home. And that's how a great day was.

-The protagonist is the dentist.

-The antagonist is the mayor.

-The conflict between the mayor and the dentist was deeper; it included politics and the mayor's wrong and unfairness with the citizens. Of course, there is inequality, and the mayor has the upper hand.

-The narrative's point of view is in third person.

-The setting and room and how the mayor looks and his ugliness inside out, it gives us a scene and image, a clear view

-He doesn't like him or his doings, he doesn't condone his actions and doesn't want to help him.

-Not really, as the mayor threatened to kill him, and also the mayor has more power, and there is injustice.