What letter grade score would you give this paper? EXPLAIN your answer! by Mrs. Rickner

2014-12-01 17:41:21 UTC

2014-12-02 01:15:29 UTC

Blake Arthur lobdell

2014-12-05 19:04:29 UTC

I would give this text a 84% or a B or 27/32 because the author did good on the plot but the organization of the story isn't as good as I think it could be.

Nina

2014-12-05 19:05:26 UTC

I would give her an A+ I it was a good story it just didn't catch my attention.. I would recommend it to somebody else just not me

Uuy

2014-12-05 19:07:28 UTC

Julia and gabe

2014-12-05 19:08:30 UTC

We would give her a 22/32 as a B or C she did a sort of good job with writing it but it felt like we were watching a movie

Isaiah thomas

2014-12-05 19:09:04 UTC

I would give her a A- because her organization wasn't that good. She didn't tell to much or show the characteristics of the characters. Everything else was pretty good

Matthew blackburn

2014-12-05 19:09:31 UTC

I would give her a C- because her organization was not very good. She didn't show character traits she mostly just told us

Victor omRi

2014-12-05 19:11:21 UTC

What I would give this paper is a b-

Isaiah b.

2014-12-05 19:12:11 UTC

I would give the writer an a- because some of the grammar was not good

Mi

2014-12-05 19:12:32 UTC

I give her an A+ because she had nice dialogue.

James

2014-12-05 19:12:50 UTC

I give this book a A- because the author could had a stronger devolpment, language/convention, and grammar.

Nicholas

2014-12-05 19:12:59 UTC

I would give this story an A- because the author didn't use any sensory language. She had a good plot line though.

Fiana A- or b+

2014-12-05 19:13:30 UTC

She caught my attention to the beginning of the story to the end I kinda got bored

JamirPeterson

2014-12-05 19:13:51 UTC

I think a C+ cause good but not a

Lot of sensory language

savannah

2014-12-05 19:14:13 UTC

A- because she didn't give that much character traits and it sounded like something from a movie I saw

Norman Labow

2014-12-05 19:14:37 UTC

I would give this a C+, since I had given it a 25/32, also, this book was very good, but it needed just a bit more explanation of characters, and more sensory language than sight.

Gary

2014-12-05 19:14:39 UTC

C because I did feel like I was there

And they did not dicribe most of the characters.

Dant

2014-12-05 19:14:50 UTC

Ms e

2014-12-05 19:14:55 UTC

AJ

2014-12-05 19:14:59 UTC

I got a 21.5/32 score so I would give it a B or B+ because the author didn't use much sensory language and made one dialogue error

Dante

2014-12-05 19:15:08 UTC

I believe he deserves a B-

Because, it didn't get me attached, but it made me feel like I was in the story

Mylah

2014-12-05 19:15:33 UTC

21.5 because she didn't have much sensory language and she made 1 spelling error because she put a period instead of a comma

Fiana

2014-12-05 19:15:44 UTC

I scored as a 25/32

Jake

2014-12-05 19:15:50 UTC

C 1/2 organization killed her grade because the plot was not focoused in the story

Jt

2014-12-05 19:15:52 UTC

I have her a b because she didn't have that much sensory language because she only gave one peace of sensory language which was seeing

Briman

2014-12-05 19:15:56 UTC

Andy

2014-12-05 19:16:02 UTC

I would give this story 21/34because it really did not have that much action at the climax

Brimah

2014-12-05 19:16:14 UTC

B because she was descriptive when it came to certain things it wasn't really interesting. And it lost me at the end.

Victor omari

2014-12-05 19:16:33 UTC

The reason why Is because is that there is not much as action

2014-12-05 19:17:11 UTC

Petra

2014-12-05 19:17:15 UTC

B because it didn't really give a lot of character traits

Sidha

2014-12-05 19:17:24 UTC

I would give this paper B.The reason is because it was sort of confusing at the end.

Chezi

2014-12-05 19:17:50 UTC

I would give this an b because it didn't really describe character

Mylah

2014-12-05 19:17:55 UTC

I think it was like a movie and had way too much dialogue. The story also want organized enough