Craig's Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Craig Hamilton https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC 2024-12-09 03:43:34 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889884 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889884 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889885 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889885 30 Basic Human Rights CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889887 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889887 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889889 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889889 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889890 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889890 Rough Draft CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889891 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889891 Final Draft CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889892 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889892 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889894 My story will be in 3rd person]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889894 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889895 My story takes place in a tiny shack in the middle of the snow. The society and the government are evil.
The time is in the future.]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889895 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889896 My characters are  Rob parker ,eliza Hamilton, and john wills. Rob is like the leader of the group and a little strict. eliza is like the smart one.And john is a adventurer .They meet a boy named Craig  and his parents work for the program but Craig knows all the passages and pass codes in the place. To help them sneak in and steal the pass codes.]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889896 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889897 The government takes down rebels and people that don´t listen to them. Rob helps people escape from the government. eliza takes care of the injured. John he ...... well we don´t know what he does. On the way to the camp they meet a boy named Craig it turns out his family works for the program and his dad is the leader.But then he decides he wants to adventure with them. Craig has a laser gun and gravity grenades he lends them to the rebels to stop the program]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889897 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889898 They try to stop the government from turning people into evil soilders.]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889898 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889900 Rob learns to trust his team more and be more nice. eliza can see stuff nobody else can. John found a hookshot on the floor and gets up to high places. Craig has usefull items from the program headquarters. He sneeks them from there.]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889900 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889901 The most exciting part of my story is when they defeat the governments by just pressing a button that shuts down the program and all the cerium. And Craig makes his parents good again.]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889901 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889904 The theme of my story is you cant just rely on yourself and tools so what im saying is they couldn´t do it without teamwork. and never judge someone.]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889904 Due Dates CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889905 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889905 Prompt CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889907 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889907 Theo's Song CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889908 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889908 Rubric CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889909 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889909 Point of View CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889911 In the beginning the narrator is explaining whats going on about theo and the blacksmith shop it is in the smithy.]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889911 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889912 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889912 Characters CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889913 Theo, neema,Government ]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889913 Conflict CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889914 People are forced to do the opposite jobs they want because as it says people are easy to control when they are unhappy.]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889914 Plot: Sequential CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889915 Event #:Theo was forced to be a blacksmith.
Event #: Theo meets a girl named neema and she tells him they have a bad government.
Event #:Theo hasn't heard music before .
Event #:Theo sings and gets a nekalace from neema.
Event # (Climax):Theo stood up to the government and sang in front of them.
Event #:For singing theo got punished and couldn't speak for a month.
Event #:After that neema saw that she and all the other blacksmiths started to sing.
Event #(Resolution): Everyone got to have their real jobs that they wanted.]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889915 Theme CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889917 The theme of this is don't let people decide your fate.]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889917 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" CH23edu https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889918 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. h]]> 2017-12-13 17:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CH23edu/c67z6g8ub48t/wish/215889918