https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity Cause/Effect Essay en-us 2017-08-24 05:07:41 UTC 2024-10-30 12:27:29 UTC hello@padlet.com aimi_ed_mmumlk https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182500764 GROUP 1: EFFECTS OF LONG DISTANCE RELATIONSHIP.
GROUP 2:  CAUSES OF HOMELESSNESS
GROUP 3: CAUSES OF GENDER INEQUALITY.
GROUP 4: EFFECTS OF SOCIAL MEDIA ON STUDENTS
GROUP 5: CAUSES OF VIDEO GAMES ADDICTION AMONG TEENAGERS

]]> 2017-08-24 05:13:31 UTC https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182500764 aimi_ed_mmumlk https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182501207 1. THESIS STATEMENT (WITH MAIN POINTS)
2. TOPIC SENTENCES
3. SUPPORTING DETAILS (POINTS)
4. RESTATEMENT OF THESIS]]> 2017-08-24 05:20:02 UTC https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182501207 https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182506107  Thesis statement
Peer pressure, higher stress level and effective advertisements are the main culprits that lead to video games addiction among teenagers.
Topic sentences
1) First and foremost, teenagers are more likely to be influenced by their friends, whatever their friends do, they will follow, this theory is also applied in video games addiction.
2) Higher stress level they gained from their studies will drive teenagers to release stress through video games and become addicted.
3) Advertisements about video games that keep popping out in social media such as Facebook and instagram is also one of the main causes of video game addiction among adolescents.
Supporting details
1) If the teenager does not play video games as his friends, he will not be able to blend in well and as a result of being left out by his friends, he will feel lonely and do not have common conversation with his friends.
2) All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. However, when teenagers cannot juggle well between studying and playing video games, they will become addicted to video games and tend to neglect their studies.
3) Effective advertisements can easily brainwash teenagers in the light of fact that they will download the video games once they found it interesting. Unhealthy elements such as pornography and violence boost their interests to try out the games and increase the risk of getting addicted.
Restatement of thesis 
There are many factors that contribute to video games addiction among youngsters



]]> 2017-08-24 06:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182506107 https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182506560 Group 4]]> 2017-08-24 06:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182506560 https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182506757 Causes of homelessness
THESIS STATEMENT
What is homelessness?As the defination that find from Wikipedia , homelessness is the condition of people without a permenent residence such as a house or apartment.

TOPIC SENTENSES
1.First and foremost, the homelessness is occured because of the debt issues.Nowadays, the world economics are become weaker than before. There are a lot of hiring employee incident in every company. Most of people are losing their job and can't afford their family expenses. Hence, they are forced to have a loan with loan sharks. The loan sharks also have a high interest to them. At the deadline that given by the loan sharks, they can't afford the debt. The loan sharks have their debt collection to the debtor. Without any choices, they force to leave their home to escape from the loan sharks.Hence, the homelessness issue occured.
2.In addition to that, the homelessness also occured because of rebellious of teenagers.The teenagers who are from 13-17years old are in the puberty. They are disagree the advices.from elder.They also become more playful.and easily affect by freinds around them.Once they are have argument with elder ,they will leave home with their friends and become homeless.
3.Last but not least, the addiction to drugs also cause a person become homeless.The drug addict will always take the drug anyway.They won't back home untill they are running out of money.Once they request money from family, the argument will happen and the.relationship between them will breakdown.
RESTATEMENT OF THESIS
As a result, the homelessness become serious. This issue should be sloved immediately to avoid it become more serious.]]> 2017-08-24 06:35:12 UTC https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182506757 https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182507770 Thesis statement:
Staying in touch is the key to surviving a long distance relationship. There are three common effects staying in long distance relationship which are lack of trust, less focus on study and loneliness . 

Topic sentence 1
Lack of trust. 
First of all, one of the effects of long distance relationship is lack of trust because they have no proper communication with each other. 
~misunderstanding  thoughts. 

Topic sentence 2
Less focus on study. 
Next, long distance relationship also effects on our studies. 
~anxiety
You have no idea what your loved one is doing on the other side of the phone. 
~Raise stress level of a person

Topic sentence 3
Loneliness 
In addition,one of effects of long distance relationship also brings up loneliness. we will feeling lonely when we're in a long distance relationship. 
~loneliness increase when the couple does not get the chance to spend time with each other
~ difference holidays

Restatement of thesis
As a result of long distance relationship, it will leads to lack of trust, less focus on study and loneliness. ]]> 2017-08-24 06:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182507770 https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182509590 Thesis statement 

Gender inequality which in this context implies unfair treatment given to female gender with respect to the male has many causes. Its causes include culture and tradition, lack of education, and religion. 

Topic sentence 
1) First of all, one of the causes of why gender inequality happens is because culture and tradition.
2) In addition, lack of proper education and lack of empowerment can also be accounted as a cause of gender inequality. 
3) Last of all, religion is also a factor that cause gender inequality to take place in our daily life.

Supporting details 
1) The elders of the old community do not like hearing about female as a leader and having men as the only leaders in some communities is a part of their life as they see it as a normal thing. 
2) Usually in those days, the males in the family are given more attention to get proper education 
compared to the females in the family. 
3) Some individuals use religion as a tool to control their followers. They misinterpreted the original meaning of the religion and given wrong mindset of women to their followers.]]> 2017-08-24 06:54:24 UTC https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182509590 aimi_ed_mmumlk https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182513116 2017-08-24 07:20:58 UTC https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182513116 https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182737492 1)THESIS STATEMENT
The impacts of social media on students are  students get entrapped by the ploys of social networking, students inculcates bad habit, and students become prone to frequent fluctuations in mood and self-control.

2)TOPIC SENTENCES
First of all, one of the impacts of social media on students is students get entrapped by the ploys of social networking. The most important things in a student’s life are studying, learning good habits and gaining knowledge to become a person with moral character. But today, students neglect their studies by spending time on social networking websites rather than studying or interacting with people in person. Actively and frequently participating in social networking can negatively affect their grades or hamper their journeys to their future careers.

Next, the second impact of social media on students is students inculcates bad habit.Getting too involved in social media can lead to an addiction that inculcates bad habits. Students prefer to chat with friends for hours, and this leads to a waste of time that could have been used for studying, playing or learning new skills.

Moving on, the third impact of social media on students is students become prone to frequent fluctuations in mood and self-control. This can be seen when one of the student’s friends posted about his or her present relationship with someone, then other friends are pressed to follow. Actions that attract more public attention holds more value, even despite some of them being immoral or illegal. We even see that many students are worried about their looks, and so they always try to upload nicer pictures than their friends. This can lead to stress, anxiety or fear about their identities as people. Consistently thinking in this way can sometimes lead to depression. 

RESTATEMENT OF THESIS
In conclusion, social media brings negative impacts on students. So, parents play an important role in making sure their children do not become the victim of the dark side of the social media. It must be handled with care and smartly so as to make sure it does not get any worse ]]> 2017-08-25 04:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/aimi_ed_mmumlk/lj05_inclassactivity/wish/182737492