Job Application Cover Letter Review by NIK https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22 English for Career Development DUE20062 en-us 2023-02-08 01:50:52 UTC 2023-02-13 13:56:14 UTC hello@padlet.com Mus'af & Nik aimanzamzurri00 https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472708575 In our review, the job application letter produced by Joshua Ortega, an interview candidate who wants to work at the company Charleston Solutions, is specifically for the role of Network Engineer with Kryptype. As a reader or interviewer, I am sure that the candidate is an exceptional person because he has a deep background and experience in his career field. Not only that, he also expressed the skills and abilities in the content paragraph.

If we read several times the letter, almost the entire use of sentences and also the grammar used is very accurate. In fact, there are no spelling mistakes in every sentence. We are sure that these candidates have made sure that their letter has been checked and revised several times so that it is as perfect as possible.

The candidate is a very experienced person and it is not impossible that he can get the job applied for. With the candidate's abilities, of course this company will consider his job application. He also expressed his desire to work with this company.]]> 2023-02-08 01:54:50 UTC https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472708575 Nadhir & Danish https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472710701 2023-02-08 01:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472710701 Zubaidah & Fatimah https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472728714 1. In my opinion, my first impression when viewing the letter are feel good. It’s because the letter are simple and concise.

2. The words and phrases used in the letter are very appropriate and the sentence used are straight to the point, making the letter easy to understand.

3. The author uses points to lis his abilities to give a neater visible effect. The abilities listed are also very suitable for the position.

4. The connection between what the writer has and the position requirement are match what was requested which is about materials engineering.

5. The author also gives a summary of his qualifications in a concise manner. Besides that, he has also placed his achievement in short in the last paragraph.

6. Other elements that i can review is the writter forget to give a sign of the letter. That should be avoided because it will show that we are not serious about working.]]> 2023-02-08 02:19:04 UTC https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472728714 Riduan & Daniel https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472729636 i.Yes, based on Elizabeth Lynette's writing, it is very simple and aphoristic. Also, be careful with the writing format.
ii.The words and phrases used by Elizabeth Lynette are also not too high and easy to understand. In addition, the writing style is very interesting.
iii.The Author have a degree of Financial]]> 2023-02-08 02:20:02 UTC https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472729636 Azira & Fatin https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472731013

]]> 2023-02-08 02:21:35 UTC https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472731013 Farid & Aqmar https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472970137 JOB APPLICATION COVER LETTER REVIEW

1. Work with a partner.

2. Search for a simple of cover letter and study it.

3. Review the letter in terms of:

 

i.         Is the letter has good impressions?
 
·         For our opinion, the writer applies the main requirements of the company he is applying to in order to attract the attention of those who receive his resume. 
 
ii.       The words and phrases used in the letter
 
·         For my opinion the language that writer use is good and easy to understand. The writer also use many action’s verb to describe the skill that he have correctly.
 
iii.     The matching skills, qualifications, experiences and the qualities the employer is looking for.
 
·         The writer also told that he already has experience in the position desired by the company for 11 years and has the skills and acknowledge that are required by the position desired by him
 
iv.     The connection between what the writer has and the position requirement
 
·         The skill of writer and what the position in the company wants is suitable for the writer. For example, Managing Timelines, reporting overall progress, Managing daily operations. All the skill is required for the position at the company.
 
v.       How the writer showcase his/her achievements
 
·         The author's accomplishment he applied in Closing Paragraph to add a little bit of interest to the company to give him job opportunities
 
vi.     Other elements
 
·         Other element the writer use is to persuade the company to reply the resume at the closing

]]> 2023-02-08 07:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2472970137 Iskandar & Muhammad mirzaiskandar2002 https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2473250797 In our opinion, our first impression when read the letter are feel like this writer is so good. We can feel his enthusiastic impression when writing this letter. In terms of word and phrase usage, he's so good in English and some word that used is high level English word.

The writer has not state the skills, qulaification and experience that needed by the company he applied but for sure he's so confident with his skils and experience,he can get the job position

In this letter, the writer stated that his expertise in Data Analyst, SQL and Microsoft Office. We sure that, he has high chance to get position in the company that he applied. In terms of salary, the writer expect that it would be valuable as his skills and he's very happy to discuss about it.

Finally, we hope that the writer will get the job position that he dreamed of and can get work with his passion.]]> 2023-02-08 11:17:04 UTC https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2473250797 RASHID & AMIR https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2479167592 1. Yes, he did make this letter really well and understandable in detail, which left me with a positive impression.

2.The letter uses straightforward language that is simple to grasp.

3.In my opinion, seeking for the qualities that he possesses in addition to the skill qualifications and others that she possesses.]]> 2023-02-13 13:42:36 UTC https://padlet.com/aimanzamzurri00/c4fylotcb1drfq22/wish/2479167592