by Chloe Hornby

Shane

chloehornby_xox — 2015-06-04 08:35:54 UTC

I liked the way that the animation itself only took up a small section of the screen, this made it seem as if your viewpoint was from a seat in the audience.

I also thought the animation ran quite smoothly and was to a very good standard.

I think the music at the beginning however ran a little too long, the intro to the song seemed very prolonged and I think the intro should have ended by the time the curtains opened.

Dan White

chloehornby_xox — 2015-06-04 08:41:07 UTC

I like the theme that you went with, it was very interesting and the music that

went with it went really well. Also the ballerinas that were going across the

screen went across without any lag or low fps, so it all ran quite smoothly.

However it would of been more interesting to see it offer more, maybe the

colour of the ballerinas could of been different to catch the eye of the

audience.

Penny

chloehornby_xox — 2015-06-04 08:45:56 UTC

The background fit with the silhouettes and it looked very pretty. I liked the music, also fit with the theme. It is interesting to watch, just would prefer it was a bit longer.

Dan

chloehornby_xox — 2015-06-04 08:48:09 UTC

The silhouette idea is good and different from the other animations and I really like how you edited

the curtains at the start and end. To improve you could make the silhouettes do a bit more.

Chris Palmer

chloehornby_xox — 2015-06-04 08:51:26 UTC

I thought that the music fitted with the animation and added to the overall atmosphere.

The frame could be bigger and be better quality.

Cameron

chloehornby_xox — 2015-06-04 08:52:19 UTC

I like the idea of having a literal stage for the animation to take place. Although, to improve you

could of worked with the layers more. Having the dancers come from behind the curtains instead

of infront.