BRAINSTORMING by SYAZANA SYAHIRA BINTI SALLEH Moe https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp Post your opinion. en-us 2021-06-29 15:02:11 UTC 2023-03-14 23:07:18 UTC hello@padlet.com Post your opinion. g82297214 https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630243862 1.  What do you think about this story? 
2. Do you like it or not? 
3. What can you do to make the story much better? ]]> 2021-06-29 15:03:38 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630243862 Nur Najwa 3F https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630895527 1. I think the story is very short and simple.
2. I don't like the story because it's too plain.
3. I will add some interesting storyline like horror, comedy, suspense, drama and so on.]]> 2021-06-30 01:41:09 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630895527 Ilham Erdina 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630897615 1. this story sounds a little bit plain. there's not much details to make it interesting.
2. i dont really like this story.
3.add more fun details such as time, place etc. to make the story more interesting and enjoyable ]]> 2021-06-30 01:42:21 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630897615 Hakimi Bin Hafiz 3F https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630899407 1.This story seems to need a more interesting verse.
2.No, i don't like the story
3.We can add some more details such as the venue's name ,times and add some storylines for the reader feels excited to read the story.]]> 2021-06-30 01:43:31 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630899407 Nuruluzma Naziya 3F https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630899610 1.I think this story is so  short and it's too direct.
2.I don't like it.
3.Maybe add more activities and mention the place that he or she go and people he or she meet.]]> 2021-06-30 01:43:38 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630899610 Khairul Aniq 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630903960 1. It is actually quite simple but meaningful as he enjoys being with his family.
2. Yes 
3. I will add more stories inside it and also add more positive emotions to show them that i'm having fun with my family.]]> 2021-06-30 01:46:00 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630903960 Aina Yasmin 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630905554 1. The story is very short and simple.
2. I don’t really like it.
3. Try to put more explanations or create some plot to make it more exciting for readers.]]> 2021-06-30 01:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630905554 Razin Dzakirin 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630908040 I think this strory about a family go outside. I like this story. We can put more story.]]> 2021-06-30 01:48:28 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630908040 Muhammad Amsyar3z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630909671 1.it is really short story and boring.
2.i dont like it.
3.i will add more situation and make it better

]]> 2021-06-30 01:49:21 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630909671 Nur Athirah 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630910596 1. In my honest opinion, this story is lacking in vocabulary since I can't really see any details.
2. I dont really like it but it is not a bad story at all.
3. I think I can add more words. For instance, I can change the word "next" to "after that" or more interesting words. The word 'funny' can be replaced with a better sentence that describes how the character was enjoying the movie. ]]> 2021-06-30 01:49:43 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630910596 Nur Ajla'a Shuhada 3z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630911512 1.I think the story is too short to my liking.
2.I don't really like it but it's not so bad. 
3.The story also need lot of improvements in terms of choice of sentences to explain a little bit more of the details that happen in the story.And maybe consider putting some dialogue to make the story even more interesting. ]]> 2021-06-30 01:50:08 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630911512 Syameel Irfan 3F https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630911673 1.This story seems to need a more interesting verse
2.Yes,i like the story
3.I will add some interesting storyline like horror or curious]]> 2021-06-30 01:50:14 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630911673 Najwa Munifah 3F https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630912794 1. I think this story is very short and doesn't sound dramatic.
 2. I don't like it because it unattractive
3. It can be much better if put some structure in this story. this story can be much better by following a basic structure of: 
• orientation 
• rising action 
• climax 
• falling action 
• resolution 
Lastly, make sure this story has a rough idea of where the story is going before it starts

]]> 2021-06-30 01:50:52 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630912794 Ainureen Najma 3F https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630912867 1.This story seems too short and quite simple
2.I don't really like it
3.I will add more interesting storyline to make the story more interesting]]> 2021-06-30 01:50:54 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630912867 Wan haziq https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630913279 1. The story is too short and not interesting.
2.i dont like
3. Add more activities]]> 2021-06-30 01:51:09 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630913279 FITRA SHAZIZY 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630913576 1. I think the story is funny though it lacks plots, which make the storyline short. 
2. I do like it but there's so less things that occured and it's expected without watching it completely. 
3. I think they should've put a twist and more protagonist and antagonist scenes. ]]> 2021-06-30 01:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630913576 Abdul Aidil Shah 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630913646 1.I think the story is interesting but the story is too simple
2.Not really
3.You can add some story about the day he/she went out with his family so that the story is not to simple]]> 2021-06-30 01:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630913646 muhd haziq 3F https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630913879  1.I think this story is short but easy to understand
2.Yes
3.I will add more storylines to make this story better]]> 2021-06-30 01:51:28 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630913879 Aleeya Maisarah 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630915952 1.I think this story is too short and it is not good enough to impress other people who is reading this story. 
2.I don't like it. 
3.I think we can add more storyline .]]> 2021-06-30 01:52:39 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630915952 Aura 3f https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630918200 1. I think this story too short and  very boring to read

2. No, i don't like it at all
3. I can add some interesting story and add some conhensive divices and tell more detail about the trip
.]]> 2021-06-30 01:53:48 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630918200 Zuniza Elisa 3F https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630918836 1.The story is not interesting.
2. I don't like it.
3. I will add as much details and incorporate challenges that they face.]]> 2021-06-30 01:54:10 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630918836 Syaida Syazwani 3z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630920686 1.The story is too short yet concise and there is no interesting storyline
2. I don't really like the story. 
3.To make the storyline more interesting we can add descriptions such as why it is necessary to go to the store, time, and so on]]> 2021-06-30 01:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630920686 https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630921460 Azri 3F
1.to short
2.no
3.you can extend the story by using who, where,when]]> 2021-06-30 01:55:39 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630921460 Aina Nazleen 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630921615
1. To be honest, for me I find it quite boring to read. I'm sure that the person writing this felt lots of emotions and had fun. However, the choices of words are not there to make it stand out.

2. For me I don't really like it.

3. Instead of telling the story like your giving instructions for baking a cake, might as well use interesting vocabularies, synonyms, sentence openers so you can hook the reader into reading your story.]]> 2021-06-30 01:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630921615 Balqis Damia 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630921872 1. I think this story is very short and doesn't make me interested. 
2. I don't like it because this story somehow lacking and not interesting. 
3. The author should make some plot like something funny, adventurous or horror  happen to make it more enjoyable. ]]> 2021-06-30 01:55:53 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630921872 Siti Ayu 3f https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630924216 1.the story is too short
2.not really because the story is too short to understand 
3.i will add more sentences to the story]]> 2021-06-30 01:57:06 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630924216 BIBI NADIA HUSNA 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630925511 1. This story is too short and not interesting 
2. I don't like it
3. I will add more storyline to make it more interesting 
]]> 2021-06-30 01:57:50 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630925511 Siti Sumayyah 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630929977 1. I think the story is too short. 
2. Yes, I like it but only to a certain extent.
3. I will include more details to make it more interesting.]]> 2021-06-30 02:00:29 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1630929977 Syaza Jazmina 3Z https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1631008550 1. I think the story is too short but easy to understand the main topic
2. I don't really like it
3. I will add more interesting discourse markers and more details in the story]]> 2021-06-30 02:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/g82297214/c3v66t8ctg6hakrp/wish/1631008550