https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo Get help from a peer! en-us 2017-12-15 15:06:19 UTC 2025-10-25 12:07:12 UTC hello@padlet.com tara_slaughter https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216506272 Tara
Strengths: My conclusion is really strong; I have a lot of concrete examples of actions people can take to address the issue. 

Opportunities for growth: I have A TON of run-on sentences, and need help!]]> 2017-12-15 15:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216506272 tara_slaughter https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216506744 Cora
Strengths: I'm killing it with grammar! Zero issues. 

Opportunities for growth: I'm struggling to come up with really detailed narratives or examples! I need someone to be a sounding board. ]]> 2017-12-15 15:08:20 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216506744 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216608869 Strengths: I have lots of concrete examples for unknown things (my topic is jargon-heavy)

Weakness: I'm almost over the word count and I still need to include one more Major playermode. I need help cutting down the words/cutting out unnecessary stuff.]]> 2017-12-15 19:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216608869 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216608874 strengths- Ideas, vision,

opportunities for growth- Organization, structure]]> 2017-12-15 19:30:23 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216608874 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216609104 Strengths: Voice/diction/essay structure, grammar
weaknesses: Embedding patterns of development, conclusion, thesis

]]> 2017-12-15 19:31:18 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216609104 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216609757 Strengths: grammar, spelling, incorporating my major player mode in my paper
weaknesses: repetition, voice, conclusion]]> 2017-12-15 19:32:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216609757 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216609801 Strengths
Ideas
Identification
Weakness
Fluency 
Paragraph Transitions 
grammar 

]]> 2017-12-15 19:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216609801 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216609892 Strenghts: Modes of analysis and voice
Weaknesses: Conclusion]]> 2017-12-15 19:33:02 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216609892 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216609966 Strengths: Grammar and flow

Weaknesses: My essay is kind of messy and my ideas aren't represented very well]]> 2017-12-15 19:33:18 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216609966 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216610152 Strengths: Essay structure, Grammar, Thesis
Weakness: Conclusion]]> 2017-12-15 19:33:56 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216610152 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216610252 S: Voice
W: Grammar and tone]]> 2017-12-15 19:34:19 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216610252 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216610668 Strengths:  voice and some modes of analysis
Weaknesses: Grammar, and conclusion ]]> 2017-12-15 19:35:42 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216610668 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216610962 Strength: concrete examples

Weakness: Im almost over the word count and I still have to finish up compare/contrast and add in my conlcusion. I need help cutting down words/cutting out unecessary stuff.]]> 2017-12-15 19:36:41 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216610962 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216611001 strengths: grammar and flow.

Weakness: organizing ideas and transitioning topics]]> 2017-12-15 19:36:49 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216611001 https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216611100 Strengths: Voice and causal analysis, effect
Weaknesses: A lot of long sentences, More narration, incorporate more modes]]> 2017-12-15 19:37:14 UTC https://padlet.com/tara_slaughter/c275h1v1tduo/wish/216611100