Glow and Grow for Video Presentation by David J Kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea Please feel free to leave any comments and suggestions that you may have for me for future reference on presentations en-us 2019-12-07 07:09:13 UTC 2019-12-16 02:38:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4cb.png Hi David, From Nina https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/421211225 Glow: I liked the graphics in your presentation; it was interesting to look at. Also, your presentation covered a lot, but did not get confusing, and the usage of outside sources was helpful. 
Grow: I think that there was too much text at some points. Instead, you could use a few key words or phrases and have notes to read aloud.]]> 2019-12-07 19:56:13 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/421211225 Glows and Grows philip_nasisi1 https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/421439238 Glows- I liked how you mentioned VR. I agree with you that VR will be the future and it is important that we advance time and money into it.

Grow- I feel like that there was a lot of information in this project that I struggled to keep up with. Bullet points with 4/5 words can be just as effective as a paragraph when done correctly.

Good Job!
-Philip Nasisi]]> 2019-12-09 03:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/421439238 Glow and Grow for Darnell david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422569899 Glow: I like the visual medium that you have utilized and how you incorporated your basketball career to relate to this course

Grow: Some of the slides included to much wording which can lose the viewer and cause confusion]]> 2019-12-11 05:59:59 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422569899 Glow and Grow for Taurean david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422570150 Glow: The incorporation of your life into the reflection of the course.

Grow: I would say all you need to work on is making the slides more readable and speaking a bit more clearly at times]]> 2019-12-11 06:02:17 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422570150 Glow and Grow for Nina david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422570530 Glow: I like how you combine technology and being a mom into a positive aspect in regards to the advancements.

Grow: Although this was a good presentation, there was no mention about the course and what technology knowledge has been gained.]]> 2019-12-11 06:05:20 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422570530 Glow and Grow for Philip david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422570845 Glow: The presentation as a whole was one which was very interesting. It talked about all the aspects of the class and you reflected well upon it.

Grow: The only thing that I can say is that there are moments where you can slow down so that the audience can understand and comprehend better.

]]> 2019-12-11 06:08:07 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422570845 Glow and Grow for Michael david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422571139 Glow: Within your presentation you have answered the key questions needed to complete the assignment and you spoke in a tone that was very understandable. 

Grow: Many of us have done this in our presentation and that is using too many words. Few key words is all that is needed.]]> 2019-12-11 06:11:05 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422571139 Glow and Grow for James david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422571374 Glow: Your presentation was one that was very organized and very easy to follow and did not cause the viewer any confusion.

Grow: A discussion of the class or main topic being presented in the future would make the presentation better and more intriguing.]]> 2019-12-11 06:13:23 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422571374 Glow and Grow for Dylan david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422571722 Glow: I liked how you conducted research from different sources to make the content more interesting.

Grow: Making the visual medium into a presentation would have made it more intriguing to the viewer and would make the presentation look much more like a slideshow.]]> 2019-12-11 06:16:30 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422571722 Glow and Grow for Maximilian david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422572044 Glow: I liked how you incorporated your personal life into the reflection about the course and being creative with your presentation.

Grow: The only thing that I would do in the future was format Screencast-O-Matic a bit better and speak with more power.

]]> 2019-12-11 06:19:53 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422572044 Glow and Grow for Tiombe david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422572356 Glow: The way you spoke made your presentation flow and I liked how you incorporated your life into the reflection of this presentation.

Grow: There were times where you sped up your speaking. I would try to maintain the same speaking speed throughout the presentation.]]> 2019-12-11 06:23:43 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422572356 Glow and Grow for Mary Grace david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422572672 Glow: I like the use of your own personal life into the reflection about this course and the use of your own artwork in the presentation.

Grow: The only thing that I would work on is speaking more about the technology aspect of the course and how it has caused you to think differently.]]> 2019-12-11 06:27:14 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422572672 Glow and Grow for Arianna david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422573135 Glow: I really like the aspect of how you relate your life to the content learned in class. It seemed as if you were having a conversation throughout the entirety of your presentation.

Grow: The text found in some of the slides was way to long and inefficient for an effective presentation. 
]]> 2019-12-11 06:31:36 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/422573135 Glow and Grow dylan_kleinfeldt https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/423462673 Glow- I really liked how you discussed both the positive and negative impacts of technology. Also, I agree with the fact that technology can be bright in the future if we know how to use it correctly!
Grow-I also like to include a lot of words so I can include a ton of detail, but too many words can cause the listener to lose focus. I would just shorten up your bullet points to get your main thoughts across!

Good Job David,
Dylan Kleinfeldt

]]> 2019-12-12 18:40:19 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/423462673 Glow and Grow ionniari https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/423900430 Glow: I really liked your presentation it was organized and neat

Grow: However, some slides had a little too much words

Arianna]]> 2019-12-13 16:57:46 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/423900430 Glow and Grow tiombe_green https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/424116923 Glow: I liked how thorough you were with discussing technology and how it impacts our lives. Such as, having new methods of communication and improved housing. I think your slides were visually pleasing and well put together. 

Grow: I think your inflection was a little monotonous. The slides also had too many words on some of them. 

Great job!]]> 2019-12-14 08:09:13 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/424116923 Glow and Grow from Jonathan Bar Eli jonathan_bareli https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/424279339 Glow- your presentation was very neat and clear. I liked how you took many factors into consideration when talking about technology. It was very interesting as well.

Grow- This presentation had a lot of information which made some slides have too much words. But great presentation. ]]> 2019-12-15 15:06:32 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/424279339 Glow and Grow james_lopez2 https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/424370601 Glow: you went into good depth about the technology we use daily and how we communicate 

Grow: the amount of text in the slides was a bit much at times]]> 2019-12-16 02:28:02 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/424370601 DeMelfi - Glow and Grow https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/424371824 Glow: interesting topic you picked, loved the creativity, and you have successfully answered the key questions necessary to fulfill the presentation.

Grow: Do not rush it, the speed of the slides were a bit fast. Slow down and take your time 

Well done!]]> 2019-12-16 02:37:31 UTC https://padlet.com/david_kobylarz/c2596my1v3ea/wish/424371824