MY PROFILE by Luisa Fernanda Buitrago Zamora

MY PERSONAL PROFILE

luisaf_buitragoz — 2018-08-17 13:36:37 UTC

I´m going to describe so may aspect from my personality. First, I’m a good friend because I listen to problems and I advise them. Second, I´m a comprehensive with the people at least I´m impatient when people get annoyed also I´m a sociable and outgoing person.
I´m a cheerful and funny person and I like that the people around me are happy too

INTRODUCING MY SELF

luisaf_buitragoz — 2018-08-17 16:25:42 UTC

My major is Journalism and my dream is to write about fashion and to be able to see the fashion shows, I choose my major because the fashion always liked I also like to meet people with whom I can talk about the subject, meet designers who teach me the trends that are in season

IF I´VE EVER DONE ANYTHING SCARY?

luisaf_buitragoz — 2018-08-17 16:40:38 UTC

Well, actually I have once I was in the republican congress and a man came closer to ask who are you looking for because he worked there and I told a congressman and he told me I work with a congressman follow me and I didn´t follow because I didn´t trust him, 

Later I talked with a worker and he told me that this person didn’t work there.

Feedback

odruiz — 2018-08-18 13:35:48 UTC

Dear Luisa,

The blog has the required aspects fo rthe task and the information somehow covered the main ideas of your profile. The information seems to be interesting and catching, althoug it missed more details to completely inform the reader.

On the other hand, the text has some grammar erros but they don't really affect the understanding. However, you should review the language studied in units 1&2 so that you can get more familiar and use the language more often.

Performance:
Con: 4
Voc & Sp: 4
Text order: 4
Grammar: 3.5

Total: 3,9