English 4 by XIMENA ANDREA BAHAMÓN RIOS https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4 en-us 2017-01-13 23:03:38 UTC 2017-01-16 04:22:27 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147170691 Hola

]]> 2017-01-14 00:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147170691 alfredguma https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147201801 What would you do if you were the president of Colombia?



I Would  salve the problems of poor communites, but also  I could have many stress by so much work although  I would  travel to  other countrys  free, also I could reverse??? more money in culture and education, also  I would improve conditions  living of my  people, also  I would promote more culter of peace  in this  country.
My  name is : ALFREDO GUTIERREZ. 
THAKS ALFREDO. YOU COULD HAVE INCLUDED MORE IDEAS. YOUR GRADE: 3.9]]> 2017-01-14 18:28:29 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147201801 sebastian_2507 https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147205668 What would you do if you were the president of Colombia?

If I were the president of Colombia, I would do that make education free so that all children can study and have a good future, I would also make social welfare campaigns to help poor people and give them a home so they can live well.

On the other hand if I were the president would raise the minimum salary to value the work and daily effort of workers, would help people to get their first job because if given the opportunity would decrease the unemployment rate in the country and additional to that in my presidency would diminish the value of the iva.

I would have  the killers and rapists  sentenced them to life in prison to pay for their crimes, because if that happens it could reduce violence, in my presidency I would also campaign to take care of the environment and fine people who throw garbage . Also would do a project to create public shelters so that the people of the street have a place to go

In my presidency would make operative to rescue the people kidnapped by the guerrillas so that they can return with their families. 

Finally in my presidency would make all people have the right to optimal medical care regardless of social stratum, because if  were given that would prevent deaths due to medical negligence.

Name: Jhonny Sebastian Silva 
JHONNY TRY NOT TO USE TRANSLATOR THAT MUCH. YOUR GRADE 5.0]]> 2017-01-14 20:15:43 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147205668 What would you do if you were the president of Colombia? yuliana_d21 https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147206663
If I were president of Colombia, I would be a human thirsty to help society, I would also promote equality, equity, justice, so that peace is the only effective weapon.

From another perspective if I were President of Colombia, I would officially publish a law for the training of the student outside free and demanding, I would also do the projects that contribute to improve the quality of life of the inhabitants of the street, women Head of household and Adult higher

If I were president of Colombia, improve the quality and conditions in the health sector, also promote economic and labor growth to fight against corruption.

Name: Yuliana Quintero Duque
THANKS YULIANA. YOUR GRADE: 5.0
]]> 2017-01-14 20:49:27 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147206663 what would you do if you were the president of colombia? https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147209775 If i were president of colombia, i would legalize the consumption of medical marihuana, for other side i think that i WOULD fight the delinquency with strict laws . punishing with hard hand all the people that break the law, i would decrease the number of the congressman and his salary, i would help all the colombian people no matter what social class, i would include public health into the taxes and never wouldn´t allow I WOULD NEVER ALLOW.... that the person die in the waiting room of the hospitals, into de taxes i would inclued too the education for all the colombian people.

Name : Cristina vaca
THANKS CRISTIAN.. YOUR GRADE: 4.7

]]> 2017-01-14 22:40:06 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147209775 what would you do if you were the president of colombia? https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147212366
If I were president of Colombia, I would approve the death penalty for anyone committing an act of rape against whatever gender and age I had, I would put a heavy hand against any organized crime and robbery simply because it is getting out of hand and Penalties they inflict are too soft for these criminals, I would return to the theme of the eaters of cumunitarios since there are families of scarce resources who need them and more for their children. It IT OR I?would have the issue of education more present and not only help with good scholarships for young people with excellent qualifications in national tests, there are also others who deserve this opportunity and try to open bacchantes in more universities for these. Give more opportunities to these young people.
Name: Sebastian Moscoso
THANKS. TRY NOT TO USE TRANSLATOR THAT MUCH. YOUR GRADE: 4.7

]]> 2017-01-15 01:11:32 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147212366 https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147212802 What would you do if you were the president of Colombia?

If I were the president of Colombia, the first thing I would do would be to reduce taxes, which would help people with limited resources to afford them the money for their daily expenses. The second thing would be to raise the minimum wage of the workers so that the gain is equal to the work done and not be slave and poorly paid. It would also improve free education at the national level so that it is equal to private education and does not exclude anyone because of its socio-economic condition.


Cecilia Guevara
THANKS CECILIA. PLEASE REVISE ERIKA'S TASK. YOU TOO HAVE SOME EQUAL IDEAS. WHAT HAPPENED THERE?
YOUR GRADE: 4.0

]]> 2017-01-15 01:46:40 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147212802 https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147212971 What would you do if you were the president of Colombia?

If I were the president of Colombia one of the first things I would do IS TO LEGALIZE....would be to legalize the death sentence in cases of rape, murder and acid attacks. Another thing that I would do IS TO RAISE... would be to raise the minimum wage and lower the salary to congressmen and also give priority to the health of the poorest, help sectors where public services do not make a law where priority was given to recent students Graduates to get work without having years of experience

Erika Junco
THANKS, CHECK SOME THINGS TO CORRECT. PLEASE REVISE CECILIA'S TASK. YOU TOO HAVE SOME EQUAL IDEAS. WHAT HAPPENED THERE?
YOUR GRADE: 4.0
]]> 2017-01-15 01:58:18 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147212971 What would you do if you were the president of Colombia? d_percy21 https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147214431 If I were the president of Colombia, I would propose the death penalty for the corrupt, rapist and murderer of women and children.
 
I would do JUST ONE VERB HERE propose that prisoners build avenues.
 
I wouldn't put more taxes.
 
I would make that voting was obligating. CHECK THIS SENTENCE.
 
It could help to more animals from the street whit new laws. 
 
It would not allow low economies levels people can more than three children.
 
YOU NEED A SUBJECT PRONOUN HERE Would not allow senators to win more than 8 million pesos. 
 
I would make the river Bogotá again a healthy river and would oblige the companies that polluted it to pay the recovery.
 
My campaign slogan would be, show me that you love Colombia or we do not need you.
 
Name: Percy Ricardo Devia Muñoz.
VERY STRICT! THAT'S GOOD. YOUR GRADE: 4.5
]]> 2017-01-15 03:53:43 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147214431 What would you do if you were the president of Colombia? https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147214584
 
If I were the president of Colombia I would do many A BIG change in the country. The first that I would do is fightING against corruption,  I would end  the injustice that is the biggesT phenomenon that has the country THE COUNTRY HAS.
I would give perpetual condemnation to child abusers and violators.
I could improve the strengthen education and training in youth. 
I would make that the health system were better and I would like that  fostering employment and ending wiht the poverty  also I would double security.
I would look equality in human rights and  I would lower congressional salaries, I would fix in the bad state of the roads, the traffic so that we have a better mobility and finally I would get the country peace.


Name : Alexander Diaz Montero.
THANKS ALEXANDER. YOUR GRADE: 4.7
]]> 2017-01-15 04:02:12 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147214584 What wold you do? if you were the president of colombia? https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147214587
if I were pressident of colombia, i would do a tax reform and I´d try that everyone has house. Also, I wolud give more money and support to the agricultural sector. I´d increase exports

if I were pressident of colombia, i would not put more taxes 

i would increase the minimum wage if I wasWERE  pressident of colombia

Fernando Angarita Plazas.
THANKS FERNANDO. YOU COUULD HAVE INCLUDED MORE IDEAS. YOUR GRADE: 4.0]]> 2017-01-15 04:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147214587 What wold you do? if you were the president of colombia? https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147214769 It would completely industrialize the country so as not to depend on potential industries like the United States.
Foreign relations would be the highest priority.
 It THIS IS "I?"would modify the constitution to reimplant the death penalty those who murder or violate. Those corrupt officials would reconsider the sentenced to be paid in full. The Penitentiary System would be modernized, improving the quality of prisons.
It would increase the minimum wage and reduce the salaries of politicians. That companies have vacancies without the need for experience and that the contracts are directly with the companies and for an indefinite term. That the maternity leave is q year for mothers and month for parents.
Education and health would be allocated the largest budget, because education is the integral development of a country.

Name: Leidy Fresneda
TRY NOT TO USE TRANSLATOR THAT MUCH. YOUR GRADE: 5.0
 

]]> 2017-01-15 04:10:38 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147214769 WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF YOU WERE THE PRESIDENT OF COLOMBIA? If I were president of Colombia I would ensure that every Colombian lived well. How would this be? Work on public policies that help create a fair playing field because living well is living on an equal, this is part of the culture of the life, helping all citizens to create a harmonious relationship between them and in the sovereignty of our Communities. https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147218990 An example of equality of conditions is to reduce the salaries of public servants and establish a minimum wage that covers all the needs of a human being
 Another action of equality is the education to which every human being is entitled, if I were president, the first thing I would do is to leave education free from primary to specialized professionals
 
Diana Patricia Ararat Dìaz
THANKS DIANA. TRY NOT TO USE TRANSLATOR THAT MUCH. YOUR GRADE: 5.0
]]> 2017-01-15 07:28:10 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147218990 What would you do if you were the president of Colombia?If I were the president of Colombia I Would make the hiring in the congress would be suitable for people in charge, thus avoiding corruption from the government, thus giving the opportunity to focus all our attention to improve the really important sectors in vulnarable Departments, such as the Health Sector with themes undernourishment, poor attention and lack of attention.In the Education Sector, would build more district schools so that education reaches the vulnerable departments with illiteracy, I am the people who believe that a good example starts from the education we give children, forming leaders and thus avoiding leaders Corrupt.Yizel Tatiana Molano https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147238840 YIZEL THANKS. TRY NOT TO USE TRANSLATOR THAT MUCH. YOUR GRADE: 5.0]]> 2017-01-15 15:00:04 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147238840 If I were the president of Colombia? If (HERE YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE CONDITION "IF I WERE...")I were the president of the republic COLOMBIA I would fight against corruption,It "I" would seek more resources for the health of Colombians, would also implement new, stricter laws, seek new sources of energy that will not affect our ecosystem. If they were president of Colombia would not put more taxes and people will be happy and will be live in paz. It would allocate more resources for research and education: I would make education free so that all children can study and have a good future and create a national research center. I would go against animal abuseI would clean the rivers. I would seek to give a home to the needyHe would propose a pact between brother countries. Raise the minimum wage. Name: Diego Nicolas Prieto Chunza https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147238897 DIEGO THANKS. JUST SOME SENTENCES TO CHECK. YOUR GRADE: 4.5




]]> 2017-01-15 15:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147238897 What would you do if you were the president of Colombia? https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147238917
If I were the President of Colombia, I would make a restructuring in the Executive, judicial and legislative branch and public institutions; This would be achieved by reducing the salaries of senior officials public, in order to ensure that officials who occupy these posts, really want to work for the progress of the country and with the money saved to help improve the health and education.

Demanding leaders to fulfill the promise to the people of Colombia; If not, they would have an exemplary punishment like jail and reversal of the charge

 
Name: Ingrid Marcela Pinzón García.
THANKS INGRID. YOUR GRADE: 5.0

]]> 2017-01-15 15:01:39 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147238917 What would you do ir you do if you were the president of Colombia? https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147239829 If I were the president of Colombia, I would establish alliances with the industrialized countries to they invest (CHECK THIS SENTENCE) in the economy of Colombia it would fight the crisis. I would create estrategies to improve the health system. I would implement more laws to increasing the condemnation of thieves, murderers, and sexual abuse. Julieth Ortiz.
THANKS JULIETH, YOU COULD HAVE INCLUDED MORE INFORMATION. YOUR GRADE: 4.0


]]> 2017-01-15 15:18:24 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147239829 What would you do ir you do if you were the president of Colombia? addifeya https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147242017
If I were the President of colombia, I would make restructuring of ministries to stop there so many thieves within these, since the vast majority of real problems of our country are born from the loss of the billions of pesos of national budgets for:

* Health
* Education
* Pathways

I would do more and best colleges and universities with the best conditions for the professional development of thousands of children and young people.

I would make a new health regime to provide a better service I would do more hospitals and clinics specialised for all Colombians.
 I could enforce the hundreds of millions of pesos collected in different taxes to make colombia a better country.

Name Adriana Paola Bahamon Narvaez .THANKS MISS BAHAMÓN. YOUR GRADE 5.0


]]> 2017-01-15 15:52:08 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147242017 What would you do ir you do if you were the president of Colombia? https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147244442 If I were pressured in Colombia, it would improve health, education and make more equitable among different social classes, make people feel more belonging to this country, fix and bring potable water to different populations that do not have this service, end (BE CAREFUL HERE WITH CAPITAL LETTERS) With the corruption that stain (RULE FOR THE THIRD PERSON HERE) this country every day a little more, they give more opportunities to disadvantaged young people so that they can be integrated in the society because they are good people without opportunities, to take advantage and to exploit the maximum of our tourist resources to continue growing like a power In tourism because Colombia is a good destination for Colombians and foreigners, encourage and help small entrepreneurs in order to have many more job vacancies and be able to grow that company. And finally; Give strength to continue fighting for a country that can become a power but not faint in their dreams that always opens possibility to succeed in Colombia.
Sebastian Cardenas Gonzalez.
THANKS SEBASTIAN. YOUR GRADE: 4.7

]]> 2017-01-15 16:29:15 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147244442 W johnindie93 https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147244887 2017-01-15 16:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147244887 What would you do If you were the president of Colombia? johnindie93 https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147244888 If I were the president of Colombia I would continue to help those in need. If I were president of Colombia I would perpetually penalize those who mistreat women and children. If I were president of Colombia I would send corrupt politicians to jail. If I were president of Colombia I would help small businesses win big. If I were president of Colombia, I would increase the wages of the workers. If I were president of Colombia I would continue to build a country full of equity and prosperity for all Colombians. Managing a country like Colombia is not easy, but I would try to do a great job, without so much corruption.

Thanks!

Name: John Eduardo García Ibagué
THANKS, GREAT JOB. YOUR GRADE: 5.0
  ]]> 2017-01-15 16:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147244888 What would you do if you were the president of Colombia? https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147246786 If i were the president of Colombia i would create a new education system for free, where every single person have HAS an easy access. I would build many hospitals for pets and animals arround the country. I would finish the hungry and i would give many options of work from everyone, i wouldn´t like the TO see any poor  on the streets , i would work really hard from TO make Colombia better. I would finish the corruption, i would increase the salary of the workers, kids and families would be my priority.  I would improve the quality of life of colombians. 

Name: Nicolas Suárez Parrado
VERY GOOD. YOUR GRADE: 4.5

]]> 2017-01-15 17:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147246786 What woul you do it you were the pressident of Colombia ? https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147248092 If I was WERE a president of Colombia I would love to can to fix all the roads. DO NOT USE "CAN" HERE.

I would like to help to people that need help...

If I was WERE a president I would like to change all things bad !!


Henry Giovanny Rodriguez
THE IDEA WAS TO WRITE AT LEAST 10 IDEAS. CHECK SOME OF YOUR MISTAKES. YOUR GRADE IS 2.0]]> 2017-01-15 17:21:48 UTC https://padlet.com/andreanostomi/english4/wish/147248092