What is your feedback? by Mrs. D ARNONE

2024-10-18 15:23:55 UTC

You should slow down whole speaking in order to keep yourself understandable. Make sure to check your slides for error, and check the rubric carefully. You need to add more pictures as well.

2024-10-18 15:25:20 UTC

We think that the pace of your presentation could have been slowed down and grammatical errors showed up frequently. As for the slides they were dull without pictures and it would have been more engaging if you did so.

2024-10-18 15:25:46 UTC

The audience was less engaged because there was not enough pictures to help explain on slides. Next time having pictures on slides would be helpful. It was hard understand what was said. Maybe next time have someone go over your slides to check for grammar and spelling and do a mock presentation so you can work on pacing.

Maris, Gloria, Lola, Addison, Aiden

2024-10-18 15:26:03 UTC

Know what to say, and speak slower. Even if its hard, find pictures. Also, look over your slides before you present, and check the rubric so you know what the graders are looking for.

2024-10-18 15:26:10 UTC

While the text was very informative I noticed that you were missing pictures on many slides that if added could've improved your layout. You were also speaking at a fast pace that made it hard to comprehend some information.

2024-10-18 15:26:24 UTC

You forgot to add photos on every slide. You should also slow down when talking and fix grammar mistakes.