Mrs. Barhoum-POWTOON FEEDBACK by Amy V. Smith https://padlet.com/asmith214/b Students will watch Powtoon presentations and provide one another with: 1. constructive feedback 2. specific suggestions 3. positive praise (something you liked about the presentation! Don't forget what it means to be a digital citizen! en-us 2015-09-24 14:39:48 UTC 2025-04-24 15:08:17 UTC hello@padlet.com Hello Dor, https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224700 I loved your presentation though I think you might need some more pictures. All in all though, I loved your persentation

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224700 A Message to... Dor  https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224714 Hi Dor! I liked your presentation transitions and (obviously) Descendants is also my favorite movie! I recommend that you should give us some more pictures so we can see what you are telling us. All in all, you had a great presentation! :)))))))

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:09 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224714 Greating to Dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224747 I like your preantiton I also liked your photo both pictures

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:14 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224747 Hi Dor! https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224756 This is Sophia I loved your powtoon! I don't think that there was anything wrong with your presentation.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:15 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224756 Hi Dor! https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224762 2015-10-01 15:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224762 Hi Dor! -Sarah https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224767 That was a great presentation. I recommend you telling what your favorite food is or just another thing about you. Other than that it was great!

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:18 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224767 Hello Dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224774 Your presentation was amazing. You chose great transitions and created it nicely. You need to capitalize some words.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:19 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224774  Dor's Powtoon https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224781 I likeyour music and transitions. I think your should've added more pictures.

From, Marissa

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:20 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224781 Message to Dor  https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224792 I liked how to used interesting slides.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:22 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224792 Hi Dor! https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224813 I loved how you put a picture of you at the end! You could add more pictures to make yur presentation even better!

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:26 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224813 Hey Dor, https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224833 I like how you used transitions but I think you should organize your props.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:29 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224833 HI Dor  11003097 https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224852 It's great, Alex

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:30 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224852 Hi, you are a * https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224876 great powtoon!

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:34 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224876 Dear Dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224942 Your presentation was good. I liked how you used different transitions for each slide

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224942 A Greeting To Dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224957 Loved the creative ideas you had in your presentation! Maybe you could have added more pictures into it, but I love the awesome pic at the end.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:46 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224957 Bonjour Dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224980 2015-10-01 15:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73224980 Dor, hi https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225015 Dor, I think

]]> 2015-10-01 15:41:51 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225015 Hi dor, https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225060 2015-10-01 15:41:57 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225060 Hello https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225241 2015-10-01 15:42:28 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225241 Hello Dor! asmith214 https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225309 music,

but it was so quik I didn't see all of it.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:42:38 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225309 Hi Dor 11007370 https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225489 2015-10-01 15:43:05 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225489 Hello to Marissa 11007370 https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225614 2015-10-01 15:43:30 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225614 hello dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225703 2015-10-01 15:43:42 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225703 hello dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225986 I liked your powtoon

]]> 2015-10-01 15:44:27 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225986 Hi Dor! https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225994 Hi! This is Kloe. I like that you put almost a different transition every single time. I thought your presentation was awesome!!

]]> 2015-10-01 15:44:28 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225994 Hi dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225997 your pow toon was amazing i loved it, I recommend to do a little more words but overall i think it was good

]]> 2015-10-01 15:44:28 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73225997 Good Job  https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73226065 I like the music, but I think you should work on telling more about your self.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:44:40 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73226065 Hey Dor, https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73226115 I liked your Powtoon! Everything was good except for the picture at the end. It wasn't really necessary but otherwise it was good!

]]> 2015-10-01 15:44:48 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73226115 Hie Dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73226166 hie

]]> 2015-10-01 15:44:58 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73226166 Hi Dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73226545 Good job, I love how you use the piture:)

]]> 2015-10-01 15:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73226545 hi Dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73226651 loved your powtoon liked the music could have more slides

]]> 2015-10-01 15:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73226651   11003097 https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227120 2015-10-01 15:47:30 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227120 Hey Marisa - Sarah https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227359 Your presentation was great! I do't think you should add anything.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:48:09 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227359 hello marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227371 2015-10-01 15:48:10 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227371 https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227380 2015-10-01 15:48:12 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227380 https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227394 2015-10-01 15:48:13 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227394 Hi Marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227396 This is Sophia I loved all the different parts of your presentation! Great job! Awsome!

]]> 2015-10-01 15:48:14 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227396 A Message to... Marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227407 Aflen mosaflen, Marissa! I LOVED that you had a penguin on every slide of your PowToon. I recommend that you add some pictures of you. Anyways, your presentation was awesome and keep up the good work!

]]> 2015-10-01 15:48:15 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227407 Message to Marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227422 I liked the soccer crazy slide. I recommend you add a picture of your guinea pig.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:48:18 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227422 Hi https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227431 2015-10-01 15:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227431 What is up https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227441 Nice presentation, love your choice of slides

]]> 2015-10-01 15:48:22 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227441 Aloha Marisa, https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227449 I liked your powtoon! Everything was perfect, except for the text size. I couldn't read almost half of it. But otherwise, Good job!!!

]]> 2015-10-01 15:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227449 Hola Marissa! https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227451 I liked the music and pictures! To improve you might want to add a picture of your self

-Olivia

]]> 2015-10-01 15:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227451 Hie Marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227474 have a good day

that was good pristine I love that pengiun I also like the music

]]> 2015-10-01 15:48:26 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227474 hello marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227482 2015-10-01 15:48:28 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227482 Hey Marissa, https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227488 I loved all the props but there was one part where the screen was just blank with only music and no letters or pictures.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:48:28 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227488 Hello Marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227490 I liked your presentation and music. It flowed really nicely. On the slide where it says how you help, try making the waiting in the beginning a little shorter.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:48:28 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227490 HI marissa :) Its alex 11003097 https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227534 2015-10-01 15:48:37 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227534 Hello Marrissa (It's Amara) https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227624 I loved your powtoo

]]> 2015-10-01 15:48:51 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227624 Message to Dor https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227683 2015-10-01 15:49:00 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227683 Hi Marrisa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227745 I love it, you are SPY!

]]> 2015-10-01 15:49:08 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227745 Nice to see you Marissa! asmith214 https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227860 I liked your prezantation, espeshaly the panguin, but the music was to loud and the font was to small.

]]> 2015-10-01 15:49:26 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227860 Greeting to Marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227897 I think that your presentation was good. Maybe you could have used a different "theme"

]]> 2015-10-01 15:49:32 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227897 Hi Marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227960
  • I love your presantation it looks cool. I recommend making the text a little bigger so it will be easier to read. I like how you changed the backgrounds and did your transitions.The music is really cool but you should try to make it last last through all of your video.
    • - Dor Peretz.
    ]]>     2015-10-01 15:49:39 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73227960     Hi marissa ariana https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73228044 liked your slides but could use more music

    ]]>     2015-10-01 15:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73228044     Greetings Marissa! https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73228121 Hi! This is Kloe. I like that you put a picture on every slide. There is really nothing wrong with it!

    ]]>     2015-10-01 15:50:03 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73228121     marissa 11003097 https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73228153 I like your presentation From alex

    ]]>     2015-10-01 15:50:09 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73228153     Marissa  https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73228980 your presentation was amazing. I loved it one thing maybe is that you could add some more action

    ]]>     2015-10-01 15:52:23 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73228980     Hello Marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73229028 your thing was really cool like how it was like a Spy

    ]]>     2015-10-01 15:52:31 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73229028     Ahola Marissa 11007370 https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73229156 I loved that pontoon! The Penguin was SOOOO cute!

    ]]>     2015-10-01 15:52:52 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73229156     Hello Marrissa ( It's Amara) https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73229269 I loved your powtoon, especially the penguin.

    ]]>     2015-10-01 15:53:09 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73229269     Good Work https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73229292 I like the music and everything like all of the pictures.

    ]]>     2015-10-01 15:53:12 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73229292     A Greeting to Marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73229516 Your presentation was very detailed! I would recommend pictures, and your own music that you like. Otherwise, great work!

    ]]>     2015-10-01 15:53:46 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73229516     Message to marissa https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73232571 I really liked your paddle and how it was spy themed nice work!

    ]]>     2015-10-01 16:02:02 UTC https://padlet.com/asmith214/b/wish/73232571