https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2 Brainstorm and post 1 star (something the student did well on this writing piece) and 1 wish (something they think the student needs to improve on). Your STAR and WISH should refer to the SUCCESS CRITERIA we discussed yesterday. en-us 2021-01-08 16:24:15 UTC 2023-03-28 18:31:37 UTC hello@padlet.com karen_ho https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1067665850 2021-01-08 16:24:15 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1067665850 karen_ho https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078409725 ⭐ Knowledge & Understanding⭐

-Tell the reader what happened in your story in chronological order
-Written in the past tense
-Include only relevant details (key events)
-5Ws (who, what, when, where, why) 
-structure your writing into paragraphs, each with a main idea 

⭐Thinking⭐

-Your brainstorming mind map includes jot notes or simple sentences that describe the main events
-The recount is clear and makes sense
-Good amount of detail, without going into too much detail

⭐Communication⭐

--The writer shares his/her thoughts, feelings or ideas about the events using a variety of adjectives, verbs and adverbs 
-Capitals for proper nouns
-Check for run-on or incomplete sentences
-Punctuation (periods at the end of sentences, quotation marks around dialogue and commas to separate items in a list, after transitions, dates, separate unnecessary or extra information in sentences, in front of FANBOY conjunctions)
-Transitions at the beginning of each paragraph and within the paragraph to help ideas flow better
-Sentences types (simple, complex, compound)
-Check for spelling

⭐Application⭐

-I can use tools (thesaurus, dictionary) and anchor charts (writing exemplars) to help me write and revise my writing.
-I can make sure my recount clearly explains an event I've experienced.]]> 2021-01-12 13:36:07 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078409725 ashleyappleby https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078541959 My stars 1 star is they stayed on their topic of christmas. ]]> 2021-01-12 14:05:23 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078541959 oliviatatham https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078548110 I think spelling would be a wish for me because you can't read it properly. Also grammar. Also when i was reading the paragraph i could understand on what the writer was thinking but they did not communicate it well.]]> 2021-01-12 14:06:41 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078548110 graciefrancella https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078549422 One thing that they did well was that they did well was written in chronological order.]]> 2021-01-12 14:06:56 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078549422 quinrumble https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078550921 -  my star is i think this person did a really good job at explaining what they got and they did a really good job at saying what they had for dinner.]]> 2021-01-12 14:07:14 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078550921 KPNHL23 https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078553541 my star is when the writer put a lot of information and detail they talked about everything they did.]]> 2021-01-12 14:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078553541 teobarbulovichnad https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078554495 Star: There was good punctuation.]]> 2021-01-12 14:07:57 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078554495 blakehayter https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078554727 One thing I think that they did well, is focusing on one specific idea, whoever wrote this only talked about Christmas, and I think that was good, because if they focused on too many things, they would overwhelm us.]]> 2021-01-12 14:08:00 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078554727 leighrumble https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078555818

My wish is that they focus on there Spelling because they did not spell everything correctly. ]]> 2021-01-12 14:08:14 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078555818 kateshirley1 https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078556294 2021-01-12 14:08:19 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078556294 joshuapennington https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078556539 2021-01-12 14:08:22 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078556539 hanapennington https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078556690 They did well but I think they should put capitals at the starting of a sentence and add capitals to I. I think that they should also add punctuation. ]]> 2021-01-12 14:08:24 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078556690 mateocarter https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078557024 His writing is bad because if he just knew how to spell Christmas and stuffing then his work would mabe make it to the wall of fame. ]]> 2021-01-12 14:08:27 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078557024 erica_davis6 https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078557237 I think that this person gave very good examples about what they got for Christmas. They clearly stated what they got and that they are happy with it. ]]> 2021-01-12 14:08:30 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078557237 matthewsingbush https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078562075 -stars  they  told all  the prezents they got 

]]> 2021-01-12 14:09:26 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078562075 claire_hicks https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078563091 STAR:
They talked about how they loved Christmas in lots of details and examples.]]> 2021-01-12 14:09:39 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078563091 blair_masters https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078563451 my star is that the writer gave a lot of information.]]> 2021-01-12 14:09:43 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078563451 max_lang1 https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078563714 Wish they could try to spell words correctly 

]]> 2021-01-12 14:09:46 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078563714 joshuapennington https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078563920 run on sentence
vocab
punctuation
title
adjectives 
 sense and meaning]]> 2021-01-12 14:09:49 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078563920 erica_davis6 https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078573092 I think that this person could do better on their grammar and spelling because they are spelling a lot of words wrong and not using capitals for the start of each sentence.They also are repeating a lot of sentences because they said that they like Christmas 2 or 3 times. ]]> 2021-01-12 14:11:27 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078573092 https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078574022 St]]> 2021-01-12 14:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078574022 surayasayed https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078574382 they made many spelling mistakes and they repeated that they loved Christmas a lot. They had run on sentences and they also didn't capitalize Christmas every time. 

]]> 2021-01-12 14:11:42 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078574382 KPNHL23 https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078577349 my wish is the writer it have better spelling because when it is not spelled properly it does not work. ]]> 2021-01-12 14:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078577349 zacharie_smith https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078578515 I think it's good that he or she gave very good examples and said what they got for christmas ]]> 2021-01-12 14:12:31 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078578515 caden_niman https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078578981 Star post. there were a bunch of mistakes but a main one is that they like to repeat the same words over and over again, they Also missed some capitol I.]]> 2021-01-12 14:12:37 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078578981 william_mackay https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078579059 Title
run on sentence
vocab
adjectives
sense and meaning
punctuation]]> 2021-01-12 14:12:38 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078579059 blakehayter https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078580366 I think the main wish that I have is to correct their spelling, and grammar, for example they spelled Christmas like "Cristmas" and Carrot like "carot" ]]> 2021-01-12 14:12:53 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078580366 https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078585752 Star
They gave all the important information about what they did and what they got. They also said everything in chronological order. They only talked about Christmas not other things because that was what the text was about ]]> 2021-01-12 14:13:56 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078585752 graciefrancella https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078587026 A wish that i have for this writing piece is for it to work on having a good size sentence and not one to short. ]]> 2021-01-12 14:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078587026 quinrumble https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078588000 i think that they could have spelt a lot of the words better and I also think that they could have had better capitalization and grammar. ]]> 2021-01-12 14:14:22 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078588000 zacharie_smith https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078588597 I think that this person did not do well on grammar and was lacking detail]]> 2021-01-12 14:14:29 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078588597 oliviatatham https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078588630 I think the writer did a good job on what they were going to write about. Also i think they summarized there day without making it to long and complicated. ]]> 2021-01-12 14:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078588630 mateocarter https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078592752 One star is that he said what he got from Santa in the presents. Also how he felt and how he had a lot of fun with the family.]]> 2021-01-12 14:15:12 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078592752 teobarbulovichnad https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078598149 Wish: Have better punctuation]]> 2021-01-12 14:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078598149 claire_hicks https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078598151 2021-01-12 14:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078598151 surayasayed https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078598968 Star 
They had some details and described what they got and why they loved Christmas. ]]> 2021-01-12 14:16:24 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078598968 kateshirley1 https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078599410 2021-01-12 14:16:30 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078599410 matthewsingbush https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078600505 -wish they can add more detail to there Story .]]> 2021-01-12 14:16:44 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078600505 ashleyappleby https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078600652 2021-01-12 14:16:46 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078600652 ashleyappleby https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078601217 2021-01-12 14:16:53 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078601217 leighrumble https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078602136 2021-01-12 14:17:02 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078602136 leighrumble https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078602507 my star is that they gave decent information and they had alright punctuation.]]> 2021-01-12 14:17:07 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_ho/writingexemplar2/wish/1078602507