https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx Directions: 1. These are anonymous comments. Don't write your name on them // 2. Look at your evaluation sheet // 3. Write 'Glow' at the top of the post - type in something you did well on this essay // 4. Write 'Grow' at the top of the post and type in an area in which you want to grow or improve your skills. en-us 2017-11-02 16:45:28 UTC 2017-11-02 21:16:06 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203121690 I did well on relating my examples from the text to a real life situation]]> 2017-11-02 21:05:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203121690 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203121791 Grow:paragraphs]]> 2017-11-02 21:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203121791 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203121871 I used original thoughts and ideas]]> 2017-11-02 21:06:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203121871 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203121947 I think that I good job elaborating and providing sufficient evidence and information]]> 2017-11-02 21:06:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203121947 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203121954 I need to at more background information because if the reader did not read the book it would of been confusing]]> 2017-11-02 21:06:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203121954 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122002 I think I did well on ending my essay in my conclusion. 


]]> 2017-11-02 21:07:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122002 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122073 i think that i did a good job on staying focused on the topic

]]> 2017-11-02 21:07:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122073 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122191 I think that I did a good job of finding the meaning of events in the story.]]> 2017-11-02 21:08:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122191 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122293 I think that I should give more evidence and examples from the book to support my thesis. ]]> 2017-11-02 21:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122293 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122349 I think that I did a good job with putting in elaborate details. This helps the reader understand more about the story I read and am writing about. I also think that I did well with adding a quote to each paragraph.]]> 2017-11-02 21:09:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122349 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122452 I think i did well with the words i used

]]> 2017-11-02 21:09:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122452 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122487 I could've expanded my essay and fixed gramatical errors]]> 2017-11-02 21:09:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122487 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122521 I liked my claim it was very good]]> 2017-11-02 21:09:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122521 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122594 I did a good job but I didnt get to write more about the book ]]> 2017-11-02 21:10:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122594 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122605 I elaborated on my body paragraphs and my stroy flowed]]> 2017-11-02 21:10:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122605 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122613 I worded my essay really well]]> 2017-11-02 21:10:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122613 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122614 I think I need to work on transitioning from one paragraph to another.]]> 2017-11-02 21:10:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122614 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122623 Good flow of sentences and paragraphs]]> 2017-11-02 21:10:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122623 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122656 Smooth transition words]]> 2017-11-02 21:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122656 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122660 i think i could do better by writing a bit more on one topic]]> 2017-11-02 21:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122660 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122748 I think I could have made my conclusion and introduction better by using more powerful vocabulary and having a stronger hook. ]]> 2017-11-02 21:10:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122748 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122761 I think that I could improve on word variation. Maybe next time I should work on finding more synonyms for one word.]]> 2017-11-02 21:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122761 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122778 I can write more]]> 2017-11-02 21:11:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122778 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122779 Use better word choice]]> 2017-11-02 21:11:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122779 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122923 I need to work a little on my grammar]]> 2017-11-02 21:11:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203122923 https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203123133 I think I could have spent more time on editing but overall I think that I did good.]]> 2017-11-02 21:12:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jdines1/bxebfcngnxlx/wish/203123133