https://padlet.com/23abartley/bt7ntz9xdr9g Hello and welcome to my padlet! Thank you for reading my writing pieces. I look forward to hearing your comments. Please provide positive and constructive feedback. en-us 2018-02-01 15:43:10 UTC 2018-03-28 14:53:11 UTC hello@padlet.com 23efynes https://padlet.com/23abartley/bt7ntz9xdr9g/wish/236981276 Hey Drew, I loved your essay! Your warrants were straight up amazing, and your conclusion paragraph was really persuasive. One thing that I might suggest for the future is that the bridge didn't flow into the thesis too well, but other then that, your essay was super!
-Emmet Fynes]]> 2018-03-01 15:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/23abartley/bt7ntz9xdr9g/wish/236981276 23msmith1 https://padlet.com/23abartley/bt7ntz9xdr9g/wish/237381739 I really liked all of the great word choice that you used during the essay. One thing I might suggest for next writing piece is that it seemed that you didn't end it and it came to a dead stop. I would suggest adding better punctuation.
  ]]> 2018-03-02 13:41:24 UTC https://padlet.com/23abartley/bt7ntz9xdr9g/wish/237381739 23vbooth https://padlet.com/23abartley/bt7ntz9xdr9g/wish/237410608 I really like your writing piece I really liked the way that you ... ]]> 2018-03-02 14:39:59 UTC https://padlet.com/23abartley/bt7ntz9xdr9g/wish/237410608 23mho1 https://padlet.com/23abartley/bt7ntz9xdr9g/wish/246929820 Hi Drew, I really enjoyed your essay. You made me think that pigs actually fly.  I wish you keep up the good writing. ]]> 2018-03-28 14:49:13 UTC https://padlet.com/23abartley/bt7ntz9xdr9g/wish/246929820