https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh What is the criteria? en-us 2016-08-21 21:20:01 UTC 2016-08-22 22:40:53 UTC hello@padlet.com jamie_ueyama https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258452 Includes an interesting title. ]]> 2016-08-22 21:19:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258452 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258792 she used good words.]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258792 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258800 She shows good emotion and evidence.]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258800 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258801 she has detales and it has  expreshon it is realistic.]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258801 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258804 she has good deatails
and emotions.
and capitalization when yelling
and a good ending. ]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258804 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258805 she did good on expressing her feellings]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258805 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258808 she had a good beginning]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258808 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258817 made it feel real when you read it.]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258817 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258825 every sentence has a capital letter.]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258825 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258832 realistic ending
good ending when she got introuble


]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258832 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258870 She has capitals and periods.She has capital letters when she is yelling.She put a good ending.The story had lots of good deatails. She shows feelings.The story has a begining,middle ,and end.It feels real.]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258870 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258876 she included beigining /middle/end.all had good details

]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258876 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258878 the story included good details about where the story took place.LOVE IT!!!!]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258878 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258879 she has a good ending


]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258879 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258913 She has details and she also she put some words in capitalize.She also shows emotion to the people that read the story. She also has a beginning ,middle, and end. She makes the reader want to read more about it.I love that writing.At the end,she made a clift hanger. She also uses good word choises. It also seemed realistic]]> 2016-08-22 21:22:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119258913 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119259024 she   shows  feelings]]> 2016-08-22 21:23:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119259024 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119259089 she added details about the main characters]]> 2016-08-22 21:24:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119259089 https://padlet.com/jamie_ueyama/bsxljhove5oh/wish/119259102 Uses good punctuation for each sentence


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