https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback Nothing inappropriate, please! en-us 2019-02-13 15:20:17 UTC 2019-02-14 16:41:11 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Prizecup.png jacques_degraauw https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/330848505 Great job explaining your thesis and how you will expand on it!]]> 2019-02-13 15:24:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/330848505 jacques_degraauw https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/330849036 Good Job, bro.]]> 2019-02-13 15:25:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/330849036 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331375882 Good use of vocabulary. I like the way the quotes fit into your sentences.]]> 2019-02-14 16:21:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331375882 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376044 Nice job with your thesis. It ties in the body paragraphs well.

]]> 2019-02-14 16:22:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376044 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376289 This essay is very good, however I feel you could better organize your thoughts in the first paragraph. ]]> 2019-02-14 16:22:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376289 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376486 Just remember to pull back evenly on the throttle so your roundout will be nice and smooth.]]> 2019-02-14 16:22:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376486 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376536 2019-02-14 16:22:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376536 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376757 Good ordering of the sentences. The paragraph flows together and transitions well throughout the writing.]]> 2019-02-14 16:23:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376757 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376765 good grammar, sentences flow well.

]]> 2019-02-14 16:23:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376765 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376806 Good hook sentence . It makes me want to read the rest of your essay.]]> 2019-02-14 16:23:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376806 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376887 Your introductory paragraph is very nice! It flows nicely and rolls off of the tongue.  The spelling could use a little bit of work but everything else looks great.]]> 2019-02-14 16:23:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331376887 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377029 That was a good essay]]> 2019-02-14 16:23:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377029 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377154 I have great time watching movies in my free time.

]]> 2019-02-14 16:23:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377154 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377233 The hook makes me want to read more and there are no punctuation errors]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377233 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377289


]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377289 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377321 The thesis is confusing and does not focus on the whole essay.]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377321 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377329 You put together a clean and concise thesis. It has a good flow and overall idea.]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377329 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377381 Great thesis, good job talking about the topic]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377381 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377392 too many run on sentences, needs better punctuation. ]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377392 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377405 I think Miley Cyrus and Shawn Mendes had an incredible performance at the Grammy's. It was very entertaining. ]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377405 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377507 Your footwork on that goal shows that all of your hard work is paying off

]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377507 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377539 You almost killed us there. Some people aren't meant to fly.]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377539 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377668 Your hook is very strong. It ties into the thesis very well. Keep up the good work!]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377668 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377674 2019-02-14 16:24:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377674 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377770 Conclusion was excessively concise and too wordy to understand.]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377770 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377817 Your paragraph flows very well, but make sure you check for run on sentences]]> 2019-02-14 16:24:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377817 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377868 Great job!

]]> 2019-02-14 16:25:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377868 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377871 Interesting topic and good thesis

]]> 2019-02-14 16:25:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377871 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377966 this story is good.]]> 2019-02-14 16:25:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331377966 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378043 Great title!


]]> 2019-02-14 16:25:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378043 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378166 good grammer and sentence structure

]]> 2019-02-14 16:25:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378166 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378279 Sentence needs to flow better

]]> 2019-02-14 16:25:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378279 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378339 Your writing is very stinky. Write better you stinky writer.]]> 2019-02-14 16:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378339 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378360 You support your concrete sentences very well!

]]> 2019-02-14 16:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378360 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378392 Thank You Dawg that was a very good read]]> 2019-02-14 16:25:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378392 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378583 The Toyota Prius is the worst car ever made and looks like a jelly bean.]]> 2019-02-14 16:26:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378583 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378593 I think ur essay sucked.]]> 2019-02-14 16:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378593 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378640 This is poorly made looks like no effort at all]]> 2019-02-14 16:26:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378640 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378708 You wrote in several different tenses

]]> 2019-02-14 16:26:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378708 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378720 Great thesis, can't wait to see how the final essay turns out!]]> 2019-02-14 16:26:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378720 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378866 Your paragraph is really bad and I think you should just start from scratch]]> 2019-02-14 16:26:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378866 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378921 good hook I almost want to read the rest of your essay.]]> 2019-02-14 16:26:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378921 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378953 Dope essay]]> 2019-02-14 16:26:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331378953 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379050 Your essay looks good]]> 2019-02-14 16:26:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379050 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379093 i think that your essay was very well written based upon multiple views of characters ive never seen before]]> 2019-02-14 16:26:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379093 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379115 good sentence structure and grmmmer]]> 2019-02-14 16:26:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379115 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379190 This paragraph is really up dog]]> 2019-02-14 16:27:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379190 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379323 this paragraph unnecessary ]]> 2019-02-14 16:27:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379323 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379381 your writing is okay]]> 2019-02-14 16:27:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379381 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379387 Horrible essay.]]> 2019-02-14 16:27:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379387 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379404 Thats a bad paragraph]]> 2019-02-14 16:27:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379404 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379448 Your thesis statement wasn't great. 

]]> 2019-02-14 16:27:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379448 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379925 sentece does not flow with the essay and does not follow tense throughout the essay

]]> 2019-02-14 16:28:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331379925 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331383172 -Charles Elwood Yeager]]> 2019-02-14 16:32:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331383172 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331384176 is








Lame]]> 2019-02-14 16:34:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331384176 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331386135 yuh]]> 2019-02-14 16:36:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331386135 https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331386470 "Go go go go go, rebels on a roll" - YunG sLAp]]> 2019-02-14 16:37:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jacques_degraauw/Feedback/wish/331386470