Writing a crime story by Janeth Aldas

The Stalker

2022-07-12 00:37:33 UTC

Victoria is a woman who lives alone in an apartment near her job. She’s a secretary and works every day from 8 a.m. to 4 p.m. When she arrives home, she likes watching movies and series in her bed until late at night. Her favorite movie is “The Warren files”.
On Friday after leaving work, she comes home to see her favorite movie as all Fridays, but she was harassed from a strange person in the street. She started walking fast until she lost him. After that, when she was calmer in her bed, she heard a little noise out of her bedroom.
The next day. She was found dead. And in her apartment only was found a photography of her when she was coming home.

By:
Bryan - Alejandro

18-20 | JHON'S SECRET

2022-07-12 00:41:29 UTC

Walter Gualotuña.
Fernanda Morales.

Jhon is a quiet person who likes to read books and walk for 30 minutes every morning before going to work. He always goes out with his cell phone and listens to music while walking. He has a very healthy and quiet life. Jhon is a doctor and investigator who works in a hospital. He dreams that will be a millionaire because he will get a secret of the eternal life. Jhon participates in an investigation making tests in animals.

One day, while he was walking in the park he was ambushed from behind by Tom. Tom is only 20 years old, surprisingly, he is taller than John. Tom who wanted to rob him the secret of the eternal life when Jhon was walking, approached to him and threaten him with a gun. Minutes later, after some foraging, Tom is the one who fires the gun and kills Jhon.

FRANK THE MORDER

2022-07-12 00:41:49 UTC

By Melany Parra
Adrian Gavin
This is a story based on real events, he is Frank who lives in the suburbs of New York. He was born in 1979 with a live full of disorders, his parents abandoned him when he was just a little boy. He murders because he had a very hard childhood and that gives him pleasure. Some days later, he met Paula at Miami beach, they had a daughter, and they got married.

He used to go out in the middle of the night for smoking. He always keeps a gun and knife in his pocket to catch his victims. After investigating his friends and relatives, he proceeded to kidnap them and after torturing them, he killed them because his greatest fear was that they would abandon him like his parents did to him.

However, the most curious thing is that he did everything for money, but he never murdered a child even though his daughter died with his wife because of his illness, this secret nobody knew.

One day a woman arrived at the door of his house, unexpectedly, it was his wife who he thought had murdered, but she was alive and hidden from the bad man who touched her in her life. Time later the murder went to prison and his wife was happy.

THE STRANGER DREAM Lady Zambrano; Pamela Fernández

2022-07-12 00:42:02 UTC

In Amsterdam there is a very quiet girl named Antonia who is 25 years old. She is a very elegant, but strange person. She didn´t have many friends and, people were afraid of her.

She is married and her relationship is very rare because, she never goes out with her husband, they didn't even sleep together. She is a fashion designer who really likes collecting animal skins.

Whenever she goes out for a walk every morning she wears something characteristic made with her collection of animal skins, for example either in her sweater or t-shirt.

She always keeps her cell phone and a bright red lipstick in her pocket, she never wears any other lipstick that is a different color.

She is very organized and doesn´t like anything dirty, when she looks at something dirty or messy, she gets too angry.

Last night, she dreamt that she was kidnapped by strange people, she was very scared and remembered that dream as if it had really happened.

Her ambition is to be very famous and with a lot of money because she loves very expensive things and likes to be the center of attention.

Her biggest secret is that she doesn't like to make phone calls, she really hates that, so she doesn't communicate with his friends or family by these means, she prefers not to talk than to have to do it by phone.

Strangely, when she was in a fashion show which turned out to be a tragedy, everything happened as she had dreamed.

THE CHEMIST'S PUZZLE Doménica Cañadas; Belén Taco.

2022-07-12 00:45:44 UTC

Nicol was a tall woman with brown hair, blue eyes and she was thin. The hobby of Nicol was to cook. Like every morning Nicol went to visit her husband with a delicious breakfast.
In the afternoon, after a storm that caused a general blackout, a famous chemist was found dead in his own laboratory. No evidence was found inside, except for a sheet of paper next to the body: it was a list of various chemical elements. The ambition that she has money and fame.

The crime was planned by Nicol and Nicol's lover, two weeks before, in a strategic way, making it look like intoxication in his laboratory.

The detective discovered that on the day of the murder the scientist was visited by three people: his wife Nicol, his nephew Mateo, and his friend Jonathan.

Who is the murderer?

The sheet said:

Canbonus

Oxygen

Nickel

Lanthanum

Friend of animals by Juan Falconi

2022-07-12 00:45:58 UTC

David is someone who loves animals and protects them, he thinks sunsets are boring. What he finds interesting is the night. On a day like he likes at night he was on his way home with some friends when a stranger invited them to a party. A girl offered them some beer and after a few hours they woke up without their things and one of their friends was missing. It turns out that one of his buddies was murdered and they were all under arrest.

They concluded that Person A had a basketball game that day in the afternoon, and I had been to the vet. Person B went to the doctor that same day. Person C is in custody for the crime. Person D met this guy a couple of days ago.

Person E is a person who drinks a lot. The murderer is the brother of person E because the police found in his pocket a knife with the fingerprints of person A and the police also reported that the murderer had a knife with the fingerprints of person A on it. the murderer had injured his arm.

The killer is person A because person A had a basketball game. Person D just met the boy a couple of weeks ago. Person E was just passing by drunk.

18-20 Murderous nurse -Christian Aragón and Alex Calderón

2022-07-12 00:48:15 UTC

Alyson Poison is a 21-years-older girl who has been trained on the best techniques of silent combat by her assassin father.

Alyson was a nurse at the best hospital in town, she took care of her sick mother with cancer. One day Alyson stabbed a patient who died instantly. Alyson was scared by what happened, she saw her gun full of blood and Alyson began to like that feeling. She liked it so much that it became his hobby.
One day Alyson and her boss discussed about the patient who had been murdered, Alyson paid no attention to her and left the hospital to go home. In the middle of the night while Alyson was asleep she had a dream which would become a goal. She dreamed that she murdered her boss who suspected her.
The next morning Alyson took her father's knife and a grenade which she intended to use just in case the plan to assassinate her boss failed.
Around noon Alyson went to her boss's office. She was excited and full of desire.
Alyson killed her boss by stabbing him several times and decapitating him. Trying not to leave any evidence to avoid suspicion, she took a coat from the assistant manager, making her the main suspect, who weeks later would be arrested.

18-20 The fading of a scream_ by Dayana Tito and Kevin Cabascango

2022-07-12 01:03:22 UTC

Janna, a 21-year-old college girl, was the typical strawberry girl who had many friends, the best known, and the one who always got good grades. She was always surrounded by many people, and her friendships were of all kinds because in addition of being good at everything she did, she liked to go hiking and camping. She always stood out in all the university campuses, but this was because her parents were directors and owners of the university, that was her great secret. They were the best days of her life because her birthday was approaching and she wanted to celebrate it to the fullest. Unfortunately, her friends envied her for a long time, and she didn't know it.
Janna's birthday arrived, Janna was very happy, but she had no plans for that day. Suddenly, she received a call, it was her best friend, they agreed that at 8 o'clock at night they would go to her favorite park. Both friends used to camp there since they were 6 years old. Unfortunately, something bad was about to happen. Janna showed up at the appointed time, she saw her best friend and approached that place, while Janna was walking three people surrounded her and beat her until she was unconscious, they took her near a river and tied her to a chair. Janna woke up shocked and sore and in front of her she saw her friends, they laughed at her and told her that they didn't love her, that they hated her. The frightened girl cried out for help, but there was no one in that place who could help her, her friends took her by the arms and threw her into the river. They looked at each other and said "Finally, Janna is dead".

16-18: The perfect woman by Camila Castelo and Erick Collaguazo.

2022-07-12 22:53:01 UTC

A few weeks ago, I read in the newspaper about a crime in the hospital, the news talked about a doctor, he had a scalpel covered with blood in his pocket. He's obsessed with cleanliness and his hobby is running at the night. In the hospital the doctor's intencions was transformed the young woman into the perfect body.
The woman didn't resist the operations and died, the doctor is still on the run at night. He wants to find the perfect woman yet, so you? should never go to a hospital alone.

16-18 An almost perfect crime

2022-07-12 23:01:55 UTC

Karina Zurita
María José Caiza

One upon a time, there was a couple of students who lived around their university.
One day, some friends invited them to a party. She didn't want to go because she prefered to stay reading a book in her house; her boyfriend convenced her to go because he liked to dance.
In the party, she loocked very beatiful because she wore a red dress and high heel shoes. Her boyfriend wore a black suit, but nobody saw that in his pocket he kept a pocket knife.
She had the habit of being friendly with the people. Her boyfriend didn't like it and he was furious, though .
In the middle of party, they had an argument then he went to the bathroom.
A few minutes later, she found her boyfriend dead. All the people suspected the girl, but she had an alibi because in this moment she was kissing with her boyfriend's best friend.
Before the crime, the boyfriend was asking his girlfriend to marry him because he wanted a life with her, but he saw his best friend flirting with his girlfriend.
In this moment, the heart of the boy was broken and that was because he made a terrible decision because he didn't live a life without the love of his life.

An unknown killer. Michael Loya

2022-07-12 23:06:09 UTC

Juan Garcia is a young man from a family, who had money. He always excelled in studies and sports, but mainly he liked martial arts. He had a very good life, but one day everything would begin to change, together with his friends they were to a party organized by a popular girl from Emily University. Juan was in love with that girl, however, she had a boyfriend named Diego. When they were at the party enjoying themselves, Diego realized that Juan was looking at Emily a lot and trying to woo her, so I ??? confronted him and Juan, without being intimidated, answered him and said that he would leave the party and so he left together with his friends. They left through the forest path, and behind them Diego. Unfortunately, his right tire was damaged and they had to get off when they were checking it, Diego arrived. The next day Diego appeared dead in the middle of the forest and the main suspects were Juan and his two friends, who killed him? Juan and his friends were covered in mud and with blood stains on their shirts. They were very scared, in the prosecution the three said that they had not murdered him. However, due to the evidence against them, they were imprisoned for murder and accomplice, without imagining that there was a third party involved who was the one who killed Diego, from that day Juan's life ended.

16-18 Pogo, the dark clown

villarrealarthur209 — 2022-07-13 00:17:55 UTC

By: Mayeli Jiménez and Arthur Villarreal

On a normal day in the 90's, at a birthday party, children would run away from the clown in fear. He is an ugly clown and not funny said one of them. Pogo was his name and behind the clown mask was an american man named John Gayce. A man was full of traumas with 2 failed marriages, and a lot of rejection by society, from a family that mistreated him. His children abandoned him, he was someone totally marginalized from society. One night, after being at a birthday party and being told by the children that he was a fat and ugly clown, he ran out of patience. Filled with rage he chose his first victim, a 20-year-old young adult whom he smothered to death. Weeks passed and he dressed as a clown to commit his murders as revenge for all the rejection he felt. He liked to play with his victims by tying them up or putting police handcuffs on them. John Gayce looked tired, fat, and angry, but at night he releases emotions killing men. It was his way to escape his reality and somehow satisfy all the hate he felt. When the police discovered him, they came to his house unexpectedly. Jhon when he was cornered took a gun and committed suicide, in his house they found torture devices and human body parts. That night Pogo the killer clown died, though.

16-18 Obsession by Michael Quishpe and Ariel Paz

2022-07-13 00:55:39 UTC

He was born in Texas, his name was Frank and he liked play videogames and watch TV. He was a fat person with short hair and was 1.70m high.
He looked like a very innocent person, but what everyone didn’t know is that he had several problems at home, with his parents and himself.
One day when he went to school, he discussed with his girlfriend because she was talking with another person who was his friend.
In the afternoon, when he was driving to her home, he thought in killing her because he was feeling so bad for the bad moment in the morning.
When he was close to her house, he saw her walking in the street, he accelerated and he drove over.
When she died he disappeared. The police started with the investigation about what happened with the girl, but they never knew it.
The real story is that after he killed the woman, he took her in the car and he burnt her body in the furthest forest, after that, he killed himself with a rope hanging around the neck.

16-18 Are you the real one in your life?

2022-07-13 01:12:47 UTC

By Diego Sarango

It all started at work. In Dark and Demon tourism, co., that company, which I did not know and everyone considered cursed, because of the strange circumstances surrounding its creation and the disappearance of great promising minds for tourism.
I saw its silhouette for the first time, crossing a corridor, when I felt a presence as cold as the North Pole, but as attractive as a freshly baked chocolate cake or the first warm waves of the sea in summer, it disappeared like a ghost or a candy at a children's party.
I thought they were my illusions, but when I asked about her, everyone looked the other way and tried to change the conversation. I was still with that intrigue that gripped my heart, so much that little by little it was possessing me, making me thoughtful, unstable, and irritable, though. Besides, his silhouette accompanied me everywhere.
Arrived at this situation of mental and physical agony, since several months had passed, I went into the boss's office to get answers about her, but to my surprise, who was sitting in front of me was myself, seeing this I lost the little sanity I had left, I took a pen from the table and stabbed that presence, but when I reacted I saw that it was my boss who was bleeding on the floor and I understood that her silhouette was her, the depression that led me to commit the murder making me think it was me.

14-16 Sports killer

2022-07-13 01:42:04 UTC

There have been multiple kills in the city and a person with the following characteristics and habits are the suspected.She is a woman, who isn't married. She is 16 years old. She is a student, and she studies in the afternoon. She is 1.70 tall. She has a long brown hair. Her eyes are brown. She uses piercing in her earns.

Her hobby is playing volleyball. Her habits are to make her victims laugh and then she kill them. She keeps a bag with the heads of their victims for using them as balls, and also her knee pads when she plays volleyball. According to a blood message left at the last crime scene, she wants to turn the world into a volleyball court and play with human heads.

The detectives are waiting for her to make a mistake in the next murder so they can learn her identity. In the meantime, do not walk down the street alone and do not stop to talk to anyone.

Message transmitted by national television

16-18 Beautifull dress

2022-07-13 03:26:24 UTC

By Sabrina Guamás and Jazmín Acuña

Julio is a dressmaker who made the best custom clothing for women. He gives every month a dress which he made to a beatifull woman, but he has a big secret that nobody knows, the dress is a sign of death because his hobby is to kill people, but he doesn't have a reason to do that. He just likes it and he never feels guilty when he kills people.
Today, he woke up while he was dreaming with the crime which he did last week. He remembered that he was walking in the street at night when he saw a beautiful lady who was wearing the dress that he gave her.
She was fascinated with the dress and he convinced her to go to his house which is far from the city center. She wasn't absolutely scared because she trusted the people who met and Julio was the person who gave her the dress. However, she made a big mistake that night. At home, while they were talking in the kitchen, he caught a knife and she screamed very hard, but nobody listened her. Later he prepared soup with human meat. The lady's family searched her, but they never found her. Some people know him, he looks like a decent person and he wears a suit and black shoes, but nobody knows that Julio is the killer.

14-16 A crime of love - By: Nayelli Cando and Kevin Saquinga

2022-07-13 03:35:34 UTC

She’s Tamara Sandoval a woman who works in an office as a secretary and she is 25 years old, She‘s married to Alfonso Lazo who works as a police officer that he is 27 years old. In addition, they’re newlyweds and live in Quito. Tamara’s hobby is cooking and spending time with her husband when she has the opportunity, she reviews the private information of Alfonso that has on the cell phone.

Tamara’s a person who is very insecure and has low self-esteem, is afraid that her husband deceives her. She’s a person interested in money. On another hand, Tamara’s a young woman who has long blond hair and blue eyes. She’s thin and very beautiful. She always keeps a razor in her pocket because she leaves work later and the streets are dangerous, so she needs something to defend against the thieves and bad men.

Every day, she prepares breakfast for her husband who takes care of her. After they are going to work from 8 to 5 pm, they are going to train at the gym that leaves the gym always dinner in restaurants. Finally, she’s a person who has a bad habit, and that is the habit of controlling her husband's life.

She dreamed that her husband was unfaithful to her in her own home which caused her to feel bad and she began to distrust him. She is a woman who has the ambition to be a millionaire with a stable job and to have a wonderful relationship with the man of her dreams.

Tamara's biggest secret is that she is a very impulsive person and when she feels threatened or sad, she makes horrible decisions without thinking about the consequences.

After the dreams that she had, she felt depressed and very confused, then she began to check the phone more often, almost every day, she wanted to find a message from another woman, and ultimately, she found the message that accused him. Tamara went crazy and didn't know what to do.

When one night her husband was taking a bath, so Tamara took the razor she had in her pocket when, suddenly, she headed for the bathroom. Then she stabs him in the back until lifeless, and she hid him in the garden because she didn’t want to be found out.

And since lies have short legs, Alfonso's colleagues investigated the case and managed to find his body who had been murdered by Tamara, Finally, she was given 30 years in prison.

14-16 The last light of darkness. - By: Bryan Espín and Fátima Chiluiza.

2022-07-13 04:18:20 UTC

Anabel was born in a dangerous neighborhood in France. She didn’t have a nice childhood because when she was a little girl her father died and her mother was an alcoholic so she needed to go out and search for a job to live. After some days she found a job in a restaurant. One day when she was walking to work, a man stood up in front of her, grabbed her, and put her into his car. Regrettably, she was raped and after that she was thrown in a park.

Anabel was devastated and didn't know what to do. She sat down in front of a house and started screaming while crying. For Anabel, her life no longer made sense, so she took a knife with her hands and tried to kill herself. However, a woman observed her from afar and decided to help her. When Anabel got home, she told her mother everything. Anabel's mom was very surprised, but she was also so drunk that she didn't believe what her daughter had told her. Anabel got very angry and started beating herself because no one was helping her. Suddenly, Anabel understood that she hadn't been wrong and that it was her mother's fault for not having protected her all her life. She was very upset, so she ran into the kitchen and killed her mother with a knife. She buried her mother's body and no one knew about this terrible crime.

Some time later she began to study medicine, but all that time she grew up alone and she did not like it, so she was always looking for a boyfriend, but that was not enough to be happy. She had been working in the same restaurant and there she met her boyfriend. He was a good and handsome boy, but he had a large family and they all took care of their own, she didn't like that. She wanted the boy all for herself and they had many problems in her love relationship. Every night she didn't sleep or she dreamed about how she could kill someone, but she especially dreamed about how she killed children. She hated children who had a better childhood than her. One day her boyfriend went to see her with his niece and Anabel couldn't stand to see her boyfriend love her niece. The boyfriend didn't know about the girl's past and that was his mistake. He left his niece with his girlfriend and she did everything with the girl, she killed her and left her lying in front of a park. It was the same thing the man did to her. That was the last time they saw the girl.

After having committed another crime, Anabel felt very bad. She believed that she was the worst person in the world, but she couldn't reveal her secret because they would take her to jail. One day her boyfriend came to her house and they started talking. She told him that she was very sad and that she did not want to live anymore. Also, she told him about her murder dreams and her boyfriend got really scared. Anabel was so stunned that without guilt she shouted her biggest secret. She told her boyfriend that she had killed her mother, her boyfriend immediately ran to the police in fear. Anabel was so scared that she threw acid on her face so the police wouldn't recognize her, but in the end they caught her and found out that she had also killed her boyfriend's niece. Anabel did not want to spend a lot of time in jail, so the first day she was admitted, she committed suicide.

14-16 A dream in reality

2022-07-13 13:12:04 UTC

By: Kenny and Paola

Raquel is 27 years old who is a single woman because her boyfriend abondoned her. She is a professor at a university, and allways goes to the park to read her crime an mystery books when people are slepping at 12 A.M. Raquel is a pretty woman that her hair is blonde , she usually wears a leather jacket, black jeans, and black boots, she is a rude woman that of her sadness in her pocket she has a photograph of her boyfriend. Therefore, for her to get distracted she read the book, go to the park, and teaches history at the university. Besides she always dreams who killed her boyfriend becuase he was cheating on her with her best friend. For this reason she would like to travel to a foreign country and her biggest secret is that she killed her boyfriend.

16-18 The malicious Chemister by Andrés Chimarro and Kevin Coello

2022-07-14 01:34:56 UTC

Alfredo is a 67-year-old widower who was born in the city of Quito. He is an experienced scientist who likes to collect all kinds of weapons. Luis is a person who has long arms, long grey hair and is a very tall man. He also likes to dress classically and monochromatically. Luis is a person who likes to read the newspaper in the mornings, sometimes having fun scaring children. His story is mainly based on his little daughter who died in the hands of a renowned doctor, from that day Luis swore to take revenge on the doctor, because he believed that the doctor did nothing to save her. In order to take revenge the night before, he dreamt that he made a secret formula to kill the doctor. Luis thought of nothing else but revenge, as it was his greatest ambition in life. Luis was a person who had many secrets in his life, for example he had kidnapped many people to experiment with his new secret formula. When the formula worked, he killed all the kidnapped people, and the next one to be killed was the doctor. Then, early one Thursday morning, he went to the doctor's office and put the secret formula he had in his pocket into the doctor's coffee. Suddenly, the doctor fell to the floor after drinking his coffee. Luis, who had already committed his main ambition in life, proceeded to take his own life in his office together with the poisons he carried in his scientist's coat.

14-16 Strawberries and Cream by Camila Monteros y Bryan Sánchez

2022-07-14 07:08:14 UTC

Camila was a pretty normal girl who didn't have problems with anyone and didn't have many friends, just a best friend named Romina. Camila was 18 years old, with black hair . She used to walk to school every day at 7 A.M., and in the same way she walked home alone at 2 P.M.  One day this girl met a boy at her school named Jack. This guy was extremely weird, but had a good attitude, so Camila became friends with Jack, even though her best friend had told her that Jack was weird and that she better stay away from him.

Jack was a very shy person, who had a special habit of smelling people, in fact it was a gift since he could perceive odors that no one perceived.
Jack was 25 years old and unmarried. He worked in a coffee shop. Jack was a person who reads a lot of books about smells and tastes.
When he met Camila, he really liked her smell in particular, of strawberries with cream. He had the intention of meeting her and stealing her smell in particular. He didn't know how to do it so he thought that by kidnapping her he could find a way to steal her perfect scent.
He kidnapped her one day when she was walking alone, Jack already knew all her habits, but at the time of the act, he accidentally murdered her, hiting her head too hard and he felt how her precious smell was leaving. Jack couldn't stand that and committed suicide at that very moment.

Identity by Jean Zambrano

2022-07-14 20:00:10 UTC

Steven is a former policeman who is 77 years old, never married, but had a son with a friend from his youth. He currently lives in a nursing home, likes to watch movies and listen to music on the radio.
He was born and raised in a dangerous neighborhood in Pennsylvania, which motivated him to join the police force. At first he was a motivated young man who would not let the innocent suffer, a faithful believer in justice and determined to enforce the law, but as time went on, the glow of that young man faded.

Forty years ago, Steve roamed the streets of Pennsylvania at night, making sure no one was out of their homes, why? Simple, a serial killer who had taken the lives of 6 women.

Steve had walked the area several times and had not found anything suspicious, he was tired and decided to return home, but unexpectedly a small noise caught his attention.

With the little will he had left he decided to investigate the noise, he walked slowly and decided to draw his gun in case it was the murderer, the closer he got to the noise, the louder it became, unexpectedly, silence. When he reached the place, unfortunately it was too late, the murderer had acted.

But how? Steve thought, he had walked the same spot for hours. He had moved his hand closer to see the victim and noticed that his sleeve was stained with blood, which was not possible, he had not yet touched the body.

Days went by and the killer wasn't caught and he killed again every time he staked out the area, again and again until he retired.

Steve spent the rest of his days watching a mirror in his room, why? because every time he looked in the mirror, another person was reflected.