i ended up only completing the intro paragraph but we did continue to work on the other pharagraphs

I successfully completed 2 body paragraphs and I found more sources to have better quotes .

Progress

finished my introduction and first paragraph

and work on finishing the first.

Edit:

I went through my intro and used more complex wording to avoid sounding basic, and provided background information. For the first paragraph, I finished structuring the information. I just need to fix any wording in it as well.

• Length: 3-4 pages

• Number of Sources: Minimum of 4

• Types of Sources: Must be credible (news outlets, academic journals, research organizations)

• An introduction that engages the reader’s curiosity and clearly states your argumentative claim.

• Textual evidence that is correctly cited and smoothly integrated into the body of the essay. 

• Body paragraphs where the topic is introduced in a variety of different ways. 

• An argument that raises and rebuts at least one counterclaim.

• Writing that conforms to the rules of grammar and mechanics

• Correctly formatted in-text citations and a works cited page. 

Unfortunately I only worked on my second body paragraph because I was having trouble finding evidence. However, I did end up finding two new sources.

I have finished writing the begin of my conclusion and startred writing why it is important to have my topic recognized, i will continue to work on it as the days go on

I was able to finish my first and am halfway through my second.

End- i did end up starting my paragrah and i plan to finish it by the end of class

I almost finished my first paragraph all I need to finish is the Analysis then I can start my second paragraph

Edit : I started doing my first body paragraph now i just need to find time to finish it as well as my second body paragraph

Edit: I was able to complete my first and second paragraph to be able to start my third paragraph

I finished my first paragraph.