Opinion Paragraph by Duygu Timur

Aral Gülbaş-Yunus Emre Coşkuner

yunusemrecoskuner13_ — 2023-12-01 11:57:37 UTC

Nowadays, a lot of people quit from university to start their own businesses. It's easier to make money with university diploma.

But it is much better to start your own business to make money for three main reasons.

Firstly, it makes you more relax to be your own boss. For example, if you have a boss who gives you a lot to do you cannot be able to concantrate your job and it makes you stressed. But if you be your own boss you can do your jobs much better because you will be relaxed.

Secondly, you can make more money. If you work for some company you might get paid less. But if you have a company or firm you will get all the money company earns and it will make you richer than working for somebody else.

Thirdly, it is better for your time. You can't spend your time freely working for somebody.

But if you have your own firm you can organize your jobs and make plans for your hobbies which you can do in your free times.

To sum up, there is no doubt that having your own job is better than working for somebody else. You can feel relaxed, make more money and spend your times more freely. People should start their own jobs rather than working for someone else.

Kimia_batuhan

2023-12-01 12:04:30 UTC

We can’t deny that educating in university is beneficial and crucial in our life process but there are many other ways for reaching to success in our future life.

Firstly, Sometimes universities are time consuming for some people.this type of individuals may be more successful out of universities by focusing on their self and their personal talents ,practical skills which are not thought in universities so individuals can make more time for promoting their skills which are associated with their future success .So, they couldn’t be more effective without spending most of they time for educating.

Secondly,due to some people skills educating is not one of the ways that they could get their goals.for example,i can refer to some scientists and entrepreneurs who achieve success and reputation not just with educating such as Albert Einstein who expelled from school ann also steve jobs who droped out in middle of his high school’s but both of them gain the success which they was planning about it.

To sum up, we should confess that educating in significant part of our life but it’s not the only way to achieve to the high position inour dreams .So we should have combination of educating and focusing on our personal skills in our life.

Yusuf & Beril

berilsahin1 — 2023-12-01 12:06:01 UTC

Graduating from university is beneficial for people's business life such as professional lives, economic and culture. First of all, university degree has many advantages for people's professional lives. For example, people can learn more about their department in university so they can be more succesfull in their business lives. Secondly, business university degree also helps to overcome some economic crisis because people can learn the details of economy. Finally, it has many benefits for people's culture. For example, with the university education people can have more information related to their business culture. In conclusion, graduating from a university has benefits for three main reasons about their professional lives, economic situation and culture. Because of that people should go to university, graduate and have a degree so they can have many advantages for their business lives.

Marjona/Nevşah

2023-12-01 12:08:44 UTC

Even though the university degree is important in some cases, it's not necessary to succeed in business life. First of all, luck is also significant to achieve a goal. For instance, despite their masters degree there are so many people who are not so successful in their carrier life. As a result luck is also one of the major factors. Secondly, university isn't a place where we can learn how to live or work effectively. They don't teach us the real life problems and how to solve them. Also we can't there how to stand by ourselves in life. Thirdly, experience is more important than education. People can experience how to become more successful in business life by living rather than just studying. In conclusion, although university is important luck, lifetime and experience are the most important parts for success in business life. We should be educated at college but it's not very essential, though.

Leyla-Tolga

2023-12-01 12:11:41 UTC

Although university degree guaranties a job, it is not necessary for being successful in business life. First of all, training and internships are more essential for success. For example, learning the job in the field is more beneficial than learning theoretically in the university. Secondly, personal improvement is the key factor to success. For instance, even people who are graduated from university are not likely to be successful in business world if they do not enhance themselves such as taking courses on the subject. Thirdly, people can focus on their main subjects without the unnecessary courses university requires. To illustrate, university students need to get other lectures besides their department requires. In conclusion, to be successful in business life it is not mandatory to have a university degree.

Zeynep Eker, Zeynep Kızılkaya

2023-12-01 12:14:13 UTC

Most people believe that having university degree

is not important in business life at all. You need luck, experience and maybe money to increase your career in work life. Having an university degree is not benefical for business life.

Firstly, you need to be lucky to have successful business life. For example, ronaldo. He had a poor childhood and had financial difficulties. Despite the fact that he is talented but also he is lucky too. There are many footballers that trains a lot but they cant have that fame because they are not lucky like him.

Secondly, if you had experienced a lot in your work you will become more successful than the others. You are better than the person who is graduated recently. For instance, Nusret. He has worked extremely hard in his childhood in a butcher instead of studying in university. But now he is more successful than a university student and earning more money.

Lastly, a university degree do not guarantee you a job and achievement. In world there many unemployed diplomaed. So university degree cant help your business life.

In conclusion, you need luck, experience for have an excellent business life. To my way of thinking university degree is not necessary.

Belinay/İlker

2023-12-01 12:14:43 UTC

University degree is not the most important thing for people who wants to be successful in business life. University degree provides us many benefits. However, it won’t guarantee the success. First of all, at university there are some unnecessary lectures. Instead of this, with the help of the technology, individuals can improve themselves with online courses or various resources such as encyclopedias and articles. It provides self developement and also avoids waste of time. Secondly, chance plays a big role to achieve sucsess in business life. For instance, entrepreneurs who have luck in their life like Steve Jobs are built very successful businesses around the world. Also, people who graduated from university but at the same time don’t fo anything for enhance their abilities are usually works under someone else. To sum up, university degree is not everything in business. It may has some advantages but there are other factors that can make you more successful.