https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul After getting feedback from your partners, how will you revise your story to make it better? en-us 2020-10-08 15:25:34 UTC 2020-10-17 16:59:05 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814556842 Taggart I will add more detail about  Dustin Goons house, I could add how big or small Dustin's house is or I could also add if his house is messy or clean.]]> 2020-10-08 16:45:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814556842 keesch000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814564191 I will add more detail and more info about what is happening]]> 2020-10-08 16:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814564191 jonpau000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814575139 i'm going to add more sentences to my drafts like on some of my summaries to make things go faster so i'm going to STREECH out some of those ]]> 2020-10-08 16:49:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814575139 alatro000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814591004 I'm going to ad a beater tidal and introduction ]]> 2020-10-08 16:52:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814591004 lanoke000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814591573 i will add more in beetween i will put what happend on a boat]]> 2020-10-08 16:52:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814591573 jaclyn002 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814616896 I will add more details and I am going to make corrections if needed]]> 2020-10-08 16:58:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814616896 elicla000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814632220 I think i will add more details and more detail to where they are and whats around them. (i didn't have time share my story so i didn't get any advise)]]> 2020-10-08 17:02:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814632220 selfre000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814632724 put more detiles in the story and  use more emoites]]> 2020-10-08 17:02:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814632724 dancol001 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814633674 I think i should add detail about what the boat looked like itself.]]> 2020-10-08 17:02:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814633674 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814635858 I'm going to add more details in my story. I'm not done yet :(]]> 2020-10-08 17:02:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814635858 quiear000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814639532 I will a more deti .]]> 2020-10-08 17:03:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814639532 wille002 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814641712

i will put more detail]]> 2020-10-08 17:04:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814641712 blahua0001 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814649902 I will add more emotions and more details such as how tall it is or how short it is]]> 2020-10-08 17:06:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814649902 dertra000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814662312 derek

]]> 2020-10-08 17:08:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814662312 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814664765 putting more detail

]]> 2020-10-08 17:09:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/814664765 harleysawyer https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815416397 more motion, and some more ! at the end of sentences  ]]> 2020-10-08 20:52:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815416397 emmvel000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815432996 some words]]> 2020-10-08 21:00:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815432996 cargut002 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815436055 more dialogue

]]> 2020-10-08 21:01:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815436055 luctra001 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815444033 i need more detail about my character]]> 2020-10-08 21:06:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815444033 karpha000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815444923 i guess i need to change the lead and topic?

]]> 2020-10-08 21:06:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815444923 vanle000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815449445 add more dialoge]]> 2020-10-08 21:08:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815449445 camcha000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815450240 i need more writing and detail about my setting and about my character.]]> 2020-10-08 21:09:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815450240 katvu001 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815450856 detail place]]> 2020-10-08 21:09:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815450856 ryavu000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815452758 add more talking and more feeling]]> 2020-10-08 21:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815452758 sderam000 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815452767 add more character

]]> 2020-10-08 21:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815452767 https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815551928 add more talking, more detail, and make it longer]]> 2020-10-08 22:13:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jwenker1/bqxcljrxkwslnlul/wish/815551928