How can you improve this issues paragraph? by https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg en-us 2021-02-15 14:30:15 UTC 2026-02-15 22:25:47 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f439.png https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204255098 Maybe add more sources; discuss more evidence from different sources; expand the conclusion more.]]> 2021-02-15 16:50:15 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204255098 https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204259346 Talk about the difference in sample sizes of the two journal article  ]]> 2021-02-15 16:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204259346 Dont use investopedia as a source https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204261542 2021-02-15 16:52:26 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204261542 https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204262214 The issue paragraph could of have illustrated the reason as to what type of material information, not being transparent to external users ]]> 2021-02-15 16:52:39 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204262214 Not much 'critical evaluation' in 2nd paragraph https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204263962 2021-02-15 16:53:15 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204263962 Discuss the issues surrounding KIPs in intro paragraph https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204269086 2021-02-15 16:54:55 UTC https://padlet.com/andrewlane1/bpn39jyiggm7ygfg/wish/1204269086