A-66 by Necla Nur Tuna

1020220395

2023-03-22 14:56:17 UTC

Yüksel özbekoğlu is my father
He was born in 1954 in Kayseri. He lived with his family in a village.

He ~~was~~ studied aerospace engineering. When he was 22 he got a job in Kayseri. He designed airplanes and he learned Russian. He went to Russia and he worked in Russia. He came back in to Kayseri and he became the manager in of the airlift.

Since then, Yüksel has become one of the most successful workers in the airlift. He has three children. He lives in Kayseri with his family

1020220337

2023-03-22 15:08:32 UTC

Ahmet ÖZDEMİR was born in Kayseri.
He left school at a young age and started working as an auto mechanic. At the age of 18, he was working in a store and later moved to the sales department where he worked.
He worked hard and when the company he worked for was closed, he started his own company.
He currently owns his company and owns several cars and is on track to expand the company.(I work there this person is my father)

1030120592

2023-03-22 15:09:24 UTC

Kıvanç Tatlıtuğ , he was born in 27 Octaber 1983 in Adana . He studied at Yenice Private Çağ High~~Scholl~~ (school). He later moved to Istanbul with his family.

After continuing the job he started in 2000 for two years in various agencies, he participated in the " Best Model of Turkey" modeling competition in 2002 and won the first place

He appeared in the advertisements of Mavi Jeans . He stated that he will publish the results of 2016 and continue to act in a TV series.

1020220327

2023-03-22 15:24:50 UTC

American comedian, actor, producer, and copywriter Kevin Hart was born on 6 July 1979.
Kevin Hart was raised alone by his mother, Nancy Hart. She has an older brother named Robert Hart.
He studied at George Washington High School. He was born and raised in Pennsylvania, USA.
He started acting in the late ~~ninetys~~ nineties and toured as an amateur for stand-up shows. Especially by screen lovers in 2001. He married Torrei Skipper in 2003 and has two children, Heaven and Hendrix Leigh, from this marriage. However, her marriage ended in 2010.
However, Kevin Hart managed to climb the career ladder quickly with films such as Scary Movie 3, Soul Plane, and Little Fockers. In addition to acting, he continued his stand-up work and made many special television programs on platforms such as Comedy Central. He released his first stand-up album, I'm a Grown Little Man, in 2008. he is marrying Eniko Parrish and they are now married
He is ~~making~~ is still an actor.

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2023-03-22 15:25:06 UTC

Cüneyt Arkin, is a Turkish film actor, director, and producer. He was born in 1937 in Eskişehir, Turkey. ~~She~~ he completed ~~her~~ his high school education at Eskişehir Atatürk High School and graduated from Istanbul Medical Faculty in 1967. After completing her military servise (service), he worked as a doctorin Adana and its surroundings.
Cüneyt Arkın made his first marriage to Güler Mogan in 1964. They divorced in 1968. One year later, He married Betül Arkın.

Cüneyt Arkın started her acting carear(career) in 1963 upon the offer of Halit Refig and made at least 30 films in two years.
Arkın took part in 330 movies, TV series and theater plays between 1963-2021.

Cüneyt Arkın died on 28 June 2022 at the age of 84 as a result of a heart attack.

1020220379

2023-03-22 15:29:05 UTC

Michael Jackson, who was born as the seventh of nine children of the Jackson family, started his musical life in the group Jackson 5 founded by his father in 1964 when he was only 6 years old. Jackson, who later signed millions of selling solo albums such as Off the Wall (1979), Thriller (1982), Bad (1987), Dangerous (1991), HIStory (1995), gained great fame and became the "King of Pop" (English: King of Pop) began to be called. His albums have sold over 140 million copies worldwide. Michael Jackson is the best-selling musician of all time, with studio albums selling 125 million albums alone. Thriller is the #1 best-selling album in the world with over 55 million copies, and the #1 best-selling album in the US. He is the 1st person in the world's best-selling albums list with five albums and is number 1 with Thriller. He brought a new breath to dance with his completely unique dance style, impressed everyone, it has become a classic to see Michael Jackson figures in world-famous R&B clips, the origin of many dance moves in R&B clips belongs to Michael Jackson, he is shown as one of the best dancers in the world. It has also entered the Guinness Book of Records.

Michael Jackson has come to the fore with some health problems and scandals, especially in the last years before his death. Michael Jackson, the father of three children, was hospitalized in a coma as a result of his illness at his home in Los Angeles on June 25, 2009, but could not be saved. Although the cause of death was thought to be cardiac arrest, the autopsy performed by the Los Angeles Forensic Medicine Institute revealed that the cause of death was propofol, a very strong anesthetic drug used in the treatment of insomnia. It was stated in the statement that propofol and sedative lorazepam drugs were the most important causes of Jackson's death, and that midazolam, diazepam, lidocaine and ephedrine drugs were also found in Jackson's blood. Although suspected of murder, Jackson's personal doctor was sued in February 2010 for "causing accidental death". This case resulted in the doctor being sentenced to prison by a court decision.Life Childhood and youth years: 1958 - 1978 Jackson's home in Gary, Indiana, where he spent his childhood years. He was born on August 29, 1958 in Gary, Indiana, USA. The full name of the artist, who was born as the seventh member of a family of nine children, is Michael Joseph Jackson. The singer's father, Joseph Jackson, a factory worker, was passionate about music and played the guitar in his spare time. After marrying his wife Katherine (Scruse) and becoming a large family, he instilled this interest in his children. In the early 60s, her older brothers, Jackie, Tito and Jermaine, formed a band called "The Jacksons", organized by their father, and started singing in clubs and competing in competitions. Jackson's vocal and dance talent was quickly recognized. Despite his young age, he was included in the group with his other brother, Marlon, in 1963, especially for his performance in solo songs.[9] Now consisting of five members, the brothers changed the name of the group to "The Jackson 5
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2023-03-22 15:29:23 UTC

Kenan Nazlı was born in 1974 in İstanbul. He is a butcher. His father is ~~the~~ a butcher and her mother is a housewife. He lived with his mother his father his sister and his brother. When he was a kid a dog bit him

He was working when he went to middle school then he didn't go to high school and he started to worked his father's butcher shop. He got stabbed by a neighbor but now he is fine.He marrıed Nevin Nazlı when he was 23.He had four children and he is a very good dad.
And then he worked Migros.He retired from migros

He opened a butcher shop in Antalya.

1030120609

2023-03-29 14:51:14 UTC

football is the most popular sport in the world. 2 teams of 11 players. 2 teams have the right to change 5 players. 2 rounds of 45 minutes.

Playing football is very enjoyable and fun. I meet with my friends at least once a week and play football. We usually play~~ing~~ at the weekend. If you play football regularly, you will be very energetic and fit.

I recommend to everyone to play football because it is very fun and very healthy. Also, football improves you because it is a team game.

if you want to be fit and energetic. I think you should try

Teachers Note: I think this could be more informative and detailed, please consider writing it more detailed and give me more examples next time :)

1030120592

2023-03-29 15:01:08 UTC

Olympic games, In two separate categories as Summer and Winter Olympic Games , is the world's largest sporting event.
The first modern games were played in 1896 . The winter Olympics began in 1924.
Within the scope of the Olympic Games more than 13.000 athletes in total compete in more than 400 categories.

The Olympics are expensive and costly organizations . The largest part of the costs is the facilities built .

The first condition for an athlete to compete in the Olympics is to have "Olympic Merit " Since the determination of the Olympic Merit rules varies according to different sports and is difficult this authority was left to the International Sports Federations.

Teachers Note; Please consider writing these in your own words next time:)) and remember to give me examples and details about your own experiences and why you love them... See you better Next time!! :D

1020220395

2023-03-29 15:02:40 UTC

Swimming is enjoying but hard sport. The swimmer gets up early every day and goes to the pool with friends. They ~~are~~ swim seven kilometers every day. You can see that you’re getting fitter.( perhaps; If you swim seven kilometers every day, you can see that you are getting fitter)
I started ~~doing swim~~ (to swim) fourteen years ago. I ~~was~~ loved the pool and a teacher invited me to go to the Olympic pool. I am really excited because they ~~were~~ choosen me to race and ı started

I love swimming because ı am feeling like freedom. I’m finding myself in the pool. I'M love races because I’m ambitious.

You’re young or you~~’re~~ have a child thinking about swimming. If you want a healthy start to the weekend, you should try it!

Teacher's Note; Thank you!! there were typos but you got the idea pretty well!!

1140320421

2023-03-29 15:10:44 UTC

Taekwondo is martial arts and I learned to defend myself. It is a Korean sport but it is done in all countries.

When I started doing taekwondo,I was studying in high school. My best friend doing taekwondo and she invented her training, I wanted to do it too. I couldn't at first but tried and now I can do this.

I love taekwondo because it is very stress reliever (relieving) so I am more successful in my studies. It's exciting to have my teammates cheer for me while I am fighting.

Taekwondo is a tough sport but All people can try it.

Teacher's Note; Well done!! It could be more detailed but it's good !! :))

1020220327

2023-03-29 15:13:05 UTC

Boxing is a common and well-known sport and one of the sports that requires individual strength. You only need gloves and shoes.
I started boxing 3 years ago at that time. I was a little stressed, going there was very tiring at first, but my family was supportive and my grandfather loved boxing. I was going 3 days a week and I was feeling good.
I love boxing because it relieves stress and moving with music in the gym is motivating. Being there with my friends allows me to have a good time. I can exercise in the gym.
I think anyone can be there and do this sport. It's a nice place to relax and stay healthy, strong, and young. You can protect yourself against bad people.

Teacher's Note; you are such a storyteller!! I like your way of telling your own story! good job!

1020220337

2023-03-29 15:17:17 UTC

While playing volleyball, my friends and I split into teams of six and meet on the volleyball court every evening.
In the beginning, I was playing basketball with my friends, but we wanted to try new things and make new friends. There was a six-man girls' team that invited us to play volleyball, and we played a boys vs girls game, of course we won two rounds, and we decided to mix the teams, and now it's always like that. we are playing.
I have friends who play very well in my team and the ambition to win is very good, but sometimes unwanted accidents can happen, so it's better to be careful.
Since it moves many muscles at the same time, it is perfect for increasing height and losing weight.
I did many sports such as basketball, running, kickboxing, and orienteering (well running with the map), but my favorite was volleyball, maybe you like it when you do it with the people you love, I recommend you try it.

Teacher's Note; Well done! that was joyful to read!

1030510806

2023-03-29 15:17:24 UTC

This year, the 2nd Kayseri half marathon was organized by the Kayseri metropolitan municipality. İnternational Kayseri Half Marathon was run in three categories as 21K, 10K, and public run. Maroton starts in the square and ends in Mazakaland. Runners come from all over the world. Prizes are given to the top runners.

I started the marathon 2 years ago. I saw an advertisement for the marathon online and decided to participate.

I like doing sports, ~~activity~~ activities and constantly trying new things. it's much more fun and motivating to run with other people. There are artists who give mini-concerts on the side of the road while running, and it is possible to listen to music while running. you can chat with the runners along the way.

if you want to do sports, have fun, and meet new people, don't miss this organization.

Teacher's Note; I loved that! I wish I was there too!! Well done!!

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2023-04-18 01:07:54 UTC

In this article, I will tell you about animal rights. Animal rights are those rights that are provided to animals and they are safeguarded by law. Animals have the right to life, freedom, and protection from suffering. They should be able to live in a safe and healthy environment. They should not be kept in captivity and made to suffer in any way. Every animal has the right to respect of their natural behavior.

It is important that humans recognize the importance of animal rights and actively work to ensure their safety and well-being. We should be aware of the impact our actions have on animals and make sure that we do not cause them any harm. We should also promote education ~~around~~ about animal rights and create awareness among people. It is our duty to make sure that animals are treated with respect.

Teacher's note; You better add more more supportive sentences to your topic sentence to make this writing more detailed but it is good!!

1030510806

2023-04-18 21:12:34 UTC

KAYSERİ AND TOURİSM

Kayseri is a popular tourist destination for a number of reasons. Firstly, Kayseri is famous for its mountains. Mount Erciyes is the symbol of the city and it has a well-known ski resort, There are 34 different ski tracks in Erciyes, on-piste and off-piste, with a total length of 102 km, Ski lovers from all over the world visit Erciyes and on Mount Ali there are national and international paragliding championships. Secondly, there are also many historic buildings, for example, Kayseri Castle, Hunat Hatun Mosque, and the Grand Bazaar around Cumhuriyet Square, with its famous statue of Atatürk. Kayseri also has modern residential areas full off Luxury blocks of flats, shopping centers, and stylish restaurants. It’s near the famous Cappadocia area, so there is a lot of tourists in the summer. Finally, It’s also famous for its food and has many local specialties like pastirma, which is dried beef with spices, and manti, which is a kind of Turkish ravioli. They’re delicious.

Kayseri is a special city that attracts the attention of tourists with its historical sites, ski resort, mountains, and food.

Teacher's note; That is a good writing but you should be a little more careful about spellings :)

1020220337. Kayseri City Road Problems

2023-05-02 16:03:04 UTC

I live in Kayseri. My problems work road to be corrupt because my feet twitch when I walk.
Sometimes I‘m afraid of getting hurt while driving. we complained many times. But no one cared. As a last resort, we wrote to a site called cimer. Many businesses complained about this. Finally, after 5 weeks, they repaired the roads halfway, but they started to form potholes again. I think it's one of the things ~~that has~~ with a lot of commercial importance. I hope one day they will make a complete edit.

teacher's Note; It is too short as I said It could be more detailed but thanks :))

1020220337. I AM TO SCHOOL

2023-05-02 16:14:20 UTC

I go by bus and tram . I’m closing my business first then I go to the station to get on the bus.
Sometimes I’m late but getting out half an hour earlier works. I go to the city centre by bus to get on the tram.it's hard for me sometimes because I might have missed the tram a new tram arrives in at least 10 minutes. I take the tram and go to the university.

Teacher's Note; there are no problems except lack of details!! :)

1020220327

2023-05-03 16:37:34 UTC

This happened a few years ago. I live in Kayseri .
Me and my family decided to visit my grandfather in Sivas.My mother, sister, brother and I got on the bus. After a while I realized that I forgot the photo.I was a little upset and surprised because they were photos of my grandparents.In the end, I thought I couldn't get them anymore and I was unhappy (I was extremely upset or sad could be better if you like). I was down for a while and my mom said I shouldn't be sad. Later, when my grandfather came, I gave him the photos.

Teacher's Note; you can improve your writing with different vocabulary with their synonyms! you should look for them!!

2023-05-03 16:47:35 UTC

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This happened 2 years ago.I live in Kayseri,in Turkey,and my mother and I had booked hotel in İzmir for the summer holiday.
We were going to drive Izmir.

We came to the hotel. It was good example ,hotel,people,food but after 2 days i lost my telephone. My mom was angry to me. I’m called my father . My father called hotel and My telephone finded

It was bad for me, but it was exciting.

1020220337

2023-05-03 16:48:38 UTC

This happened last holiday going to in Antalya:
Early in the morning, my father,my father's is friends,my brother and I set off for Antalya by car. After a while, my father fell asleep one minute later my brother too fell asleep, only the driver and I stayed awake so we wanted to find a facility and sit down and drinks iced tea or coffee and we called a waiter, I told the waiter I wanted tea but he said there was no tea, only a can of coke left. We bought 4 cokes and got in the car and they were still asleep. We set off, but we missed the turn, and we had to go back luckily we realized before entering the highway, a little while before our war, we took another break, the cokes were in the car and we ate left, but while we were on the road, suddenly there was a sound from the trunk *bengggg* and we were very scared, after a while, a sound came again and the arm next to us exploded from the heat, our faces and we became coke all over so terrible journey.

Teacher's Note; Good job!!

1020220337 CRATER (2023)

2023-05-18 15:23:13 UTC

I just watched this movie. The film was directed by Kyle Patrick Alvarez. It stars Mckenna Grace,Isaiah Russell, Billy Barrett,Hero Hunter and Thomas Boyce including young people such as.
The movie takes place on the moon's surface, it is one of the science fiction movies, it is a movie about the year 2257.
In the movie, one of the workers working on the moon to go to a life center called Omega wanted to send his son to Omega as death compensation, after he died, his son had to go, but he could not go to the place he promised to go to his father, so they went with his friends by stealing a vehicle and put his father's ashes next to his mother. they finally passed out and when he opened his eyes he was in Omega.
it was a nice movie about friendship and the importance of the world.

Teacher's Note; It is great writing but I think you could add your opinions more!! But it's great!!

1020220327

2023-05-18 16:30:56 UTC

The 1975 film Hababam Sınıfı is his first feature film. Names such as Kemal Sunal, Münir Özkul, Adile Naşit, Tarık Akan, Halit Akçatepe take the leading roles. The film, which tells the funny and sometimes touching stories of where he lived in Private Çamlıca High School, is the first film in the Hababam Sınıfı series.
It's the naughtiest class in school.
The place featured in the movie as Private Çamlıca High School is not actually a school. Adile Sultan Pavilion, located in the Validebağ Grove in Üsküdar, was used as the venue for the film.
The subject of the movie Hababam Sınıfı, student lives are based on mischief and laziness.
When I watched the movie, I had a lot of fun and sometimes it was emotional and the actors were also very talented.
The shooting site is now used as a museum. I recommend everyone to watch it, it's great for comedy lovers.

Teacher's Note; It's really good and you did an AMAZING job!!! Keep it going!

1030510806

2023-06-05 20:43:07 UTC

SUGAR
Consuming too much sugar is not good for human health. Firstly, sugar is indispensable for families with children. Candy is given when children cry or as a reward. This behavior is wrong because society is accustomed to sugar from a young age. Secondly, scientific studies show that our health is seriously threatened by the sugar we put in our tea, coffee or the sweets we eat every day. Excess sugar collects in the liver, obesity, heart diseases, and impairs oral and dental health. About fifteen percent of Turkey in 2022 has diabetes.Finally, sugar due to its pleasing feature, releases the hormone of happiness and is addictive, resulting in the feeling of constantly eating sugar.

In conclusion For a healthy life, we should eliminate sugar from our lives or consume sugar at a minimum level.

1020220327

2023-06-14 09:15:14 UTC

Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing top work in a fıldır in organization administration.
I worked in the wedding organization for 1 year before,I can speak Turkish and English.I have not been working for 2 weeks.
Attach my CV.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sümeyye Öztürk

teacher's note; you should choose a job to apply and tell it explicitly, ''I'm writing for the ---- position'' for example, and not talk about your experience since you already attached your cv, you should tell why you want this job.